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ace13

@ace13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

simply wow... do update soon..too good to resist

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CrazyArshiFan

@CrazyArshiFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

I have said this before and I am saying it again : " You are simple the best"

Very addictive words.

Can't wait for the next update.

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Part 2!!
Part 2 was simply marvellous juhi!
Though initially when i started reading it i somehow wasnt convinced with khushi's reasons to give in! I mean there was nothing strong there for her to simply jump at the offer n grab it or give in to the temptation! So i was like she can give it a miss!
But then came the conversation with her mother n m glad that she took the offer for herself! To live her life, fulfil her dreams n experience the way she had ever wanted too! She wasnt much into marriage n love etc as it is! So i was glad that she took it up fr her own selfish reasons than for for her sister or sacrificing for others!
N must say Arnav has been very thorough and given every aspect proper attention! However sadly he failed to take in to account his body and heart's response to khushi!! Now all the calculations seem to have been jumbled!

You knw at one point the story had started reminding me of ' hum apke dil mai rehte hai' till Arnav's self control started to slip!
Now i know its not going to be same n i have already started looking forward to their encounters!!
N i really like Arnav!! If you are listening arnav then pls i like you n your character here!!
Fantastic part 2! Thanks for writing these marvellous parts!
Loved them!!!

Waiting for chapter 2!

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Juhi!!!!!!!!
That was awesome...
I must admit this is my first time reading the Narrative genre story...But I loved the both parts...Fannatttassttic one...
This Arnav Singh Raizada is enigma...Audacious,,Bold,,Teasing one,,,Devoted to his family,,sincere,,extremly practical...His contract was convincing enough for Khushi.*for me too,,I guess I would have signed it then n there*...
But its fun to read Khushi's thoughts...Why would we complain about Long Updates...Infact while reading it, i wanted to appreciate u for lengthy update...becoz a reader never gets bored of length of story...So keep it of this length n may be longer than this one...hehhhe...
Have a safe journey...I have already started waiting for next update...

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Wow...what an amazingly superb update...

Starting from their first meet...the contract conversation...in the end...the bedroom conversation..just AWSOME ... They show the shades...ESP or Arnav...the first meet...ASR the world knows.. The second Arnav Singh Raizada mostly with tinges of brilliant business man in it...and the last convo...only ARNAV... Poor Khushi...she might have never thought she would have to go thrusuch embarrassing situation on first night...

But looking at the ay they both r attracted physically each other...I wonder how long their bedrooms would be separate...

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Pyewest

@Pyewest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Omg. That was awesome. Loved the story. I'm sure u have heard it before but still ur work is amazing. Can't get enough of it. 👏 😊

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keyboard123

@keyboard123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Great chapter! Loved both parts! Can't wait until the next update!

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

Fantastic update

Khushi and Arnav first meeting is very interesting.

Arnav is a perfect businessman, he assure himself through every way to choose Khushi as his wife.

I like khushi's character, she is responsible, self made like Arnav, traditional yet modern and educated.

Arnav like Khushi in a balance but how did he got attracted to her and that too to so extend that he is willing to leave her alone so that he could avoid her presence.

Khushi would find hard to control herself around him.

This marriage of convenience will be fun to read.

Story is going great.

Waiting for the next part.

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831628

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

Juhi!Juhi!Juhi!

Fantabulous story. Simply loving it to bits

😊

Viji

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RainyDays

@RainyDays

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Posted: 11 years ago

#480

Shrewd Arnav into play ...He just offers what he knows she wants and knows she cannot refuse... But I do love the passionate and faithful obedience to his family .

I love this brazen Khushi who is independent, accomplished and has a rational thinking. She has sacrificed so much and faced so many difficulties in life , And the contract just brought that much needed freedom from the clutches of suffering and sacrificing...

But I fear truly that at the end of the year , their egos will keep them from confessing their love and feelings for each other... And ultimately separation will bring them together again...

By the way, I love this flirty and straightforward Arnav and an equally strong minded and focused Khushi .

One Ques. - Will Arnav and Khushi be living together in California till Khushi completes her Phd ?

Loved the Update !😃

Amazing !😊

Looking Forward to the next update !

Safe and Happy Journey !😊

Edited by RainyDays - 11 years ago