|Amour Indefinitely| ~ KR Drabble Series #2 (Part 41: pg 144, pms ltr)

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

dear the update was awsome..

thank god dadi bua ne jyada tang nehi kiya..

last part was very nyc...

pata nehi kab yeh dono apne feelings ko samjhega..

overall loved it

thnks for the pm..

update it soon

with love

moumita

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-Cascade-

@-Cascade-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Awesome update. It ws short bt sweet nd lovely.
I wanna kill dis Dadi bua. She's too much to handle. Can't she stop pulling Kriya's legs!!
Awwiiieee... I luv d Kriyaansh moment 2wrds d end. It ws so romantic.
Dis story is so damn gud.

Can't wait fr d nxt prt. So update it soon...

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Beautiful update as always
Last portion was undoubtedly d Best..
want more KriYaansh scenes...
continue soon

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

he he loved it
really awesome

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

I swear.. the readers of this Drabbles have a strong hatred towards this Bua dadi,..

Dude, I mean.. even I hate it when people try to annoy me or wake me up when I am peacefully asleep.. for me.. my oh-so precious sleep is the most important thing...

And it is the same for every girl.. and so it is for kriya..

But iss Bua dadi ke toh brains mein kuch jaata hi nahi...

She can't let a person sleep in peace... I doubt she would be even accusing payal for something nor the other even today.. She wouldn't let her soul rest in peace...

I liked that you didn't detach Payal all of a sudden.. realization should be slow and steady.. a gradual one.. and still he should posses the same feelings for Payal..

Baaki I loved the bedroom thing.. though there wasn't much.. but jitna bhi tha.. was awesomely put up...