The Enigmas Of A Kiss : A Swaron and Kriyansh FF (chapter3 in page 14)

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Karishma

@Mystique.Kishi

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

@MAHI_ thank you, my doll. but honestly, it is nothing compared to the beauty of your one shots.

@anki_ thank you so much. but you my darling have a completely different writing style which is awesome. looking forward to collaborate with you in the future. 😊😊

@alex- thank you. i love kria which might be a bit apparent by my dp. i have big plans for kriya and kriyansh, trust me :-)😃

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Nice update kria ki asi halat hui kese n love sw being possesive for her n rey n sh dono ke parts bhi awsome he

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Kashish

@Couch_Potato

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

My place!

RES!

UN-RES

I READ IT and I freaking LOVED it. Sooo many things. I have to run outta the door so I can't tell you in complete detail but I promise to come back and so but DUDE. SHARON AND SWAYAM? I love them. In fact, currently I love those two far more than Rey!

I especially love the way you have detailed and built up Sharon's character. The tashan, the attitude - she's got just the right vibe and diva quotient. I could just see Sneha Kapoor in my head. I loved the way you started this part. About how she wasn't a pacer. The spine of steel and high profile balls had me grinning.

I also loved the convo between Rey and Sharon. THAT is how friends who have known each other for a lifetime talk. No curtesy, no hi hello miss yous. I enjoyed how in-character that was.

And can I just say I love your Swayam. In fact I love him sooo much more than Rey and that's saying something cuz you know how much I adore Rey IRL. I love that bit about muses and painters and how he is driven to capture her human side, her imperfections, her blemishes.

I keep saying I love this and that and it's becoming redundant but main kya karoon? It was all so amazing. The party flashback? The way you described Sharon through Swayam's eyes. So gorgeous. And then the kiss. I was soo taken by the emotional/sentimental/magical connotations you have attached to it.

He was lost and suddenly he found himself. Their lips moved in perfect sync while his heart threatened to burst out of its cage. He held her impossibly close afraid to let her go. Afraid he will lose himself again if he did. His lips were on a quest of their own as they tried to unravel the mystery that surrounded her.

There is something so soft and sensual about this.

All and all, I loved this whole part so much. *sigh* Believe it or not, I'm falling so completely in love with your Swayam and Sharon. They appear to be such awesome people.

And Kriya! I'm sooo curious about Kriya and her bechari halaat. Do write more soon. You know I'll be on your case about it anyway! 😉

Edited by Couch_Potato - 11 years ago

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Itz such a Freaking Awesome update ya..
I'm in luv wid this FF
U r an incredible writer deary 🤗
Desperately waiting for next part
Continue Super Soon

Edited by --Shukti-- - 11 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

woww this one was fabulous👏

d way u write s simply amazinggg⭐️👏

m lovingg this❤️

continue soonish😊

and thankooo soo much for d scrap and riya for d pm🤗

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

the chapter was wonderful... well written ...
i am serious like to read more... do continue soon and pm me

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

res

unres

wat a update girl you are killing me wit ur updates

it was flawless n mesmerising

luved how you showed the intro wit sharon
keeping her character just the same bold, upfront n strong .

i luved how you projected rey n sharon's bond the cool besties

but the portion tat stole my heart

wud definitely be swayam n sharon's kiss ☺️

i was completely bewitched to see sharon from swayam 's eyes

tat was one hell of a description

excited to see wat happened wit kriya

n how the story will shape up from tis point

do update soon

looking forward to ur updates 😃

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

nice part.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

U wrote so perfectly well
loved it to the whole
beautifuly written n well potrayed

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

awsome concept &cs

sharon kiss swayam

kri in love with swayam

and wnt to rey fr kissing lesson

awsome updt

cont soon

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