Arhi OS:Raga Series (Complete) - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Kishmish


😆😃😛 Raga Kalyani does have the most beautiful songs ... ⭐️

Thank you girls for posting all the beautiful songs one seems to have forgotten ... 🤗
its really good to hear them again ...

Wonderful thread and idea ...


See the smile 😃

I've been singing and mom is the one who is pleased the most. Not the songs posted here but the devotional songs in Kannada, so yes Kalyani Raga is wonderful and Kalyaani is mighty pleased.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Marriages are made in heaven but the meeting happens in a Mandi.
Khushi loves food and Arnav loves sex, now that is interesting both important bodily requirements 😆

Bankelal and his medicine may work for them, to much of anything will be bad na???

Loved the one shot, as always.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Hayye meri jalebi!!!! I loved it!!!!!! Totally! <3 <3 <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Loved this " Love in the Mandi "
so typical Khushi and Arnav ...
all she thinks is of food and all he can think of is her attributes ...
But then let sex be the food for thought ... we don't mind ... 😆 😳
poor Banke ji was just left thinking !

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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Oh what a thought
Beautiful
Iam loving this
Brilliant idea
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Love can hit you in the weirdest place... The mandi included 😆. Super adorable one.
Food and sex ...hmmm... Well one could go for the safe and tested ...melted chocolates and whipped cream 😉😆... Or some thing different...like artichokes 😛?
Edited by jakhushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Beautiful raga series. I don't know much about ragas but love to listen all kinds of songs. Thanks to explanation about each raga is the songs at the end is based on the raga you write or random choice. I really like like your writing style. Pls can you add me to your PM list. Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Very good concept! I love melodies :) Just read Hamsadhwani.. will read the others too, (It's my quirk, I go through the recent first)It's too good!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Hey I just came across this series and so wanted to let you know what I felt on reading each and every OS. Here goes:


Raga Bhairavi: First off, I love the way you give us the basic info about the Ragas. Its so helpful for most of us who are unfamiliar with these brilliant components of Indian classical music. 👏


The funny undercurrents in this OS were simply too good. Calling Pam and Sim, Tweedledum & Tweedledee made me laugh out loud and as a result I had a silly smile on my face for the duration of this OS. The whole description of ASR's reaction to Khushi, her traits, her outfits and everything about her in general brought back so many memories of the show. 😳


But invariably the best part of this OS would be the morphing of Khushi into Bhairavi. That part was brilliantly written and even more amazingly portrayed. I could imagine the whole scene so vividly and hence even my mouth was open in a wondrous daze as I thought of the pretty picture Khushi must have made going all ballistic like that. My heart on the other hand went all mush at the thought of the great ASR reduced to a lovesick, besotted Romeo. Sigh it was like I was watching the show all over again. Such deep emotions your OS has brought out. 👍🏼


What really surprised me though is that he didn't waste any time at all in asking her hand for marriage (someone is very impatient no!) And what was funny was Khushi's jumpy reaction to hearing that her boss, her grumpy sadu boss, wanted to marry her!!! I had a good laugh here. Khushi's internal musings when she goes to office next day to find a changed ASR, the Jekyl-Hyde analogy, out-of-context references to Bhairavi all culminated in me laughing out loud again. 😆


Arnav's teasing talks, his reluctance to perform the never ending rituals, the threat of unleashing something sinister on his sister, mami's curiosity, equating family members to Gods based on their traits. Arnav's musings in the end all of it was awesome and supremely funny. 🤣


From the start to the end, I enjoyed every word of this OS. Subtle humor interspersed with knowledge was a treat to read. 😎


Thank you for giving us a video with the original Raga Bhairavi in the end as well.


Fantastic work.

Will comment on each OS separately. I just got a break from my exams so have lot of PMs to catch up on. Take care.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Terrific...bang on update...glad to have u on this forum...thanks for sharing ur work with us...

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