ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1)

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Saijel Shah

@Sarun_4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Loved the update!! ❤️

That was a heart wrenching update, Arshi being tracked down and chased by the enemies. For a moment I thought they would be caught. Luckily, they both escaped... just about!

I never expected Rebel to die, that was very sad. Not only was he Arnav's companion but also a friend to Khushi. 😭

Look forward to the next update!!

Edited by Sarun_4ever - 11 years ago

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crazyfanofdsdv

@crazyfanofdsdv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

amazing update

so glad that they have talked out their problems

wish rebel didn't have to die

looking ahead to see what lies next for them

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keyboard123

@keyboard123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

nice update! but poor rebel..

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

I was so happy when I started reading the chapter

they managed to talk and erase all MU

and then Rebel died

I am sooo sad

I understand your argument and I do think that you are right: things like this do happen in real life

but I'm still sad

anyway, as always, amazing chapter

you are a great writer

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@.Boss.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Oh my!! can't fathom that rebel is gone! the shining black stallion would always have a special place in my heart! I am glad arshi are fine! they have gone through a lot! continue soon!