ArHi SS: Storm Within *COMPLETE*

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Siya

@Siya6490

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Wonderful story... Happy to see that its a complted one...otherwise i will not b able to wait for the next part...

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IDatIF

@IDatIF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

I cried and cried while reading this ss

You should have directed IPK that is what it was

Each part was written so beautifully ,each emotion was written amazingly

Loved reading it

Finally khushi and arnav hamesha

Tina brilliant ss

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

It was intense yet very beautiful... All through the story I had my heart beating nervously as if everything was actually happening in front of me and I was so tempted to read the end first so that I knew everything's gonna be fine in the end, only I know how I controlled myself to not do that... Tina it was just wonderful, I don't know whether Khushi was right or wrong but I felt Arnav's pain and was a bit max at Khushi, if she could have other kids then why put yourself at risk but happy that it all ended in happiness.

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

A beautiful SS! :)

Very heart touching!

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

That was lovely story TINA.

If you had posted in parts it was a sure tear jerker 😭 and I for one would have thought that my belief in TINA to write a happy ending has to prevail over the thoughts of negative ending.😃

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Sindhu Ramakrishnan

@Sindhuramakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

u kept me in tenterhooks till the end. it was fantabulous and i wonder how much a woman loves her child.

hats off.

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reshmimohan

@reshmimohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

That was lovely.

Had me biting my nail for some time.

Loved it.

Thanks for the pm.😊

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

So beautiful . How do u manage to give such awesome n beautiful ARHI stories always. I m so glad that I came across ur beautiful works n now they r just so undetachable .

This one was short but the most emotional one ( haven't read shameless so Dnt knw)). I literally was crying reading it. But our Arshi never deserve a separation ever n that's why their love won n made through the dark storm. Loved it . An the love they share combined with ur amazing writing simply take us to arhi land we never want to come back from.

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

wonderful...by reading this i remember a line from film 'bewfa'...a girlfriend can be bewafa, a wife can be bewafa but a mother can not be never ever a bewafa

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gifttag

@gifttag

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

This was an amazing story and you wrote this a while back and letting us read now??? Not fair.

When I started reading it, I thought that its not like Tina to write something like this one with so much anger and hatred to start with but you know what I really loved the way you did justice to this wonderful story...I just could't guess what was wrong with Arhi's relation for Arnav to react and act like that and it seemed like Khushi had done something awful and Arnav is not to be blamed and he is suffering because of what she did and I only knew the what the reason was when you were ready to tell us and I was like, oh dear this is sooo sad but I had a hope in my heart and I was saying to myself...relax Tina does't do sad endings and you did't and for that Thank You.

I loved it loved it loved it absolutely. That was awesome and so wonderfully written.. I think I would love to read more stories on this style.

Thank you for the PM.