Beautiful lie!!!A Rantara Reincarnation FF; updated part 21 in page 46 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
waiting for the next one
thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Meri Jyo Raani...I have like a million Q's running in my head (like you said I will) and yes like you told me earlier this story gets even more intriguing after reading each chapter!

ufff you are a master mind and you know exactly what you have done to me...i am going insane!!!! I need help...like serious one!

Please do me a massive favor and update soon!!!!!

=>It was a fab update, you know exactly how to keep your readers hooked!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww it was to cute sweet yar
Raghu raghu raghu love him so so much and thanksss dear for those pics 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jyo, absolutely loved your update. I just checked here only to see if you have updated & you have 😊 Those parlour moments made me do emotional, those were the best. Thx for the lovely pictures. I love the suspense of Raghu's past & also waiting to read if Antara remembers hers. Waiting eagerly for your next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly... What the hell... That flashbacks keep on haunting Raghu..?? 😲
Nooo Jyo dear... 😕 You have to pull Raghu out of this tormenting situation ... .. And I know u would .. 😃
Huge doubt... Antara with no flashbacks..? Seems strange..🤢
Jyo.. u r just WOW as a writer which includes such pure romance..love with thrilling touches to it.. 👏
I feel so blessd to have u as one of the special n fab writers..

Raghu's past is very painful.. I think his dad was unable to spend quality time with him when he was a child..
Emotional attachment is growing deeper ... and the way Antara is bombarding such questions on Raghu is making him more impatient and miserable... uff... hope everything turns out be good...

PS: Those lovely Gunda-Gundi Moments... 😳 😳
Edited by nbw16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nbw16

Firstly... What the hell... That flashbacks keep on haunting Raghu..?? 😲
Nooo Jyo dear... 😕 You have to pull Raghu out of this tormenting situation ... .. And I know u would .. 😃
Huge doubt... Antara with no flashbacks..? Seems strange..🤢
Jyo.. u r just WOW as an writer which includes such pure romance..love with thrilling touches to it.. 👏
I feel so blessd to have u as one of the special n fab writers..

Raghu's past is very painful.. I think his dad was unable to spend quality time with him when he was a child..
Emotional attachment is growing deeper ... and the way Antara is bombarding such questions on Raghu is making him more impatient and miserable... uff... hope everything turns out be good...

PS: Those lovely Gunda-Gundi Moments... 😳 😳



@bold part-Neha, I am trying to create a suspense about Antara's connection to her previous life. Raghu has his flashbacks. Antara has also her own ways...😉 With the passing story, you will get to know that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Looking forward to it Jyo... Freaking awesome that how ur story is developing... :-P B-)
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Part 14:The Excitement

Raghu picked up the phone.

Antara: Hey Sameer. When did you change your number?? Papa told me that you have a different number now??

Raghu: Ohh...erm...yup!! I have changed it.

There was 10 seconds silence.

Antara: Wo...wo...I...

Raghu: What's the matter?? Hmm??

Antara: I wanted to ask you...something.

Raghu: What??

Antara: Today I was a ...bit..childish. I got very emotional to watch you like this...I mean you were so sweet and caring unlike before. So...so...I crossed my limit...

Raghu: It's ok. Aap...erm...I mean ...tum abhi bhi wahi lekar bathi ho kya???

Antara: I touched your face and...


Raghu: I said It's OK!!

There was a very awkward silence between them in phone and then...

Antara: Waise, tomorrow I will get released from this hospital.

Raghu: Really?? Your wound is fine now??

Antara: Doctor opened the bandage a few hours ago and he said that I can go home now. Just told papa that I must be kept in mental peace. That's it!!

Raghu: Ohh...Cool!!! I am happy for you!!

Antara: Sameer!!! Why are you sounding so serious??

Raghu: Am I?? No...no...I am in my usual funny mood.

Antara: Nope. You are a bit...different.

Raghu suddenly realized that he was getting sweaty. He got very nervous...

OMG Is she getting suspicious?? I have to shove all my personal problems aside when I am dealing with her. What should I say now??


Antara: Sameer!!! Why are you so silent?? Sameer??

Raghu: Hmm???

Antara: LOOK, the way you are saying hmm', it's a bit different.

Raghu: Really?? Was I used to say it in other way??

Antara: You never used to say it at all.

Raghu: Don't you like it?? You said that you are liking my new style of taking care!!!

Antara:(getting confused) I like it Sameer!! But why are you suddenly changing your way of talking??

Raghu: The most important thing that matters to me is- YOU like it!! That's it!!!

Antara(giggled) OK Baba fine!!! By the way, when are you coming home to see me??

