ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1)

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

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congrats on new thread amazing omg rebel noo omg im just speechless at the end cant believe he's gone he took a bullet for khushi n those monsters kept shooting at him soo sad I still cant get over it im like in shock mode right now n khushi n arnav stopping a child marriage n finally the misunderstanding is gone arnav believes her but don't like her way but still he trust her n they r back to that couple that is madly in love which never went away but now they r once again expressing it n just being together without arguing every second hope khushi finish her mission soon n get rid of that ring soon so they can become a&k but it going to be very hard since shyam is on their trail n they r alone n on foot too cant wait to read the next update

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LazilyAnonymous

@LazilyAnonymous

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Heyyy...I just read this FF!!! ITS MIND BLOWINGGG ... LOL I was supposed to study for exams but I kinda...maybe...definitely got distracted!!! 😆

I LOVE LOVE LOVE Arnav in this story!!! Dark Prince he is alright... <333

I love how Aakash is the villain. That idea is very different because everyone sees him as a mellow, chasmish and sweet type of a guy. Love the ideawa

LOL Gonna comment on this part instead of all of them :P

I loved how you showed Khushi standing up against child marriage. It is a huge crisis that needs to be dealt with. Children are meant to play pranks, have fun, and just LIVE...They shouldn't be dealing with a spouse and take care of them. I know why Khushi was so emotional :( But loved how you had this incorporated into the story.

Oh Shit...rebel died 😲 Whyyy... I loved that lil guy!!! He supported Arnav in his worst times and now he is dead. I hope Arnav makes them pay for it. 😡 😈 I loved how Arnav broke down in front of Khushi. It shows how Khushi is also strong .. especially for Arnav.

I agree with you. I like how its not all roses and sunshine...not that anything is wrong with that. I love those stories too. But I like the dose of realism in this story.

This is awesomely written!!! Love it so far and will be thinking about this story 😆 Thanks a lot...my exams are screwed 😳 🤣

Please continue soon :)

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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Damn I cried! why rebel though.. :( he was one of my favorites..now the main question is how these two are gonna travel..and whats going to happen next?