Beautiful lie!!!A Rantara Reincarnation FF; updated part 21 in page 46 - Page 23

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manpreet87 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ausm update..loved it..😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jyo's intention: Fabulously build story-line gonna surprise us any moment ...!
But till then i have to live in the vicinity of my own possibilities of "what might happen" which is eventually gonna fall flat.. 😆
Whenever i think YES!! ..i have a hold on this and the very next second.. Oh i am only half way there..🤪
I will definitely hit my head on the door... Ouch it hurts.. I am freaking out..
Need to know asap.. ⭐️


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Posted: 11 years ago
❤️Freaking Awesome update...
OMG!!! i'm loving it...& the song was cherry on the cake ☺️
The breeze, beautiful garden,tulips, dance & she was letting all her emotions flow out in the rain
so superb!! I think no one can explain the situation like u did😉
Waiting for the precap...thank u for such an awesome update..

P.S: This update was so soon😆 I'm going mad imagining what will happen next😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG Jyo what update!

Superb story. The description u make of the dance and rain scenes are amazing

The music and pics... mmmuuuaahh :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nbw16

Jyo's intention: Fabulously build story-line gonna surprise us any moment ...!

But till then i have to live in the vicinity of my own possibilities of "what might happen" which is eventually gonna fall flat.. 😆
Whenever i think YES!! ..i have a hold on this and the very next second.. Oh i am only half way there..🤪
I will definitely hit my head on the door... Ouch it hurts.. I am freaking out..
Need to know asap.. ⭐️



Nehaaa, 🤗!! You have no idea that how much I love your comments. Thanks re!!!😳
Don't hit your head on door. Save it for the upcoming storyline.😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
Well.. Thank u Jyo 😳 .. I feel loved..
But now as per ur convenience u need to update the next part..
waiting.. 😃
Edited by nbw16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely .
Fantastic .
All is perfect .
Continue
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 16: The Embarrassment

Raghu was furious. He was literally shaking in anger. Five minutes ago he was so excited to meet her and now...he is feeling like giving her a reality check.


Raghu: How can you be so careless??? What were you thinking?? Are you insane?? The doc took a wrong decision to release you from the hospital. At least you would have been safe there. At least I could have been spared of your these madness...GOD DAMMIT, THE DOC OPENED YOUR BANDAGE JUST YESTERDAY NIGHT. Even 24 hours haven't been passed and you are soaking in rain!!!! RAIN??? What if your wound gets infected?? What if...you have to suffer pain again?? WHAT IF...YOU GET HARMED?? I CAN'T GIVE YOU THAT LUXURY. ...my GOODNESS...You were about to fall on that garden if I had not held you. Just suppose that I was not here in that moment...YOU WOULD HAVE SLIPPED ON THE FLOOR!!!!


Antara was shell shocked after watching this temper of Raghu...She was completely unfamiliar with this nature of him. Her eyes got filled with tears again.


Raghu was going on and on , but that one drop of tear made him realize that he was verbally hurting her. He immediately stopped. All his anger got evaporated and he stepped forward to console her.


Raghu: Hey, I ...am ...sorry..!!! I am so sorry. Please forgive me!!!! I was literally shouting on you!!

Antara: I...(saying in her cracked voice) ...am so sorry...I made you upset. I didn't plan for this, I swear!!! I was dancing...then I heard of raining and I got...

Raghu couldn't bear any more of her tears. He cupped her face unknowingly and said...


Raghu: Shhh...of course you didn't plan for this...you got carried away...but you have to be careful na!!!! Your present state is very vulnerable. You have to take care of yourself.

Antara: I was stupid...to go out in rain...wo bhi akeli!!!! I know...sometimes I behave like a Moron!!!(sniffed)

Raghu(couldn't stop his laughter any more): Oh GOD!!! You are anything but a MORON!!! Ok, listen to me...if you have already understood the reason of my ...u..know...temper-loss, then why are you upset??

Antara: It's not called Upset'; It's embarrassment'.

Raghu: What?? But why are you embarrassed??

Antara: Because now you are going to make fun of me as I lost the bet.

Raghu stopped there immediately.


What bet?? Oh my...how am I supposed to know about any bet that Antara settled with Sameer?? What should I do now?? I have to talk very carefully from now.

Raghu: ummm...don't worry!!! I won't make fun of you now.

Antara looked very shocked and said- WHAT?? But why?? You said that the next time you catch me crying, you will...prove your point.

Raghu: But I can understand the reason of your crying. There is nothing wrong in this ...crying..thing.(I have no idea what I am saying)

Antara(looked very confused): What are you saying?? That's so un Sammer-ish. You have been telling me since we have met that Larkiyan hamesha rotii hai!!! Whenever I used to have tear in my eyes, you used to make fun and said that it's so girlish. Since then, I have always hidden my tears whatever the situation is; so that you can't prove your point that girls always cry and they are weak. And today you have seen me crying out loud. Still you are not going to take your advantage!!!


