KR OS: When Love And Hate Collide

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES

MERA FIRST ONE!

😆

UNRES

THIS THIS THIS!!!

I LOVE YOU. Seriously. You know as I was reading I was almost short of breath because this is exactly how Rey is feeling and thinking. EXACTLY. And I was soo taken by his internal monologue that I had to actually read Kriya's twice. Because I just wow. You got Rey bang on!

And Kriya - God she broke my heart. I actually genuinely felt bad for her today. More than I do when I usually watch the show. And that is an achievement dude. I just *sigh* This is perfect in every way!

The emotions. Their rationales. Their reasoning. Sab zabardast.

I'll edit this post again after re-reading to quote the lines that took my break away cuz there were quite a few of those too. I was lost in their thoughts and then I'd suddenly be jarred by these small gems I found in between. And yes, I just, I don't know why you're nervous cuz this is completely in-character, completely true (in my head) and just AWESOME.

Hats off to you! 👏

P.S. I really like the song too. The lyrics are awesome.
Edited by Couch_Potato - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyya!!
Happy bday shenz!!
N comin to d os..
WWWOOOWW!!
So deep so pure so expressing..
U said all d words which they wanted to say..
U carved their feelings so mesmerizingly!!
Gr8 work yaar!!
Go going keep it up..
Thnx fr pm n further also keep sendin pms..
:) :)
Loved to read it 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome dea..! U really potrayed kriyansh emotions whic dey wr goin thro vry wel. Luved it
Edited by geeth_amar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written love it u explain rey n kria's emotions very nicely
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You made me emotional man ...sacchi matlab..
That was so serene and beautiful and ..and FLAWLESS ...
I couldn't even think of anything else ... I could sense the pain , the sufferings they had been through all the while ...
This portrays the depth on understanding you have got for emotions when it comes to writing ...The way you penned Kria's state when her mother left her and how she craved to be in Rey's arm ...I don't even know what to say ...! I so wish I could replace aaj ka scene with your OS...

He still loved her and he didn't want those overwhelming feelings to overcome his inhuman concealment ...and he hated himself for still loving her ...that was just heart-wrenchingly beautiful

You know I always felt Reyaansh was "The Reyaansh Singhania" for the world , he was utmost perfect and the super hero but for Kria , he was just Rey , a human , a flawed human who couldn't abide by everyone's expectations ...and he needed love and he found that in her ...and you said all of that so bloody beautifully ...I could picture him clearly , he was her Rey ..!

And Kri ! You know what , I love you for how you said she wanted to scream and convey her love but she was not that brave , she couldn't let ANYONE question her love for him , because it was the only thing that kept her going ...!

YOU have an AMAZING quality of portraying emotion and I have a soft corner for this work of yours
aisa AUR likho ..!
Pm me next time you write something
Pardon my ranting please ..!


Edited by -Khwahish- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rechu 😛
unres

Vaisuuu🤗🤗

how can u write soo beautifully re😲👍🏼

hats offf👏👍🏼

d way u portrayed rey's and kria's feelings wer jus superbbb👍🏼

i loveeddd this to d coreee❤️❤️

and i lovee uu for writing this🤗

mindblowing write-up on d wholee👍🏼
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME!! BEAUTIFUL!!
I really luved d way u depicted their luv fr each other. Although Rey's mind is telling him to hate Kriya bt his heart only belongs to her. U portrayed their emotions flawlessly nd beautifully.
I hope Rey nd Kriya again get together nd we get our Kriyaansh back.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Though I haven't kept a track of the show.. and you know the reason well..

But as per what you have described and what you told me about the current track..

All I can say is the turmoil was aptly penned..

at least I felt you were peeping into their heads.. like, did you do that..

I wish show mein aise monologue dikhaye jaye..

toh show ki apni alag hi baat hogi.. nahi...

Well for me.. even your wishes are enough.. thats something to lighten up my mood..

so basically you dont need to be bothering about gifts but..

tujhe dena hai toh I dont mind :P

Bas isse zyada I cant say much about this..

You know why.. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome
loved it beautifully written
thanks for the pm

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