Arshi FF:Entwined--Thrd 3 *completed* double update Page 28 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear, u r nt in my buddy list. Suddenly came accross this ff and indeed u casted a spell on md through it. Woaw. I am having vocabulary problem to express what I m feelung after reading this story. If u r writing any more ff or story on arshi plz lemme knoe. Add me too I ur om list
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Posted: 11 years ago
The last update and Epilogue.

Mostly for epilogue I show less interest then the chapters, because for some reason most of the FF I read had in the epilogue that Arnav and Kushi get married and they had kids some times twins or more than one kid, I am not against such epiloue. That is why I didnt read the epilogue when you updated, bad me.

I read epilogue and I found so apt and you closed all the open and loose ends we had, Kushi of Entwined will be an good example in tough situation, the devolpment you showed from her trauma will be always be lesson. Her parabolic life from the happy days in the college with her parents to the traumatic stage to near death experiance to coma then cominging out os her PTSD and the drive she had to fight ...Arnav was one good soul who was there and who will be there "forever".

After reading from whom you got the inspiration, I am reading Meera's Emerald Isle tale, truly it is magical and I am glad that she spelled you and kindled your magical writing.

Hope to read more of your writing and hope you will start new FF soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kya hua Tera Wada??

New story ka Iraada??
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey i am new to this story
and i think u dont know mee
but i did read this story

and would like to say u are outstanding writer
i loved ur story i am happy u killed akash and rohan
very happy however i dont know what about the father of singaninia
is he maybe ever going to be problem
i know it's ff but still he could take revenge on them (khusi and raizadas)
and very well said justice delayed is justice denied
and singania are rich from life long they can make 5 years and then 2 years and then few months and then he wold be standing again as a threath to women kind
love y
when u write another ff plzz send me a messeage
i just need one messeage and then i would just follow
love u
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am so definitely an Entwinie!
Your story was so gripping that I'm glad I only came across it after you had finished. Waiting for updates would have been unbearable. As it is I've spent most of today devouring it.
A very serious issue very well handled by you. Love your Arshi.
So glad that there are still awesome writers like you to give us our Arshi doses.
Waiting for your next story. Pls pm me when you start it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love a happy ending. Great story
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well written...bookmarked it.

Would look forward to read more from you

Viji
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Posted: 11 years ago
A very beautiful, emotional and superb story. I loved the basic plot very much and you have narrated the entire thing awesomely. Applaud to you for penning such a serious subject. Thanks for the story. Hope you write many more. And please let me know whenever you start something new.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi ... I hapend to chance upon ths story ... N i hav 2 say tht im so glad i did ... Simply loved the story ... U hav a beautiful way with words n u write amazingly ... I finished reading all the chapters n 3 days ... It was so captivating ... Loved the way u hav potrayed such a sensitive topic ... Amazing ... Keep it up ... Lookn forward 2 reading more of ur wrks ... Pls let me know whever u start anythn new ... Would love 2 be a part of it 2 ... U r really amazing with words ... Write wow
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Posted: 11 years ago
res to finish reading! its awesome so far! :)

unres

This is what i wrote as the description of this beautiful beautiful story when i shared the link with my friends on FB so that they also can read it.


A beautiful ArHi story that is heartbreaking and heartwarming.. written on the backdrop of a very serious subject.. But so beautifully written..
A story where u feel broken for Khushi and pray for an Arnav to come in to the life of every Khushi out there who is alone.. shattered and destroyed.. so that he can breath life in to her once again..make her smile.. make her live...make her breath..n just hold her close to his heart and tell her that he is there for her..that he will make everything alright while he shields her from everything that hurts her, holding her protectively in his strong embrace..
And a story where, u can learn how to smile once again.. after going through the worst hell in this world..to find happiness once again.. Khushi..

Everyone who has time and r searching for an ArHi FF to read, please read it. Its that beautiful!

At moments i wondered if i was reading a FF or an actual book! u really should think about publishing this amazing tale u have written.. and not just cz its beautiful.. but also because of the amazing way u have explored the dark theme of this story and narrated it in such a sensitive manner.. because of the awareness and thought that has gone in to writing this amazing tale..because this is a tale everyone should read..

thank u for writing it and sharing it with us.. because that is the only reason i got lucky enough to read it..
please keep writing many more beautiful stories.. u r so talented...

Edited by princessunara - 11 years ago

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