Pyaar Ka Anjaam NOTE PG3!!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11

Part 1

You can hear someone singing "Mitwa" from Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna.

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkane hai tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khud se toh na tu chhupa

Everyone is watching him, his voice has everyone hooked, his eyes are show, then his lips, a friend close by is playing the guitar

He smiles as his face is shown, he is Sumit Whadwa

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
voh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkane hai tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khud se toh na tu chhupa
jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein
jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein
aaya nazar mein jab se koi hai

tu sochta hain tu puchata hai
jiski kami thi kya yeh wohi hai
haan yeh vohi hai haan yeh vohi hai
tu ek pyasa aur yeh nadhi hai
kaahe nahi isko tu khulke bataye

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
voh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
teri nigaahen pagaye raahein
par tu yeh soche jaaoon na jaaoon
yeh zindagi jo hai naachti toh
kyon bediyon mein hai tere paanoo

preet ki dhun par naach le paagal
udta agar hai udne de aanchal
kaahe koi apne ko aaise tarsaaye

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
mitwa...
Sumit looks up to find everyone clapping, he turns and faces his best friend Rahul, who shows him a thumbs up, Sumit stands up and the pair of them bow to everyone., Sumit steps off the stage and he is immediately showered with compliments
P 1 - that was awesome!
P 2 - tum bohat ache gaate ho
S - thanks
P 3 - why don't you sing professionally?
The managr arrives
M - agar yeh professionally gaane laga tho mera kya hoga?
Everyone laughs and slowly they disperse. The manager looks at Sumit and shakes his hand, he then hands him some money
S - Sir ye?
M - tumhari pay
S - lekin Sir.....main ye paise nahin le sakta
M - kyun nahin? tum paise ke liye nahin gaate?
S - nahin Sir, gaane mera kaam nahin mera shock hai, I do it to please people.....
Sumit walks away leaving the manager confused, Rahul walks to the manager
R - Sir....aap shahid bhool rahe hai....Sumit is shaher ke sabse bade industrialist Kul Whadwa ke beta hai, usse paison ki koi kami nahin
Rahul follows Sumit, they sit in the car and make their way home. As they are driving they approach a red light, Sumit is in the driver's seat waiting for the light to turn green, he looks around him, suddenly he is blinded by light, he looks closely and sees a necklace, as he looks closer he notices a girl's smile and then her eyes, he keeps on staring but before he can get a proper look at her he hears horns honking behind him as the light has changed to green
R - Sumit kya hogaya tujhe, light change hogayi hai chal, varna paanga pe jaayega
S - haan haan ja raha hoon
Sumit drives off but the girl's eyes and lips are still in his mind, he arrives home and walks inside and sees his dad busy with phonecalls, his mom Veena comes up to him
V - kahan tha tu?
S - cafe per mama
V - kitni baar samjaaya hai tujhe ke vahan na jaaya kar, humhara itna bada business hai fhir vahan jaane ki kya zuroorat hai
S - jaanta hoon mama lekin main abhi business nahin karna chahta
Kul, who has now gotten off the phone
K - haan business nahin karna chahta, ek saal se beta hai ghar par jabse graduate kar chuka hai lekin apne future ka koi andaza nahin
S - mama please, dad ko samjaaye I'm going to my room
Sumit walks off while Kul continues his lecture, Sumit just rolls his eyes and walks into his room and puts the stereo system on, he closes his eyes and flashes of the girl from earliercome before him, he smiles and buries himself in the duvet cover.
To be continued
how did you like the first part????? plz comment
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rachandeep

k ill get 2 work on this asap

I didn't knew that it started long time back......if I knew there was one here I'd be on already....lolz....you know what I mean Rach di!!😉...i just went and checked the date and realised that it's really actually long time back...well you can continue now!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#13

wah wah!!!

taleyan taleyan plz!!!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

😆 😆 😆

well Rach seems like u've done it again!!!! Gr8 work 10/10

(can i make a suggestion tho...y dont u post this in da KK forum...I bet it'll b more appreciated there...forgive me if its already there too)

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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
hey dude lol whats ur name....lol im always callin u dude 😆 😆 😆 thanx 4 liking it...erm i cud do it there.....actually i might lol ill see what happens 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
hey my name's Henna! 😳

dont worry i didnt mind u calling me dude either
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
ok Heena.....safe ill post this up in da kk forum
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
DUE TO INSUFFICIENT COMMENTS.....THIS FANFIC HAS NOW BEEN MOVED TO THE KUMKUM FORUM....LINK IS HERE

Pyaar Ka Anjaam
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
Woooooooooooooooow great work awesomethese r claps for u deserve this Kya sory thi🥰👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
agree w/ annie..realli awsum! just can imagine my sumti sining! sigh..dose lips..dose beautiful eyes..dat smyl! *shivers* sigh..lolz im gonna chk out da FF on KK forum! :D
XOXO
SADI<3

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