::*LaRa FF::Love would always be a Struggle *::(Chapter7-Pg#23) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Upi i love the first chapter
cant wait for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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upi-congrats for ur first FF

1.title-awesome

2.Banner-stunning ,perfectly made for the title

3.concept -interesting,&excellent
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
very nice story Upi
love the way its moving
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: romantic10

Upi awesome FF
i really loved it plz update regularly :)
loved the concept

who is this nice guy mano😕cant wait for LaRa track 😆


sure ,
this mano Lata 's first lover 😉important person to make LaRa😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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@upila. awesome thread.. you definitely have writing skills 🤗
keep it rolling. 👍🏼 with you all the way
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Upi just a fantastic begining
i hope this mano is not our Sriram😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sameer_Namrata

Upi just a fantastic begining
i hope this mano is not our Sriram😆


I think it is 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lolz everything perfect about Sriram😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks to all for liking and commenting🤗




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@Fiona and shobhi this is only fiction 😉😆
Edited by Upilla_Grover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mat dekhna use jo tumhe rula de,

Par kabhi no hona dur uss shaksh se,

Jo apni aanke bhigo kar bhi tumhe hasaa de.


Thakur said yes Mano ,Your eyes itself say who is he?

"Pappa "

"Beta mano told everything to me ,he is not wrong at all ?ur vivah cant steal our bandan,If u really want ur pappa will happy ?yes then plz accept mano proposal"

(Lata look confused)

"Pappa I need sometime "

"Take ur time ,but except a good decision"

(She leaves there)

The whole night she thinking,she remember the word of Thakur my happiness laid on urs

Next morning she wake up early ,everyone's are still slept but Thakur about to go for walk

"Beta haven't u sleep?"

"Pappa i have to speak something to mano ,later I will explain to U"

Ok beta take care"

Lata leaves,Thakur smiled

At restaurant Servants are surprised to see Lata at this early morning

The wish her ,she too wish them back,she gave them the menu list about special food

And sit the table where mano used to sit

Servant finds its strange but they all known Lata will do it anything for the reason

So they leave it

@8AM -Mano comes there ,he find lata on his table ,his face blossoming spontaneous😆

He sit in front of Lata ,she give a little smile

They didn't exchange any single word even after long time

Finally Lata broke the silence Mano what would u like to eat?

No hmmm did u dad say anything?

Lata smiled &say"see mano I come to the point ,I know how good ur but u see I don't think I can be a perfect wife to U beacause for me my family was given first priority"

Mano stopped her and says "I know all things ,that's why I went crazy,plz don't hurt me,

I really love I respect ur family,i m sure I could be good son in law to ur family"

(Lata smiled)

He continued "plz just accept my love I wont pressure to marriage,we will married after one yr ,now I have finish a task which is most important to my company,meanwhile I hope ur brother &sister settled in their way,then I hope u will be will be free bie,(he winked and smile )"

Again Lata smiled (reasonable smile),Manav about to hold her hand,Lata see Thakur watched them from the entrance ,he gave a happy smile ,both get up,run towards thakur he open his arms and hugged both Lata n Mano

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They dated for 7 months,(dated means no luxury things just spent some hours in that restaurant together ,that's all 😆 she concern and intelligent girl He was a good guy, they really did love each other, Mostly mano like to hold Lata's hand otherwise there is no physical romance between them.😉😳

But for every moment of those seven months , Lata had a nagging, itching, aching feeling that something bad will happen, 😕those time Mano console her by keep saying nothing bad will happen .in between Lata noticed one thing from Mano,that's He have so much love and respect to his mother Sharmila Devi(she very popular lawyer )Mano known his mother loves him so much but he still hesitate to talk about his Love to her.

Despite his great heart, he lacked of courage to handled his mother but one thing is true,Mano couldn't imagine his life without Lata.

(Let's see his Love for Lata will give a strength to speak with his mother)

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(To be continued )

Edited by Upilla_Grover - 11 years ago

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