KR OS: When Love And Hate Collide - Page 9

Originally posted by: Incandescence.

It has beeen much longer since I have written ANYTHING! -______-

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Though I haven't kept a track of the show.. and you know the reason well..

But as per what you have described and what you told me about the current track..

All I can say is the turmoil was aptly penned..

at least I felt you were peeping into their heads.. like, did you do that..

I wish show mein aise monologue dikhaye jaye..

toh show ki apni alag hi baat hogi.. nahi...

Well for me.. even your wishes are enough.. thats something to lighten up my mood..

so basically you dont need to be bothering about gifts but..

tujhe dena hai toh I dont mind :P

Bas isse zyada I cant say much about this..

You know why.. :D

Originally posted by: yogini64

Superb... amazingly portrayed..😃

The feelings ofcourse... which my dear show lacks in showing so well.. 😊

The guilt n the want to be loved ... kriya's mind is full of mixed emotions... she don't wanna go.. but for rey's happiness .. she'll do that...😳

The feeling of being ditched... heartbeak .. sleepless nights... rey too have faced hell of such times...

He won't be good to her now... I loved that line- where u mentioned he can hate her too.. if he could love her... tremendous thought..👏

& its true too... its surely extreme of his emotions.. of hatred n outcome of rejection...😒

But she can't face this wrath .. when she's not fully at fault... she faced the bitter games of reality.. lost her mother.. lost her lover.. & had no one to console her...😭

Yeah.. he's coming... to fight his inner turmoil... but wait... wth!!!!!!! 😲

Wth... u stopped here... its not gonna be tolerated... how could u... arrggghhh... u could've told me .. it was an elaboration of yesterday's scene only... 😡

Aage ki kahani kya sirf cvs likhenge? U LAZYBUM!!!!!! 😡🤢

Originally posted by: aishu3003

U became a stunner 😲
Congozzz vaishuuu 🤗

Originally posted by: Couch_Potato

RES

MERA FIRST ONE!

😆

UNRES

THIS THIS THIS!!!

I LOVE YOU. Seriously. You know as I was reading I was almost short of breath because this is exactly how Rey is feeling and thinking. EXACTLY. And I was soo taken by his internal monologue that I had to actually read Kriya's twice. Because I just wow. You got Rey bang on!

And Kriya - God she broke my heart. I actually genuinely felt bad for her today. More than I do when I usually watch the show. And that is an achievement dude. I just *sigh* This is perfect in every way!

The emotions. Their rationales. Their reasoning. Sab zabardast.

I'll edit this post again after re-reading to quote the lines that took my break away cuz there were quite a few of those too. I was lost in their thoughts and then I'd suddenly be jarred by these small gems I found in between. And yes, I just, I don't know why you're nervous cuz this is completely in-character, completely true (in my head) and just AWESOME.

Hats off to you! 👏

P.S. I really like the song too. The lyrics are awesome.

Originally posted by: -Khwahish-

You made me emotional man ...sacchi matlab.. Aww... sorry for that... And your comment made me emotional... i guess that makes us even... he he...
That was so serene and beautiful and ..and FLAWLESS ... Thank you so much...
I couldn't even think of anything else ... I could sense the pain , the sufferings they had been through all the while ...
This portrays the depth on understanding you have got for emotions when it comes to writing ...The way you penned Kria's state when her mother left her and how she craved to be in Rey's arm ...I don't even know what to say ...! I so wish I could replace aaj ka scene with your OS...
Honestly... even i hoped so.. I mean I had imagined all the intense scenes.. that they are alone here... and after the BB court scene... And this time kria leaving and rey coming to stop and all.. i expected so they would talk it out.. some intense scene.. rey blaming and all... but...
He still loved her and he didn't want those overwhelming feelings to overcome his inhuman concealment ...and he hated himself for still loving her ...that was just heart-wrenchingly beautiful

You know I always felt Reyaansh was "The Reyaansh Singhania" for the world , he was utmost perfect and the super hero but for Kria , he was just Rey , a human , a flawed human who couldn't abide by everyone's expectations ...and he needed love and he found that in her ...and you said all of that so bloody beautifully ...I could picture him clearly , he was her Rey ..!
he he ... purpose served.. that he isn't strong as he seems to be...
And Kri ! You know what , I love you for how you said she wanted to scream and convey her love but she was not that brave , she couldn't let ANYONE question her love for him , because it was the only thing that kept her going ...!
This point always linger in my head.. that though she comes and tell the truth.. who will believe her.. i mean it isn't easy to digest such a huge thing...so the fear of not getting accepted and all... i felt its bound to be there.. that she fears...
YOU have an AMAZING quality of portraying emotion and I have a soft corner for this work of yours
aisa AUR likho ..! Thank you so much.. I feel honored.. And i will try to write more on d3... i don't normally write d3... i am more over non-d3 stuffs... 😳
Pm me next time you write something Aye aye captain
Pardon my ranting please ..! never ever minded.. loved the ranting...

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

Thank you so much shaalu...

Glad you liiked it...

^_^