Beautiful lie!!!A Rantara Reincarnation FF; updated part 21 in page 46 - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
that was osam loved it soo much
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well what to say..
Perfect...
Amazing...
A cliffhanger...
Raghu ka changed behaviour..
Antara senses him...
Raghu getting free for her...
Precap barish and RaNtara...
I m waiting..
Thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww I Loved it Amazing Jyoita 👏👏 Kya Masth Likha Yaar.. Waiting 4 Nxt part 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
rantara conversation was too emotional
loved to see raghu working so hard to meet antara
wow this is such a sweet and cute and beautiful update

Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
can u tell me which song is this ? from which album ? i loved the song
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

can u tell me which song is this ? from which album ? i loved the song


It's from Hasee to Phasee Movie. The title of this song is Zehnaseeb. The movie is starred by Parineeta Chopra and Sidharth Malhotra.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jyo,
What lovely chat between Raghu and Antara
So cute he kept her anklet and he is restful to meet her
Antara feels somethinng changed bt can't say yet what
Loved the music could listen it all the nite and the pics Wow!

Continue and update soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 15: The flying angel

Raghu reached Antara's home. Though he came here before during Antara's wedding, he noticed many things for the first time which he missed earlier. There was a swing in the garden. The garden had Tulip plants grown and maintained in a very classy way. The color of the flowers was increasing the beauty of the mansion even more. He walked toward the main door.

He rang the door bell and Mrs. Sharma opened the door.

Raghu: Hello Aunty!!!

Mrs. Sharma: Hello Beta!!! How are you??

Raghu: Fine. Is Antara ok??

Mrs. Sharma: Wahi to samajh mein nahi aa raha hai!!! One moment she is cheerful and then another moment she is sad. She is getting mood swings. Some times she is getting very irritated for a slightest reason and some times she is looking like everything is fine. I am so confused Beta!! And thanks for coming.

Raghu: No need to thank Aunty. Waise where is she??

Mrs. Sharma: She was waiting for you the whole day Beta!! And I couldn't say her that you have office because Sameer didn't go to office.

Raghu: I am so sorry Aunty. I tried my best to finish my work early but it was 5 pm when I left my office. Upar se, there was heavy traffic for this sudden rain. It took almost 2 hours to reach here which usually takes half an hour.

Mrs. Sharma: It's ok Beta!! She was roaming around the house the whole day, listening to music. Now she is in her dance practise room.

Raghu: Sorry, where??

Mrs. Sharma: Ya, It's just to the right side of the main hall. She decorated the whole room with glasses just like the choreographers do so that she can practice her dance with perfection. Ohh..Beta I forgot to tell you. She is a dance artist...

Raghu: Ya, Aunty I know that. But what is she doing there?? She can't see now right?? And is she alone there??

Mrs. Sharma: I told her that I will stay with her. But she is very stubborn. Didn't listen to me. She told me to leave her alone for some moments. So, I left. She is there now. Do you want to go there??

Raghu: Yes, Aunty!!! Can you show me which way the room is??

Mrs. Sharma showed Raghu the direction of the room.

When he reached the door of the room, he felt his own heartbeat. That's embarrassing!!!

He took a deep breath and opened the door without making any sound so that he didn't startle her. But the scene he saw, it was beyond his imagination.



Antara was dancing...There was a music player which was playing song and along with the song, she was dancing beautifully.

O Re Piya Haye... (3)
Udne Laga Kyon Man Baawla Re
Aaya Kahan Se Yeh Hosla Re
O Re Piya Haye... (2)


She was wearing a gungroo...suddenly Raghu felt a sharp pain in his head after listening to it's sound...but he gained strength and ignored the pain because the beauty of this situation was beyond everything.


She was literally flying on the floor with her trained dancing skill. Though she couldn't see, but it didn't seem like that. She was smiling and dancing with her own way.


Tanabana Tanabana Bunti Hawaa Haaye Bunti Hawa
Boondein Bhi To Aaye Nahi Baaz Yahan
Sagish Mein Shaamil Sara Jahan Hai
Har Zare Zare Ki Yeh Iltiza Hai


The white curtains around the room was moving with a strange natural rhythm along with cold breeze which was coming inside the room through the open window. Suddenly, it started raining. And it made her even more happy.She continued dancing and Raghu continued drooling.


