SS: Ardent Desires - Thread 2 - LAST Part 12(24/01)

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rabid52

@rabid52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Congrats on ur first completed story. Yes epilogue would be lovely.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#452

Amazing and superb update, this was a perfect ending to this brilliant story.

I absolutely loved the last update, a brilliant read.

Awww bless Khushi felt so bad for falling asleep on her suhagraat but I'm glad Arnav put her mind at ease by saying he was not upset.

Love the fact we got to read a proper suhagraat between them and Arnav made it extra special by taking her away to a private place with no disturbance.

There intimate moment was written perfectly and so passionate and hot.

Thank you for writing this story, it has been a pleasure to read.

Thanks for the PM xx

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arnavkhushi22

@arnavkhushi22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#453

What the...
This story end.. I didn't expect this soon
Anyway lovely ending

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Natasha08

@Natasha08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#454

very sweet and beautiful ending..

loved it

will miss this ss

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#455

Awesome end...its a beautiful journey...thanks for the PM

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Poor arnav kbushi did slept on her first night now dts a perfect 'what d' n 'unbelievable moment...liked d teasing of siblings...oh it ended buts its ok...won't u give an epilogue