::*LaRa FF::Love would always be a Struggle *::(Chapter7-Pg#23) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
up awesome
i loved read one more time
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks a lot friends
third episode will be update soon(sorry Raj not there today😆😆 )
Edited by Upilla_Grover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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^^^^ NP. samrata fans are used to "wait" 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Upilla_Grover

thanks a lot friends
third episode will be update soon(sorry Raj not there today😆😆 )


waiting...😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.S.K.

^^^^ NP. samrata fans are used to "wait" 😆


waiting always worth 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loving you made me strong but it also made me weak. It made me happy but also depressed. It helped me up but also pulled me down. It taught me how to hold on but now it's teaching me how to let go.




That morning she open the news paper ,she don't know there is a news which is going to be a point to trun her life into upside down. :(
Yeah its about Govt soon going to start metro train system in their town even there is hint about route

(those route included Lata's restrant and fast food), defiantly her restaurant going to demolish .its main place in that city so they have so much profit from the restaurant after read this she stunned ,she cant speak anything ,after hearing this Thakur went heartbroken ,both sitting on the restaurant floor helplessly ,Mano came and he too known about this issue

He sit near to thakur "Uncle I understand ur pain but don't worry God is there he will hear the pain of us ,he might have solution for this,unfortunately in this tough time I cant be with u for training programmer I have to go for Japan,its one month project ,but I have no option, its time to fulfill my dream but I will try to find a solution for this,constriction work will be started after a month meanwhile we can do something"

He get up while watching Lata's teary face,really he wants to hug her ,but he cant

he said bye to thakur and Lata(he leaves from there )

Now Thakur bit relieved from the pain

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Another one month passed like this, due to interim election constriction plan were postponed ,Lata find something strange in Mano attitude ,he didn't call to her when he is in japan ,even he didn't came to her restaurant even after he back from Japan,

Lata's heart start to miss Mano whenever she called to him he have dozens of excuses to say

One day she plan to meet him in a park(its near to mano's resident ,they met there around 2 time before that. It had been raining for more than a week, so much rain it made everyday seemed so restless and gloomy. She called and said she was coming up. It was the third time she called Mano that day,finally Mano reach the park within 20 minuts, She was standing there alone, carrying her red Burble umbrella. He understand Her friend had dropped her off. It was raining and she was shivering. She looked weak and fragile in the harsh rain, but very gorgeous in that simple costumes cotton Kurti,&leggings , wearing not enough to keep her warm.

Mano walked up to her and said, "You shouldn't come see me anymore," (his eyes says stuff like how we shouldn't be together.)she stunned after mano says like,how ever she manged to speak

She said, "I miss you."

Mano didn't listen what she saying, he told her coldly, "Lets go, I'll take you home'. She disappointed ,she don't understand why mano's words are too strange ,she unable to express what she thinking , they walked towards Car,She said she hadn't eat lunch or dinner and asked if we could stop at some place to eat.Mano said oh u didn't?driver buy some snaks for madam on the way"while he open the car doors then see Lata ,u can go now,she frustrate so much "u r not coming " he replied " No I cant come ",

Lata close the car door "No thanks Mano I will go by taxi "she walks on the side of road ,mano follows her ,she find a taxi ,she go inside ,Mano runs behind her ,he put a visiting card on Lata's hands ,He said "u can meet this person to regarding ur restrant ,its confirmed construction will be started once the poll over "Lata's didn't say anything she still in the shock movement Mano further says take care of Yourself "(there is no reply from here)

because he knew, this would be the last time he saw her. He wanted to tell her I still love her, he wanted to tell her to stay, he wanted to tell her so much, but the taxi had already turned in the corner. Warm tears kept falling down on his face, blended with the cold rain drops. He was cold, not because of the rain. He was cold inside.

Lata reach the home with full of wet ,her family shocked to see her like this ,Rathi bring a towel and wipe her hair ,neck,Lata gently remove her hands ,"Nothing to me rathima"

(u know who is rathi ,she is foster child of Thakur family ,she lost her parents in her childhood and also close friend of Lata)

While Thakur hold her shoulder ,she cant control she breakdown in thakurs arms told the things between she and Mano

Thakur console her and he said he will meet his parents ,he ask rathi to give something to eat her

Lata denied everything ,she went her room Lock the door inside,she kept that visiting card under Letter bad

Her heart full of pain , she ugly-cried those kind of tears that come from somewhere inside you didn't even know existed"a place of fear and sudden awareness that you are completely alone.

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(Next keep the space for Raj entry-😉 and a clue unlike mano ,Raj might be a bad boy😲😆😆)

Edited by Upilla_Grover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
@upilla. bravo. story smoothly moving 👍🏼 👏 🤗

have a feeling Raj's name is on that business card 😉

doesn't matter if his entry is grey shade to start off with. our lata will melt his heart 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.S.K.

@upilla. bravo. story smoothly moving 👍🏼 👏 🤗


have a feeling Raj's name is on that business card 😉

doesn't matter if his entry is grey shade to start off with. our lata will melt his heart 😊



thank u shobhi🤗

Nobody perfect ,bad one will be good ,good one will be bad😉

Lata still have to go long way😆 ,
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
^^^ all of sudden, mano has become suspicious character. something to do with his mum and this new metro train station.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow upi well done job ,great going

i think visiting card is Raj is one & Mano 'S attitude coz of his mother
very perfect script 👍🏼

wait ,wait Raj bad boy
ok nowadays bad boys are rocking

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