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Oliver.Queen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Jus one more chapter😲. Nicely written.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Perfect...the entire ..scene was flawlessly written...

The passion...the love..the feelings were just so beautiful...finally they feel free...loved the journey...Dee! Hats to your brilliant writing...from the start...it's been so intriguing, and so amazing...every time I thought ..I wish it could be that way...you exceeded that feeling and expectation...with each every update!

Every banner...was so perfect...I'm just in awe of the way you have penned...Entwined!

Looking forward to reading the last one...can't believe it's finally ending...Thank You..Dee!

Sheer piece of Brilliance and Art!

I hope you will continue to write here...as and when you get a chance!

PS: thanks for the mention of the Facebook...page...it's awesome!

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

I got the answer to my question.

Beautifully written consummation scene.

Loved how Arnav showed his love for her.

And Khushi's confession was beautiful.

Read the chapter twice.

Will read it again the morning.

Hope you will start another story soon.

Please do.

I loved the banner.

And the pictures too.

Love this story Dee, don't want it to get over.

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Beautiful journey.. I can't imagine the story has almost ended.. Loved it..

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

spellbinding update! What more can I write?

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

LOVED IT TO BITS. Esp loved the symbolism of the poolside cleansing scene.well done. Enthralling as always.

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

wow awesome yaar...god am feeling depressed this story is gonna end...

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

That was a beautiful chapter...
Cheers to new beginnings!!!!!

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

No words.. Its just BEAUTIFUL!!!

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

beautiful update Dee .. I'm short of words .. simply loved it

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