*Completed* Th# 1 ArHi SS: Revenge

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@simi58

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

e ka hai nandkishore? 😉

reswa

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hayeee a new SS...😃😃😃

Vs di ka bday roz kyun nehin ata..😉

the starting was soo..😳☺️☺️

wife could speak???

and what is happening here???

Am I about to read a trying to be harsh khushi???

and what is arnav's stand in here .. is he completely clueless about it all?

what is the revenge she is talking about?

Was khushi assaulted? Wht were the marks khushi was trying to move??

Ho kya raha hai yahan? 😲

I don't knw wht to write or accept. U hv sent me to scratching head zone.. And i am totally hooked to the story..⭐️ Can't wait to read more

As long as its not dark i am happy.. :D intense toh i can handle😊

Edited by simi58 - 11 years ago

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Res (because it's lazy's thread 😆)

~Unres~

Whoa a new story by Lazy, that too dhamakedar 🥳

Loved the first chapter and the suspense!! Khushi is taking revenge that too from Arnav? 😲

Poor fellow, seems like he has no clue, what is that Arnav did that's causing Khushi to behave this way? And the clues you ae leaving left me dumbfounded...one she cannot speak, two he is not the only one to give her love bytes 😲

What is she upto

Looks like Arnav doesn't know about the birth control pills either!! What if he takes them thinking they are Aspirin 😆 (reminds me of Shyamu taking Anjali's pills 😆) I think these kind of crazy ideas only come to me, you know why 😳

Cheers

(ps: Happy New Year!! 🤗)

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago

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aashi12

@aashi12

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Res

Un-res:

with my mouth hung open, my eyes blinking in a i-can't-believe-this-is-happening-way, while my brain was yet registering the words.. I read this 'Revenge' in a state of absolute shock and by the end, i was shocked by the extent of 'Shock' i was feeling.. Shocking isn't it?

Sensual, hot, steamy, scary, shocking, emotional, mystery, thrill.. Sab to hai!- Ye movie to Hit hai boss, bas ek item no. Ke liye call Katrina Kaif..;)

she is brought up 'this' way- here i presume, she is brought up to Love. She feels 'Different' around him. She forgets everything else when around him.. Clearly he has become an addiction or an obsession, she likes or not. He loves her, honestly, completely, truely.
She wants to Revenge, for something he did to her, her family. She marks her, to punish herself for getting stray, she takes pills, she gets up in the middle of night trying to do what..? Disinfect herself off her husband's touch! The touch she reveled a few hours back!

Questions are many, i'm sure you'll answer them all.
But here i believe in one Thing, if its Arnav Singh Raizada, he knows.. Bas!

P.S: Khushi can do anything she wants, at the end, all i want is a very much alive Arshi- in single piece, with 2 kids. Chota Parivaar, sukhi parivaar.. Hamesha! 😃

P.P.S: Hum fir se aapse, ILUD!❤️

Edited by aashi12 - 11 years ago

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

ME..! 😃

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

😛😆

Edited!

Wow! It is very...very intense story. Khushi has come to seek revenge from arnav, to destroy everything that he cherished, cause he took away everything that she cherished. But his sinful gaze, hands, love making does things to her, makes her feel things she doesn't wants to. She is fighting between her body, heart & mind, isn't it?

I want to know more. Hope you update this soon.

Edited by dj_arshifan - 11 years ago

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Skiran

@Skiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

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UnRes

Its so HOT in here 😳

So many questions..
Why is Khushi being addressed as a girl but not a woman?
Who took/is taking revenge on who?
'if his wife could speak' - Khushi can't speak?

I am glad that this is not a dark story 😊

I am ready for this intense story of Arnav and Khushi - Mohabbat door jaane na de..nafrat paas aane na de ⭐️

P.S. I am so happy that you decided to stay and write this new story 😃 But while reading it I was 😲 wondering 'is this written by you?' because of the details 😉

Edited by Skiran - 11 years ago

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

OMG you are starting a new story.

CONGRATULATIONS 🥳 🥳🥳

I am sooo excited n eager to read this story.

Awesome start.👏

Wow the story is inspired my most favorite promo n it's the essence of the story. Fantastic 👍🏼

Khushi looks likes a duty on taking revenge from her husband Arnav n I am eager to know the reason.

She is playing the act of perfect wife n lover very brilliantly. She has very clear thoughts with the plan she has made for the REVENGE.

The first update is very interesting.

Looking forward to read the story.

P.S. I love the banner❤️

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Mine

OMG...Zehra...New Story...wow...have I ever told u that I love you with a 'damnit'...

And what's that...after so much passion and LOVE its revenge...kyun...I want to know it all...
What have he done that made her taking revenge on him...
and he seems to b really in love with her...I saw u wrote 'honestly' with his confession...
And he believes her...doesn't he have any idea what's in her mind...
And Khushi couldn't talk...that means there won't be any dialogue from her...hell it will b something different to read...looking forward to see more...

PS: do u watch the show 'Revenge'?? Just asking... 😊

Edited by nishu_shorna - 11 years ago

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Superb update 👏👏
Loved it 😛
Khushi taking revenge from asr
Interesting
Can't wait for next part

HAPPY NEW YEAR 🥳

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Interesting! That was intense with some dark insinuations about her motives. Is she being abused by someone else as well? Or was she abused in the past?