Raghu thought- My gosh...that sameer used to make fun of her whenever she cried. What the hell!!! Ohh...I see...for that reason she never cried in front of anyone after this huge loss. Dammit!!! She kept all her pain inside of her mind so that her pain doesn't become joke in front of Sameer. I was a fool that I was thinking her strong enough to face all these changes in her life in one go. She is NOT strong enough not to cry. In fact she was holding her tears of losing her eyesight for so long and when I caught her off guard, she got embarrassed because I saw her vulnerable human side??Gosh...why is she SO MUCH ..in love with someone who thinks her as a weak person and doesn't bother to respect her expressions??


Raghu held her on her shoulders and said- No, I am not going to take advantage of your situation. Do you know why?? Because I know that you are very strong, you are completely capable of facing any kind of disaster and I KNOW you are going to triumph. You not only lost your eyesight, but only ...A dancer lost the pleasure to watch herself see in the mirror dancing, A reader lost her joy of reading new poems and A girl lost her right to watch her favourite Rain!!! I know that your intention was not to cry in rain. You were happy...but the moment the raindrops touched you, you shed that shield which was holding you strong since that accident and you let your pain unleashed. It's not weakness, Antara. Every person has right to grief and you are doing just the same. And who am I to judge you when I can't even imagine what you are going through??


Antara was listening to him with so much concentration that she didn't realize the shiver she was getting for soaking in rain at night.


Raghu continued- I can understand your difficulty to accept the fact that you can't see...I mean..at least for now. It will take a lot of courage to...

Antara: What do you want to say??

Raghu: Don't misunderstand me...

Antara: I can handle it...you understand?? Don't worry. I can also be a normal person...

Raghu: OMG!!! Which moron is saying that you are not normal?? You are just perfect. What I am trying to say is- take it slow. You have to adapt your surrounding without watching anything. It will take a bit of time. You have to be patient. I am not saying that your capabilities have been limited. No. You can still do whatever you used to do earlier, but to adjust this new situation; you have to take some time. Today, you were dancing in this room, alone and surrounded by glass mirrors, you tell me...was it safe??? You were twirling and went out of this room during rain. It would have been ok, if you were very well practiced to handle yourself alone without seeing. But for now, your action was not appropriate. You are still new to your present state. You understand na, what I am trying to say?? You are an independent woman and you will always be. You just need some practice. Ok??

Antara: (After a long time, took a blink. In fact, she was staring at his face in quite a romantic way which made Raghu to shake her a bit)


Raghu: Hello!!! What happened??

Antara: (said very softly and was having a peaceful smile in her lips) Who are you??

Raghu got scared and said- Excuse me??

Antara: (still having a smile in her lips) You are sounding so different. As if you are not sameer.

Raghu suddenly felt a panic attack. He said- of course I am Sameer.

Antara burst out in laughter. She said- Arre relax!!! I know who you are!!! I was just...very impressed at your new attitude.


Phew!!! Thank god she was joking!!!

Raghu said- Waise, I want to ask you something.

Antara: Shoot!!!

Raghu: You know everyone has some particular reason for which they have the greatest desire. For which reason, they can't stop thinking- what if!!! What is your reason?? You were crying and I know there would have been hundreds of reason for your pain; but which was the biggest reason that was bothering you and saying you that you won't be able to do that because you can't see.

Antara: You caught that haan!!! All right!!! You are right!!! But I can't say you that. It's a secret.

Raghu got curious!!! He said- Tell me na!!! You won't tell ME???


Antara: Arre kaha na, it is a secret.

Raghu: It's about me right??

Antara: hmmm...yes!!

Raghu: please, don't do this with me. I won't be able to live without knowing this secret, I won't be able to sleep, I won't be able to eat and I won't be able to breathe...

Antara burst out of laughing again after watching his fake cry!!!


Antara: All right!!! I will tell you but not fully. You have to help me for completing my plan. After that, you will find the whole thing yourself.

Raghu: Ok.

Antara: Come to my room.

Precap:

Antara: I know you won't be able to help me in this matter...

Raghu: Who said that?? It's such an easy task. I know how to do that.

Antara almost skipped a heartbeat. Her mouth fell open.

Antara: Since when do you know how to play a guitar??

Edited by goodstorywins - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovelyyy ...beautifully written nd pics are tooo beautiful...loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
jyoti i so love the fact that u give music with each and every update
i know music always connected rantara together
is that the reason why u give music in every update ?
well i loved this update very much it was fantastic awesome
loved rantara conversation
how well raghu got out her pain and reason to not cry
how well he handled the situation
how nicely he managed antara
i must say he is getting excellent in understanding her

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