An ArHi SS: Shaadi *Completed, Moved to Open blog*

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

awesome :D
OMG I'm loving this SS!
Nani arranged a party for Arnav to select his bride!
Its like a modern swayamvar no? :P
I loved the conversion of Arnav & Khushi at the party!
Payal,how could she call khushi selfish :O
She's a brat!.
Arnav proposed a contract marriage?
Trust Arnav to do something like this!
Both of them decided to get married for their family!
The last part of their conversion made me blush :P
Besharam Arnav ;)
Thanks for the update!
Can't wait to know what happens next :D

P.S. I'm happy with your long update :D

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

OMG Juhi, I just love you. You are amazing writer. When I was reading this chapter, I could just visualise everything as if it was happening right in front of me.

Coming to the characters, I love both Arnav and Khushi here. both have risen from the scrath, both care for their families and Khushi is quite an intelligent girl.

Payal is the mean one here. Maybe she is not important character afterall.

Would love to know what happens in future. Maybe they will fall in love??? I love the way Arnav teases Khushi.😉

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Wow another story from me. My My, lucky us!

I loved the prologue, and the excerpt --- intrigued me to no end. And thinking this is different from your previous stories was making me much less patient in terms of waiting for an update. I am glad you updated a day early :) Thanks :)

Though you say this story will have less mysteries, I already see so many things that look enigmatic. First of all, the characters, they look straightforward, but they are not. I mean both Arnav and Khushi seem to have multiple layers, and their chemistry is rocking right from their first meeting. I am looking forward to how they make their contract work.

The story, secondly, it seems all will be nice and happy now that they are married, but I am sure you have planned something. It just doesnt look like all is revealed now. I am waiting for some nice revelations, even if by your means they may be less than your earlier stories.

The bed conversation was amazing. These two are firehouses, I bet they wouldnt have remained so aloof, had Arnav not decided to return to States. His honestly does help her too. I can see she is as much affected as him. Aaah I love Arnav's straight questions about her being a virgin. Brilliant scene, you just nailed it with their conversation.

Well, the updates are never too long for me. In fact I love long updates :P

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

I just realized that now you will only update on wednesdays, that means only once a week :(

but well, fantastic update. Suddenly arnav doesn't feel like as big a douche as before. he seems kind of genuine now, I guess their initial meetings helped. this is very different, simple yet complex, and as always beautifully written. But for once, I really like khushi better than arnav in a story, and that's quite rare, so kudos on making me admire khushi so much.

love,
Sonia

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

OMG that was one amazing chapter... loved it... love the convo btw the 2... oh khushi is the elder one here... loved garima she is supporting mother... oh n arnav.. he is a man on mission... oh the reference to the color Red again :)

the last convo was hilarious :D

oh n abt the length of the update... i always feel if i could read lil more today :)

so no its never too long for me... always a lil short :D

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

I like how you cleared everything up in this chapter, so now we can move straight into the present.

"I'm planning to make you an offer you can't refuse, Ms.Gupta."
It was like a godfather reference ahahah also i loved the humour towards his grandmothers dying wish or the fact that he has to marry in order to get his shares. I'm really looking forward to this story and I want khushi to loosen up a little..Arnav is so released and calm

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

I am absolutely in LOVE with this ArShi now. The fierce, modern,independent Khushi and an Awesome,Naughty Arnav is a Great combination...They are going to burn IF. I loved the first meeting a lot...the way khushi expressed her thoughts about Arnav was too good.

But I really loved the smug Arnav on the part where he proposes the marriage. I love the way you write It makes me feel all the things the characters feel and see things through their point of view.

Arnav loves Anjali and Nani more than himself. The guy has everything in the world but the people he achieved all these for don't want it. Arnav and Khushi are quite similar. Both had struggled in life for what they are now, sacrificed a lot for theur family & love their siblings more than anything. Khushi is doing this for payal, she isn't being selfish or greedy by accepting Arnav's proposal but for once she just doesn't want to give up on her dreams for other's happiness. Which is completely right. And the fact she doesn't want his money is quite cleared by her refusal of the alimony money. She is too practical & faced reality to dream for a fairytale happily ever after.

But the best part of the chapter was surely the present part. The conversation was hilarious. I am already in love with this too-straight forward-for-his-own good Raizada. That man is outrageously sexy & smug. It was an awesome ending.

I loved the concept of the story. It was awesome. And I love your writing a lot...A lot means LIKE A LOOOT. You actually put life into words. I feel like everything Is happening infront of my eyes and I actually feel everything they are feeling in the story. Which is a great talent you possess. You should seriously think of a writing career. You can absolutely give Mill's & Boon writers a run for their money.

Already waiting for next Wednesday to come. And a HUGE thanks to whoever gave you this challenge of this story.

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

I have told you before and saying it again, you write beautifully!
loved the super long update
thanks 😃

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Scrabella

@Scrabella

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#499

Ok so OMG ... * f a i n t*

How can you possibly put in words every deep desirable fantasy that goes thru a woman's mind. I don't even think sexy , confident go-getters like your Arnav exist in real life. Most are just sell outs to what their family tells them or else make their own choices and then are too pussy to possess them and prove to everyone else that this is what they wanted. This is a khushi I can relate to. Socially average background with her head on her shoulders. She actually wants to go to school and follow her career plans.

I'm glad you referred to Arnav as a magnate as opposed to a tycoon, not my favorite word there.. ;)

The thoroughness of the contract tells me how Arnav is now in a secure place in life. He is assured of the outcome that every tangent of his contract could take. He's even wanting to follow up with Khushi incase she's left in a rut! You'd almost think he's invincible ,like that force of nature you just called him.

And these verbal battles will ultimately lead to ultimate sex I'm thinking. Can't wait for more.