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WanieA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hi..read all the chapters in one go...great job yaar. pls pm if u have other stories...thank u...

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Another interesting story from you...I can really understand Khushi's point of view...she is right marriages are made with trust, respect and love...when I read that he broke the marriage all because she stopped him ...really feel bad but after listening to his reason when they met at restaurant...I understood his problem...he does not want to force her for the marriage... I always enjoy Arnav's jealous and his insecurities for Khushi...you have plotted such a beautiful twist and turns in the story that one can read till the end...this is your first FF completed...and hate it that I was not a part of this journey... Very well written... your story based on moral...and it is actually a concern with the principles of right and wrong behavior specially in human being...but their egos played a major role in the misunderstanding between them...but the actually if you love someone you should keep your ego aside so that you can have a healthy relationship...and it seems that Anjali and NK understood it more than these two...and they made this plan to keep them together...very nice story with a totally good concept...thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts with us...😛

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Maria Adam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

liked the story was different.

like the part that it was NK and Anjais plan knew it. and khushi feel asleep funny.

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arshi1986

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

First of all thank u for sending the pm eventhough I was on vacation ... Thank u so much once again...now coming to your ss ... I was so happy to see the completed ss in your list... I was asking u the completed works u remember right ... Now I read the best one..so different ..so good ...loved the way the story was portrayed. ...I mI will be always waiting for more of your works ...

My inbox is full of your pms ... Sorry couldn't check during vacation...even now my internet in happy is not working... I m using my mobile to read story ...its difficult to type the message here ...but still I tot I can't just leave. This without leaving a comment dear ..

Hope u write more n more stories n compete more n more as soon as possible dear ...

Waiting eagerly for ur works...:-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)

Ps : I read this ss in one go yesterday night I couldn't type the message so today just for commenting I came on if ...