Arshi FF:Entwined--Thrd 3 *completed* double update Page 28 - Page 15

finally some Khushi for Khushi..

Excellent..loved each word of the update..

Sniffling with happiness ! :')
... I forget If I commented on the last few chapters; but anywhoot, You are such a incredible and amazing writer I have come across. Every chapters is written with such thoughtful work put into it from the characterization, plot and the little detailing that makes a reader cherish the episode ever so dearly.
I am amazed at how you've played with the characters of Arnav and Khush and from the characterization and detailing, I can literally imagine a film playing in front of me while I am reading. The way you have handled suspense, drama, romance/friendship is just out of the world... just perfect and many more themes along the way I might've not highlighted. Focusing on such a central and complicated issue that is scary and not easy to write about, you have managed to weave it into words, so perfectly in your own way. I am blown away and amazed. This should be turned into a novel; in all honestly, I am not joking. Focused around a topic that speaks of awareness not only just India, I am sure if happens world- wide too.. what better of a combination combined with an enthralling characters and plot of two college strangers turned buddies and their journey... entwined around an important issue that seeks to be told.
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I know I don't comment much, but I had to let you know that I have read every bit of your chapters and look forward to every update; it is that 'damn good.' You've put such hard work into this right from the prologue, which instantly blew me away .. and I had been thinking 'I really need to read this.' So props to you for being an awesome writer.
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Loved the last few chapters, esp. how you enfolded a sensitive chase to shooting the bad guys. I loved how in a cool way you planned out a scenario much like a filmy scene and enacted so well that all in all ... I am really proud of your Khush. seriously, she lived through the pain and a haunted past of what occurred to her; an applause to her being such a strong woman to fight a battle and not quiting. It's hauntingly scary thinking about that somewhere around the world, someone would be manipulating a daughter's family with their charm and what not, while others are not aware of one's true nature. I really pray this doesn't happen to any daughter out there. And it's time for the reality-lived fantasy tributed to Khushi... where the girl within her has always craved, cherished and imagined. I am so glad, that Arnav being that mere stranger is her world, her protector and her better-half no doubt. I was smiley throughout this latest update, truly happy for her.
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Can't wait for the next chapter. I can't believe this journey would be ending too soon. Nonetheless, I am so exciited. :D x

finally they are entwined 😳. Awesome update.

I understand why Arnav was scared of taking things further with Khushu due to his past guilt but I'm so happy that Lhushi helped him get through it. Communication is key and the outcome of their honest conversation was just great!

Loved the update😊

Amazing update and story..! Hope you
come back soon with another work of
yours..! See u soon:)