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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#521

oh my GOD what an update it was breath taking blew my mind away this is not the first time I m reading contract marriage but this is something where i'd not bring myself to hate Arnav for his offer

juhi's magic thank u u r the one who'd do such thing here what I felt khushi's family had their hand in making this decision oh man he offered her sex now all that sex talk how besharam raizada was poor shi hell embarrassed all blushing

I want to kick his a** for making poor shi so uncomfortable 😉

but seriously I enjoyed the most that little conversation

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Arathy-V

@Arathy-V

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#522

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U simply made my day..A freaking 2 part update and that too a day before the predesigned date..Not that i complain😆 I was pleasantly surprised..

Arnav is sooo manipulative..no wonder he is a self made millionaire..But back to present, he is sooo besharam. I have a feeling that he already has true feelings for Khushi😃

I seriously hate Payal..How could she be so selfish😡 Loved Khushi's reply to her..She need not take shit from anyone

I totally completely madly adore this Khushi..Infact i love a strong woman protagnist and im happy to come cross one here..

I know its kind teeny bit early to ask for an update but i cant stop myself..Such is the addiction i have to your stories..Im a sucker for happy endings and i looove you for giving us HEAs😃

Edited by arathyvr - 11 years ago

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rith123

@rith123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#523

Main Shayar tho nahin,
Magar aye hasin,
Jabse dekha maine Shaadi ke Arnav aur Khushi ko,
Shaayari aa gayee.

Ok. Res.
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1. Ok. First, updates too long? Pfft. How is that even a problem? To sort of modify a quote made by a certain Mr Raizada, "The massive, the better." This is for the updates. Or not.
2. This story is just mind blowingly fantastically superbly awesome.
3. I cannot believe Payal called her selfish. I always always side with younger siblings all the time because I am one too, but not this time.
4. I think it's important for Khushi to be selfish. I think it is important for everyone to be a little selfish sometimes.
5. And her decision is practical. It is lovely to be all righteous, but it is definitely not practical.
6. Arnav's plan to send everyone to the temple. Lol.
7. Why does Khushi believe that she isn't the kind of person Arnav will be attracted to?
8. He can't control himself if he's on the same bed for a week. Someone's got it bad.
9. I adore Arnav's devotion to his family.
10. And Khushi's devotion to hers.
11. I want more of this story! Lots more! :D
12. Brilliant update. As usual. I don't know why I'm even saying this anymore.
13. I also decided that every time I comment, I'm going to make sure there's a song or part of a song in the comment. Just to maintain the whole Shaadi atmosphere.
14. Bring on the next update! Whenever possible!
15. Have a safe journey!
16. :D

Edited by rith123 - 11 years ago

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entertain

@entertain

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Amazing start. I read all your stories,some of them twice. Your story telling style is amazing, I get involved with your characters as I reading.

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Oh. My. THIS Arnav...

If I loved the way you shed a light to their relationship, and then, shared the inkling of a marriage contract with them, THEN, I am absolutely thrilled and excited after reading this chapter. They meet. He is basically shown a mirror by her, even though, she really doesn't know him, but then again, society and arnav singh raziada seem to share a different relationship all together, but we all know she will get to know him. a lot. very soon. or probably has already started to, especially with that quick fire round at the end. she is in for a roller coaster ride. and SO ARE WE :D

I already know that this tale will have the angst, the love, the passion, and perhaps also a heartbreak followed by "getting to know each other" "sharing the same room and bed"...but I think it'll be wonderful to read it and imagine it all :)

Have a safe and fun trip to India! Would do anything to escape this snow and -41 degrees celsius weather around me!!

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#526

loved it a very enjoyable update...keep it up

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#527

terrific update. the longer the better;))
hope you have a nice stay.

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#528

My My My Juhi, I am completely entranced.

In terms of dialogues, narrative somehow I think you have outdone yourself this time. What makes it more special is - you just taken common IPK story thread without any mysteries and still have us spellbound.

I just cant seem to wait to read the story !

But I am that you smartly added flashback and postponed the consummashun.. 😆

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Natalia

@Natalia

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#529

An update as wonderful as this can never be too long!!!

As I scrolled through it while reading it, all I could subconsciously pray for is ' please let this be a little be longer.. let this not end.. as I am impatient to know what happens in their lives'!

As I have said earlier, I find this brazen Arnav highly refreshing and interesting! And a career oriented biotech Khushi just inspiring! One may have perceived Khushi's acceptance of the contract sacrificial, however, I likes Khushi's different perception of THIS being selfish! She did it for herself,(although in both ways I think that she is sacrificing)! I like how her mind works.

P.S. I like the idea of the color 'Red' in the story is shown as an irritant for KHushi! I too have started to be annoyed at it's over zealous importance in the stories.

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#530

Awesome update!!! Loved the way contract was drawn between the two of thm without any force. Cannot wait for them to fall in love😊 have a wonderful trip!!! You can never write updates that are too long, cannot get enough of the updates!!!!