Raghu: I...don't know. I will try to come as soon as possible.

Antara: Matlab?? You have any work tomorrow??

Raghu: Ya...ya...I mean...I have to deal with some of our wedding guests who are returning back to their home tomorrow. I have to take them to the airport.

Antara: Ohh...k. But you will try to come, promise me!!

Raghu: Ok, I will try to come to see you. Happy??


Antara: Very happy. I love you Sameer!! Bye!!!


Raghu: Bye!!

He hanged up. He changed in to his pajamas and laid on his bed.


He opened his side table drawer and picked up something. It was Antara's wedding anklet which mistakenly left in his pocket in that accident night. He held it in front of his face and said-

You know what?? Every time you say to me those three words during our conversation, I don't feel good. Because it's not ME who is supposed to hear those words from you. It's Sameer. But every time situation makes you to tell this to me. That's not fair!!! It's an injustice to you and me!! It's a violation of your innocence, your purity and MY FEELINGS!!! But as long as I am with you, I won't get anything even close to you which or who can hurt you Antara. I promise!!

He kept that anklet back in the drawer and called his secretary Aditya.

Aditya(In sleepy voice): Sir!!! What happened Sir!!!

Raghu: Calm down!!! Why are you so scared??

Aditya: Sir, it's almost 1.30 am. I thought may be some emergency presentation or meeting came on and to inform that, you called me!!

Raghu: Arre nahi!! I called you to tell that, I am coming in my office at 7 am instead of 9 am.

Aditya: What?? But why Sir?

Raghu: Don't worry Adi!! I won't bother you to come at 7 am too. Just informing you so that you can give me the number of the security guard so that I can tell him the time of my arrival.

Aditya: Ok. I am giving you the number in message. But Sir,...why?? I mean...7 am??

Raghu: I just want to finish my work as fast as possible so that I can...erm..save some time at night to do some other stuff.

Aditya: Great Sir!!! Anything else you want to ask me??

Raghu: Ya, there will be a slight change in my schedule from tomorrow. But we will talk about it tomorrow in office when we are face to face. Go to sleep now!!! Good night!!

Adi: Good night Sir!!!

Aditya hanged up and thought- Sir ko kya ho gaya?? Why is he gonna come office so early from tomorrow??

Thinking about every possible reasons for this weird behavior of Raghuveer Singhaniya, Aditya fell asleep again.

The following day at 9.30 am:

Raghu was almost covered by a pile of files and documents in his cabin. Aditya and the fellow employees were given instructions about the changed schedule of their boss. It's like this-

7 am-9 am: Raghu will do the works which involve only HIM like- quotation making, reading agreement paper, document analysing, designing blue prints etc. All of these need silence and concentration.

9.30 am-12.30 pm: Meetings, group briefing, supervision, presentation, decision making etc, which need joint efforts.

2 pm- 5 pm: All client meetings, signing contracts and outdoor works.

Raghu never thought that half day's absence could be so deadly for him. Instead of 8 pm, he was planning to work till 6 pm so that he could save some time for Antara. But now it seemed impossible for him. Piles of paperwork was waiting on his table for his consideration.

Is God taking my test even here?? Come on!!! It seems like my work loads got doubled over night. I never got so many paper works on my table in a single day. Gosh...

For the 1st time in life, he understood from his heart that he is a BIG PERSON for this company. Without him, everything is just in a mess. Not because every other man in this office is ullu ka pattha, but because everyone gives the most important tasks to him only, because from his teen-age (even before ending college), he became so dedicated to them that he gained a blind trust of everyone. Every single person believe that-He can never make a mistake.

Raghu was working with so much concentration that he missed the lunch break. After Adi told him to eat something, he got 30 minutes rest. Within 5 pm, he got all his work done. After finishing the cross checks on the files, agreements and his mails; finally he came out of the office.

He was feeling so happy for some unknown reasons. His heart was beating so fast. He was unable to stop smiling like a stupid.


Just because I am going to meet her now?? Like seriously??

He took his phone and was going to call Antara but then he thought...

No, I won't call her. She senses me na?? Then let's see Ms. Antara Sharma!! Whether you come to know about my arrival this time or not!!!



Precap:


Edited by goodstorywins - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another awesome update jyo😃
So they are having a little chat...so sweet😳
😲 he has so loads of work to do & he's excited to meet her..I'm excited too
Waiting for the precap❤️
I love the song...thank u for the lovely update..🤗
Edited by Josederose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yupp another lovely update dear...
Bt itna chotu sa update..:(
Np dear..it ws lovely as usual...
Waiting fr d rantara meeting...
Bechara raghu phass gya kaam aur antu
K beech...lol
Thanks n update soon..

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