The Enigmas Of A Kiss : A Swaron and Kriyansh FF (chapter3 in page 14) - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
@everybody- thank you so much guys. all of you are really wonderful people. your comments are always so very encouraging.
@khwahish- mahi, i swear, someday you will make my cheeks combust.
Edited by luvarsha20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Nice concept
awesome update
update soon and please pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
beautifully written
loved the description of all the characters, especially that of Sharon
waiting for the next chapter...
and thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Pehle to i am sorry
i am late.. itna late ki chapter 1 bhi a gaya 😲

it was amazing
the way you are describing things 👏
beautiful description
it is tremendous.. i kept on reading and didn't realize when the chapter ended.
it was mind blowing awesome.

eagerly waiting for the next chapter
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Before you guys read this, i want to say sorry. Sorry for this utter crapfest that i have penned down. You see, my laptop broke down and that got me quite depressed. So, please bear with me. Also, i cannot dedicate this chapter to any of my friends for all of them are brilliant writers and this chapter is a joke. However, I would like to thank Kashish, Anki and Mahi for being such darlings. Also, a very special mention to Riya (i.e RiyaArshaKapoor) who pmed the links of my works. It is a very tiring job so thank you being so kind Riya. You are a gem of a person. 😊 ALSO, A BIG THANKS TO THE READERS WHO LIKE AND COMMENT. Some of the comments are so very heartful, it makes my whole day. read on...

Rey was at his wit's end by the time he had stepped into the academy.He had finished gathering info from his sources and was flabbergasted at the outcome. How can any guy maintain an image so untarnished? Had the guy never slipped? He had scrounged for every possible source of filth but in vain. The guy had a sparkling clean record. His only hope now was to convince Sharon to the alternative.

Sharon was doing sun salutations as part of the warm up before starting the class. Until a sudden clamor broke out in the room. The hushed giggles and quiet babbling meant one thing. The bas***d was here.Dressed in a white shirt that was stretched across his wide shoulders and black jeans that hugged his muscular legs snuggly, Reyansh Singhania casually leaned against the entrance to the class. Sharon looked back at the group of girls she was training and they were all busy... either fixing their hair or throwing coy looks his way. Pathetic. No wonder the guy's ego was the size of a house. "You. Me. Office. Now." Sharon glowered marching out of the room. Reyansh smirked while promptly following behind her. The lady was in a foul mood already. And the information he was going to relay was going to piss her off even more. He wanted to be out of the line of fire.

"I don't believe such pitiful girls could even exist."she fumed. "One smile and they are ready to prostrate before you in nine different positions." Rey chuckled at the hardcore feminist statement. "Nine poses? Really Sharon? That was the best you could come up with? I thought you would be a bit more creative considering you are a dancer and all." Sharon rolled her eyes. Trust the guy to pick up a perverted meaning in the most innocent of statements.

"What did you find?" Sharon asked outright not keen on cutting corners. Immediately Reyansh sobered up. "Sorry, gal. The guy has an infuriatingly clean past. There is nothing there to help us." Sharon shoulders slumped in defeat as her last hope to avoid the union was dissolved. Rey sensed the misery in Sharon's form and did not like it one bit. "Try talking to the guy, Sharon. Perhaps, that would help" Rey said softly. Help from a stranger??? How was she supposed to manage that??

Rey had expected for Sharon to spit fire. That he could take. But this...this sudden desolation emanating from her was more than he could stand. It just served to make him more determined. He has to get Sharon out of this mess. No, scratch that. He will get Sharon out of this mess.

read below...

Thanks for reading this. I will not ask any of you to comment or like for I know this was bad. The story is slow but I promise to give kriyansh and swaron meet the next chapter. I just wanted to establish a proper base. Also, again I am very sorry.I will try my best to make the next chapter a bit more palatable. ALSO, ANYONE WHO WANT PMS MIGHT WANT TO SENT ME A BUDDY REQ. IT MAKES THE JOB EASIER.

MUCH LOVE,

KISHI

Edited by luvarsha20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Good base but i am not getting one thing how did he not find kriya in swayam history and also rey and sharon donno who swayam is?
Thats a bit confusing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: alex754

Good base but i am not getting one thing how did he not find kriya in swayam history and also rey and sharon donno who swayam is?
Thats a bit confusing


DON'T WORRY. ALL OF THESE HAS BEEN KEPT IN MIND AND WILL UNFOLD IN THE KRIYANSH MEET NEXT CHAPTER...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Gosh...itni apologies...girl apologies part was much lengthy den the update...
Its okay...itna manage kr sakte hain tumhare readers..u do hv a life outside..
Its completely fine...
Apart from it...
Update was nice i wud say nd is making me curious for wat u hv stored in for us...
Waiting for next..
Take ur time bt try fast
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Beautiful part will be waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
RES
imma reading😆

UNRES..

okay, so, Kishi, LOVE YOU BABE... I can Not be considered to even think of being in the same level of Kash and Mahi.. they are, like really, BRILLIANT... but, as you allready did, thank u soo much.. but you know you are awesome, right???😊

itna chotu sa update?? man nahi bhara.. but offcourse I can understand, you had to deal with the real life aswell.. and well apart from that, this one is another splendid update..👏

This chapter, yess, this chapter made me wanting MORE...it felt like a delicious starter, which left us craving for the next chapter...
a nice ShaRey convo, and a sexy Reyaansh.. yushh, this chapter sure was nice..

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT...😆

Edited by anki_22 - 11 years ago

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