The Enigmas Of A Kiss : A Swaron and Kriyansh FF (chapter3 in page 14)

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

hey kishi...

just nw read all parts n they r superb...

i m so loving the story...

waiting eagerly for next part...

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Kashish

@Couch_Potato

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

You know what's the strength of a good writer? When your prose flow seamlessly. When the dialogues seem so natural that they enhance your characters. When the reader forgets it's an imagined account and feels like it's a record of an actual event. And you my dear have checked all those boxes and how!

There are bits where your characters seem so human, so real - I love your Kriya. I love the insecurity, the rationale, the logic, the fear. I love how human and natural those feelings are. I love that she is smart enough to tell its not love and yet brave enough to not let that deter her from the comfortable. I love how subtly her bullied childhood plays a huge role in it but it's implied not stated out loud. I love her quirks and her spirit, her flamboyance if I may call it.

I love the fact that no where has she looked and Rey and been all taken by his hotness. I'm soo glad that hasn't happened. He's a bully, she would fear him not be taken by his handsome looks or even notice him like that. I loved how she noticed Swayam. He's her savior. It's natural. Ahh. Sooo many tiny things.

Also I loved her rationale behind why Sharon wasn't a good idea. It just all fits together so well. The way you have interlaced and built on the story really shines. I love how the story is the soul here. And the painting bit. Wow. The connection, the unspoken deep bond between the two, the PURITY of Swayam's feelings. It's just all so beautiful. I can't wait for Sharon to come face to face with it. She will have no idea what hit her. I'm sooo excited for them to meet. And this bit here,

as if the painter had tried to engage and fuse both infernos and tornadoes together in the canvas.

I want to eat this bit.

Also gorgeous last line. Such a foreboding statement. So in character. *sigh*

I loved this update. And loved the length of it. And the depth of it. And just everything of it.

Needless to say, I'm eagerly awaiting the new one! Get writing. NOW!

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

loed update.. awesome..

kria-neha's ocnvo n her reasins she has to put d plan into effect n d reason she gave to neha for doing this..

swayam came as her savior n she depends upon him n if sharon can make him hooked in 1 look she was afraid she ll lose him forever coz of d party night incident was penned well..

kria was not charmed by rey's handsome look but she was bullied by him n she was searching for a savor to help her n there came swayam to her help..

now she s at her childhood bully n wants help from him..

waiting for KR meet n c wat happens between them..

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FareedaArSha

@FareedaArSha

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Kishi this is awesome. Eagerly waiting for kriyansh meet. Loving Rey the dude and KriYam.loved the update :)

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

it was an awesum update

as a writer you definitely struck

a chord

rey n kriya character were very nicely penned

i luved how sharon ws admiring swayam's painting

all in all a very well formed pleasing update

do update soon 😛

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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KriYaansh960

@KriYaansh960

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

This is simply amazing *_*

if this is your first then i cant wait to read more ^_^

im loving how the story is shaping up to be :)

Please continue soon and PM me kay ?

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Nikiee

@Nikiee

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Omg awsomee story ! Do continue ;)
& Updateee !!!!

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KriYaansh960

@KriYaansh960

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Update? has this been shelved or something? 😕

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RIA

@PAB-230

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

please update the next part soon

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