SS: Ardent Desires - Thread 2 - LAST Part 12(24/01)

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gmsk

@gmsk

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

Beautiful ending

Enjoyed this story through out

Gonna miss it

Thnks for d PM

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sushmita ghosh

@shalunsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Lovely...i loved the story..its awesome

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_sree_

@_sree_

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#433

awesome story ...😊this is one of my favourite story 😳

beautiful ending ..😉

you didn't lagged the story...and everything was perfect..👏

and the most important thing that i noticed that you didn't make us wait for updates ..you were punctual and impressive presentation ..

i really liked the way you post sneak peak ..that was interesting ..

All your stories are different and have good story line ..

im not a writer so i cannot write any review because i don't know😆..but as a reader i thoroughly enjoyed ..😃..and this is the first time im posting a long comment for a writer..because you deserve it ..

..where were you girl all these years ?😡..if you started writing two three years ago..im sure you will be the no1 writer in this forum..you are an Excellent writer ..and congratulations for completing your first story🥳KEEP ROCKING👍🏼

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#434

God she slept...but Arnav is sweet coz he loves her n didn't mind bt khushi was so embarrassed...finally dey r one...gonna miss d story...beautiful ending

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#435

I enjoyed this story so much!

Haha, it was pretty cute that she was so tired that she slept off her SR. 😆

And that it was pretty much Arnav's plan the next day even though she was busy wanting to surprise her hubby too! 😃

Happy to be part of your completed first SS! 😳

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#436

hot n romantic update..the title goes well with the happy ending with the characters who had got another chance in their lyf to show their ardent desires...