ArHi SS: Storm Within *COMPLETE*

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Hiii...Awesome ss...Loved it...heart touching concept...felt Sooo bad 4 Arnav...but Khushi was right...a mother will do everything 4 her child...beautiful ending...perfect...Thanks 4 da pm

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Sara queen

@crazyqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

super .

loved it.

please write more ss and os.

please PM me them.

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sarb

@sarb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Its superb, love Reading all the parts..

Itz just a revleshing treat ...

Reading all in one go ,,,

and not waitng

Thanx...

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

beauriful os... loved it 😊

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

That was beyond beautiful and so emotional but so amazing

after a while i kind of had an idea as to why he is angry at her, what was killing him inside

for Khushi it was a hard choice to make as she loved both people so her choice was so both the people she loved survived

for Arnav he didn't want to lose Khushi, his love, his life, and although had shown her hatred all these months bundles of love for her and the child was beneath it all

Khushi never gave up, she could see right through him, right through the hate facade and she still had hope that she would survive but she did make sure that if she didn't her baby would be loved by Arnav

the last time they made love, the last kiss which it really could have been but Khushi didn't lose hope or stop fighting, she stuck to his voice, his love, their love and baby and overcome the storm within now leading a peaceful and happy filled with love life

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hukf

@hukf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

OMG,This is the first time i am commenting...and i must say u r an awesome writer 👏...The way you portrayed both their emotions...Damn,I literally cried. 😭... Good work TINA 😊 Keep writing ...😃

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samarablog

@samarablog

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Hey...awesome ss... Was scared till the end...woww

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Divya

@..Divya..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Awesome story.. Loved the way u described arnav's pain :( :( ..
Well written.

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RK612

@RK612

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Lovely heart touching story, enjoyed Reading it. Thanks for the pm

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Amina Mahmood

@Amina87

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Wonderful story...
Simply outstanding...
I always fall in love with all your stories...
It has also became my fav one...
It was sad, painful and heart wrenching...
But the end was wonderful and soo beautiful...
Love you doc for another fantastic story...