Here we go with the first part...i am not giving the character sketch...read the first part if you people think I should give a CS plz tell me in comments..i will update one...
the characters are a bit different from the show,i have sketched them differently...hope you enjoy it...
PART 1
Underground Disco...2 am
A girl in her early 20s,sipping her drink at the bar counter after a long dance with her friends.She is drowsy and imbalanced.She was sweating profusely.She got up and went towards the washroom,colliding and hitting a lot of people on the way.She reached the washroom and went inside.Throwing her bag on the table beside the washbasin she leaned onto the wall to stand.After some time she took out a packet from her bag and teared it open.Removing a spoon and a cigrette from bag she placed the power on the spoon and warmed it with a lighter.Then lighted the cigrette and started smoking in the drug.After some time she washed her face and applied some make up.Looking one last time in the mirror and giving a flying kiss to herself she left for the dance floor again.
She took another peg of whisky and moved to the dance floor.Dancing dirty with other guys she was gradually losing her senses.She was getting closer to one guy who was touching her lustfully.She went close to him and held him by his neck.He held her by her waist and pulled her closer.While dancing their bodies were touching each other and the guy was getting restless.He held her tight and got her face closer to him to kiss her.The girl was completely out of her senses and didnt know what was going on.She pushed the guy away and looked around.But every thing was hazy and she fell down unconcious.The guy took her in his arms and took her away from there.
Underground Disco...3.30amThe party has stopped.Young girls and boys are being taken away in police jeeps.The owner pleading with an officer and few men sealing the place and collecting evidences.
'Apke yaha rave party hoti reheti hai aur apko kuch bhi pata nehi,'the officer told to the owner,
'madam,mujhe sach mein kuch nehi pata.ye log yaha ate hain,dance karte hai,masti karte hai,ye drugs kaha se a gaya mujhe nehi pata.pata hota to mein party allow hi nehi karta,'
'bakwas band karo,tumhe pata nehi tha to kiya ye log yaha aise hi ghus gaye dance karne ke liye??ulte hath ki do char paregi na sab pata chal jayega,'
'Nehi madam.mera yakeen kijiye.Party ke liye jo bhi arrangements hoti hai wo mera manager deal karta hai,mujhe kuch nehi pata hota,mein to bus mahine mein ek bar ata hu aur dekh ke chala jata hu,'
'to kaha hai tumhara manager? bulao use,'
'phone to kar raha hu,per utha nehi raha hai,phone bajte hi ja raha hai,'
'phone no do uska,aur address bhi,aur haan agar mujhe pata chala ki tum kisi bhi tarah in sab mein involved ho to yaad rakhna,duniye ke jis hisse mein chupe raho,kheech ke bahar nikalungi,'
'jee madam,'the owner walked up to a constable and started to give the phone no and address of his manager,'ye madam bohot gusse wali hai kiya?',he asked the constable,
'Tum inko nehi jante?Inspector Roshni Mehera,department ki sabse honest officer hain,criminals se or crime se nafrat karti hai,kabhi inse jhoot maat bolna,warna to tumhari gardan gayi samjho,'
Inspector Roshni Mehera,working with the police force for the past few years.Her reputation in the department is not good.People complain she is too much honest at times and cant bare lies at all.Never had she been found to take bribes but she was seen helping a lot of needy people,financially and emotionally.She gets furious when children and young girls and boys come into the world of crime for the sake of survival.She sometimes cant accept the truth that the world is a place of devils.Small children are her weakness specially baby girls and spents a big amount of her earning for them.It is also said that when she interogates a criminal she doesnt hesitate to take his life, though such a case has never been reported,she does have her ways of interogating criminals.
Roshni took the passenger seat and signalled the driver.They drove away to the manager's address.They reached his home and found it locked from outside.She called on his phone and found it ringing in the side,hidden by a large tree.She took the phone and checked the call lists.There she found a name Ronnie who had been calling quite frequently.There were a few messages sent to ronnie from the manager's number.She took the phone and called the tech expert and gave ronnie's no and asked to trace it.
They again drove back to the police station.There all the youngsters who were at the party were present and were being tested for intake of drugs.Suddenly there was a commotion and Roshni looked towards the noise.There was a group of 2 boys and a girl holding a girl who was almost fainting.Roshni asked a lady constable to hold her and give her some water and was about to walk out from there muttering when she heard her faint voice again,
'Mam meri dost nehi hai yaha,mein uske bare mein bilkul bhool gayi thi,wo nehi hai yaha.'
'To isme itni bari baat kiya hai?ghar chali gayi hogi,tum logo se permission lena parta hai kiya use?'
'nehi maam,hum yaha ghumne aye the,use drugs ki adat hai per wo eise akele kabhi nehi jati,uske bhai ko pata chal gaya to hum sab ko mar dalenge,'
'kiyu uska bhai jalad hai?nam kiya hai tumhari dost ka?'
'mam wo Payal,Payal Rawte'
'Phone no do uska,'they gave her the number but she was not reachable.
'thik hain mein dekhti hu,koi photo hai uski?',
'haan mam ye lijiye,plz mam jaldi se dhoond lena,'the girl pleaded her,
'haan haan dhoond lenge,itni darne ki zaroorat nehi ha,pari hogi kahi nasha karke,amir baap ki bigri aulad,'Roshni replied quite irritated,
'nehi mam uska koi nehi hain,ek bara bhai hai bas,aur wo usse bohot pyar karte hain,payal hi unse hamesha gussa karti reheti hai aur ye sab karti hai jo uske bhai ko bilkul nehi pasand,'
'uff pata nehi ye ajkal ke generations ko hua kiya,akal kiya ghas charne jati hai?chalo re sabke ke bood samples leke choro sabko,bohot dimag kharab kar rahe hai,suno mere liye ek chai lana,'Roshni settled down on her chair and immersed herself in a file.
bas khatam...now plz give your feedback...would love to know your thoughts...š
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