O Re Piya Haye... (2)
Ni Re ,Re Re Ga
Ga Ga Ma
Ma Ma Pa
Pa Ma Ga Re Sa

Ni Ni Sa Sa Pa
Pa Sa Ma Pa Dha Ni Sa Ni
Re Ni Sa Sa Sa.. . . . ..


Raghu almost got a heart attack because she suddenly started twirling with full speed. The cold breeze suddenly became restless and it turned in to a storm. As if the entire nature was also dancing with her. Raghu felt that he should stop her because she was continuously twirling in a constant speed, but the smile on her beautiful face stopped him to do that. She was enjoying the dance so much and so was he!!


Nazrein Bolen Duniya Bole
Dil Ki Zaban Haaye Dil Ki Zubaan
Ishq Maange Ishq Chahe Koi Toofan
Chalna Aahiste Ishq Naya Hai
Pehla Yeh Vada Humne Kiya Hai
O Re Piya Haaye... (2)

She came near the window and closed her eyes. A few drop of rain fell on her face. She started smiling again. He followed her silently. Antara came near a specific place of the room. There were glasses everywhere on the wall. She started searching something on the wall with her hands. Before Raghu could understand anything, she pushed some button on the wall and a door opened which looked like a glass portion earlier. Raghu was shocked. The door had the direct link with garden. Antara went out of the room through this door. Outside, it was raining, but she didn't care!! Raghu decided to stop her. He also stepped in to the rain. But before he could do anything, Antara made him shocked again.

O Re Piya
Piyaaa...
Yehhh Piya

Nange Pairo Pe Angaro
Chalti Rahi Haaye Chalti Rahi
Lagta Hai Ke Gairo Mein
Palti Rahi Haaye

Antara suddenly stopped dancing. She was standing still in the rain. It was raining cats and dogs now. Raghu could not see her face at this moment. He was standing behind of her and he was not prepared for that. She broke on her knees. She sat on the ground and started crying.


Le Chal Wahan Jo
Mulk Tera Hai
Jahil Zamana
Dushman Mera Hai
Haaye
O Re Piya Haye... (5)


At last she was crying. She was repressing this pain for quite a long time. The aggressiveness she showed after she came to know that she had become blind in the hospital, that behavior was not going synchronised with her sudden calmness after knowing that Sameer was not going to leave her though she is blind. She was supposed to cry for losing such a big thing in her life, that is her VISION!! Specially for a person like HER, who loved nature, who loves poems and specially who loves dancing. Raghu didn't stop her. He let her cry.


It was almost 15 minutes, for which she was crying sitting on the floor in front of her Tulip garden. Raghu thought- I have to stop her now. She will catch cold otherwise.

He took a step forward ,suddenly she stood up. She turned to him, almost stepped on his feet and about to fall, but Raghu caught her. He had to bent on her to maintain the balance and both of their face came very close to each other.


Antara looked right in to his eyes as usual.


Rain drops were falling on their bodies without any inhibition and Raghu forgot his inhibitions too. Though he knew very well that she could sense his presence, his gaze; he continued drooling on her.

Her eyes had become red and there was no smile in her face. But still her beauty was unexplainable. Raghu couldn't stop himself. His gaze automatically fell on her trembling rosy lips.

He immediately made her to stand straight and took a step back.


But before he could realize, she banged on his shoulder because her hair got stuck in his shirt button.



Raghu kept looking at her face while she kept trying to release her hair from his shirt. She was looking a bit embarrassed. May be because he saw her in this vulnerable state or may be she was completely drenched in rain that his faminine body became more evident.


Raghu helped her to get her hair released from his dress. After they came in to the room, Raghu stood in front of her and said- ...

Precap-



Edited by goodstorywins - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow 2 updates in 1 day ?
thats really great
coming to the update it was beautiful
the way u expressed antara's dance
the way u expressed her reactions
the way u expressed her behaviour
all are so lovely
Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
am the 1st to comment this time

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