*Completed* Th# 1 ArHi SS: Revenge

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Omg omg omg !! Another new story by you ?

Gosh...this is the best New Years Gift i got this time...

Seriously !

And guess what's the best part ??

For the first time i'm joining your story from the very beginning !

Yeyyy !!!

And now comes the story 'Revenge' - Damn ! The first chapter left me totally blushing in the beginning..! Their intense love making...made me think that they're madly in love with each other !

But uh-huhh ! By the end of the chapter i realized that this is gonna me one intense ,super duper interesting and mysterious (as of in the first chappy) story !

I just can't wait to read more...more n more n a lot more !

So well this story is about some revenge that Khushi wants to extract from Arnav ??

And she is acting to be in love with him..or does she really love him ?

But Arnav does 'actually' love her..! Well that's what it seemed in the chapter..

And the revenge...Hmmm...what can it be ??

Ok , as you said , this SS is somehow based on the fourth promo , even though i have seen it a gazillion times , but i'm running to watch it again just to find some clue using my detective mind..

*sigh*

Plz plz plz update it soon !

Would be waiting eagerly to find out the actual 'maajhra' !

PS : HaPpY NeW YeAr ! 😃

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Ahhh another story!!! And what a start!

It was super HOT but then there was an eeriness in the background. Loving the revenge concept! Obviously Arnav must have done something devastating to leave her wanting revenge. She can't keep away from him yet she's set in her ways. She WILL have her revenge and nothing will come in her way.

Looking forward to the next update. Do continue soon.

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

I loved the banner pic... And I truly thinks that this particular promo or it's tag line has ever been used to its fullest meaning "Kash me tumse nafrat kar patient , Kash me tumse pyaar kar pata" ... Your story is bang on its meaning of a tag line ... So what does Khushi means by the marks on her body is not made by her husband only ??
Very nice start ...loved it

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! A new SS by you😳

I'm dancing already

I loved the first chap, and I'm already in love with the intense love story which would unfold with time in front of our eyes soon❤️

Thanks for sharing another wonderful creation with us🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter already

Update soon😉

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divya_divs

@divya_divs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

firstly HAPPY NEW YEAR😊 CONGRATULATIONS on ur new story😛 now coming 2 the update, its quite interesting 2 know that the tables have turned i.e; khushi is gonna take revenge on arnav which is very rare😃 but looking at the plot,i feel that our poor arnav will have 2 go through a lot in the near updates when khushi will break his heart😕 i can't wait 2 know more about this revenge😛 but one statement made me flutter slightly "But all marks were not given by him alone"????????? what do u mean by that??oh god!!!!!! i just hope that nothing worse happened 2 khushi or khushi didn't do something worse just for the sake of revenge🥱 because if that is so, arnav will be devastated beyond limits and i can't see that happen🥱 plsss don't make us wait more for the next update since am dying of anxiety though its just a chapter i have read 😊 eagerly waiting for ur updates😊 thanks for the pm😛

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

niceee
thanks for the pm xx

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SARUNIAN!!!!

@luv.u.rubletin

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Really glad that I came across a story with such a brilliant start!! :D

Revenge...

The beginning made me blush all red...the intense and passionate love-making made me feel that they're really-so-much in love! But later by end I discovered its gonna be an intense and mysterious piece of work!

And its absolutely different from what I've read so far.

Khushi's there for some revenge...so does she love him, or not? Some feelings, maybe? ;)

But Arnav is actually in love with her it seems!<33

"But all the marks were not given by him alone"...this disturbed me a bit!

Eagerly waiting to read more!:D

Ps: Loved the banner...specially the knife in R!;)

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Wow Z this was such a wonderful new year surprise, I loved the beginning. Cannot wait to know why Khushi turned into revenge seeking naari lol!!! For some reason felt like I was watching American show Revenge maybe the way she seemed like she was in love with the hero but she is out to get revenge!!! Happy new year to you too, hopefully all your dreams will come true in this new year 😊

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Yayyy!!! I am literally dancing !!! You are back with another new story. I was about to sleep. Turning off all my devices, knowing there won't be anymore updates for the day. But then for some unknown reason I checked my Email and got soo zoo soo happy.

Coming to the update. It was sensual and had a lot of hidden meaning clearly this Khushi is anything but naive and innocent. So she is here to take Revenge on Arnav. It looks really intense with lots of secrets. Looking forward to reading it.

Please don't leave IF. You have lots & lots of readers who will really miss you.

And A Very Happy NEW Year to You !!