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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#241

very nice story..

great concept and you penned it beautifully!
I started reading it couple of about three ago and then I was on a long vacation. But even during that I couldn't stop thinking about it and started reading it as soon as I could.

Just loved it, and all the bits of shayari/ poetry/ quotes and the pictures.

I am surprised to see the number of likes and I really really hope that more & more people read it!

Good luck for all the future wok!

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Niks

@NiksAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Wow...never knew it ended...tho sad but in a very happy way...i loved it...ur fabulous...!!!🥳

NOt to forget the Nani part...truly amazing...!!!😉

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Anjani

@akurmapu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Sorry for late in commenting. Awesome ending, loved the last update and epilogue. Kushi's way of proposing for marriage and Arnav's way of proposal was dam good.

Waiting to read another FF of yours 😊.

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Prasanna_dhanu

@Prasanna_dhanu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Beautiful story, narration and thank you for all the wonderful updates.

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

lovely lovely chapter and beautiful epilogue...

each and every chapter in this story enjoyed reading it...its a heavy duty story but loved it very much...😆...full of emotions, fear,,love, protectiveness...every thing included...

thank u for giving us lovely story...hoping we will get new story soon...

cheers...

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Oh my gawwd ! This was such a beautiful FF.

I just caught up with this and then couldn't stop myself from reading it. Finally read the last chapter and now i feel so sad that its over.

Seriously dude , this was one heck of an amazing story. So so so beautiful !

I really have no words to describe my feelings.

Right from the prologue to the epilogue , the entire journey of Arshi was so marvelously written. You handled a very serious social issue but that too in such an excellent way.

The mystery , the romance , the humor , the drama everything was just perfect.

I'm so in love with this FF...

I loved the characters. Really ! Arnav , Khushi , Sheetal , Shyam , Anjali .NK - simply everyone ! The way you portrayed each and every character was fabulous.

The entire story was like an emotional rollercoaster.

*sigh*

i now finished reading it and feel so jobless.

And without exaggerating i have to say that this has become one of m favorite FFs.

You're an amazing.

Simply outstanding 👏

Love

Nikita xx

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

That was a beautiful story. Your writing is deep and it's so gripping sometimes. I'm so glad to have finally completed this fic. I was almost speechless by the end and the images that you posted with the updates were all so meaningful.

Arnav-Khushi were refreshing. And lol, I liked how Khushi would just say what's on her mind even if that's a confession or a proposal. The events obviously showed how their destinies were entwined! Keep writing. Waiting to read more from you.

-V

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WanieA

@WanieA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#248

thank u for sharing this wonderful story with us...amazing, mind blowing etc etc etc...pls pm us when u start with the new one...

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#249

OMG did I just read all Parts in one go woW you did a great job Beenish😛 okay enough comming to Ff ..I just found thiss Ff some days back i was hooked to thiss FF.., I was speechless dude when i read your work .., I simply love the way you describe Arnav and khushi here .. Marvelous yarr loved It..