The Enigmas Of A Kiss : A Swaron and Kriyansh FF (chapter3 in page 14) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Karry you are never going to underestimate your write-ups after this !
I mean it
Girl you are so boody awesome at writing you realize that ?
The storyline , the plot and the characters are so well portrayed ... and I loved this chapters to the bits !

Well I am not a SwaRon fan but I am sure I am going to love the Swaron of yours ... The way you have given layers to them ...esp Shafron , their state of mind , their strong mindsets and the depth ...Its frigging amazing

The best part about SS in ur write up is Swyam loves her for her flaws and not for the superficial perfection...They way you scupted his thoughts for her amazing !

And Rey's character ...I am enjoying it to the bits ...You ought to have some great sense of humor because his scene made me laugh ...The crispiness and charming personality of his works like a magnet <3

All the three characters are strong and gripping Karry , awaiting for Kria's character sketch ..
Update soon because now I am glued to this stroy

And Thank a lot for the dedication 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
awesome update
loved it
waiting for nxt update
ur an amazing writer
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Woow just read the first part n its Awesome.
Loved Swaron's n Rey pov.
Waiting for next part
update ASAP n pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Firstly... Im waiting for Kria... hayee...
The story is really amzing ya... and the way its going...

im soo into it... <3 <3

Rey's character infact... Swaron... 👏 love it... <3
sorry short comment exams... Err <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
For a split second i thought that it was actually Kria who called... he he
I just loved your way of describing things...

It was amazing...

The words you used were so in sync with the mood of the story... :D :D

Rey was super fun... :D :D

Waiting for kria to enter and the story to kickstart..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
amazing n mind-blowing update..

rey part was funny..

sharon strong headed no non-sense girl wnats to know dirt abt swayam n asks rey's help before rejecting swayam coz her father her only family s getting weak day by day..

swayam's character wat he thinks abt sharon n d flashback was brilliantly n beautifully explained n penned..

waiting for kria's entry n KR story to kick start.. also read wats gonna happen to swaron
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Awesome update 😊
Sharon want to get rid of Swayam
Rey helping her
The flashback was well penned
Edited by SanskritiS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
awesome update
nicely written
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Amazing work dear...I loved it sooo much...
Your work is a really different one, different but Wonderful.
I actually can't find words to describe the beauty of your write-up.
Truly Superb!
Update soon and do pm me.
Regards,
Soha!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
kishi deariee...

awsm awsm awsmmm strt.. prt1 is such a roller coaster ride.. i juz loved how u depicted all three major character's conditions.. waiting eagerly for kri's prt.. update soonish..😊😊

p.s. - i just loved d selection of title.. gr8 job there too..👍🏼

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