NEW ASHLOK FF NEW MOON part 7 NEW UPDATE!21 PG - Page 13

Awesome update dear! Please pm me when u update next time. Without pms is really hard to find it and i like ur ff. 🤗

hey pls hlp me out ppl...cn ya pm this across cuz I am really unable to do it

Wonderful story!!i wish
bshlok met d kids once again! 😭 but he left b4 dat

Thanks for updating awesome update

just finished reading this from part 1 loved it, cant wait to read what happens next.

amazing update as usual and im glad i accidentally stumbled across it. Please just update the heading and date on the title and that way others will know its been updated. Hope your exams are going well.

fantastic last two update tanya!!! enjoyed them thoroughly was a pleasure to read

HEY EVERYONE iknw I am updating after a long time...but guys my boards are going on and I jst cant leave that ryt that is quite important well now only my chem exam is left then I will give frequent updates...I am also planning to start 2 more fan fics on ashlok during my exams both will be a college rom com types...and I am turning this ff INTO SS and 4 more updates this story will end...because with the lack of response I am getting I feel this story is not than much appealing

"see i made Maggie for u"said aastha and pushed the bowl of Maggie forward

"NO MAMMA NOO...U NEVER HAVE TIME FOR US...YOU DONT LOVE US"shouted angel and ran away towards her washroom

"What happened" asked roy

"None of your business" aastha replied bluntly before wiping her tears and walked out of her room and places a chart on her working table were shlok and swati were seated

Actually they all had planned to meet up in aastha's office but then angel did not allow aastha to keep a step out of the house and she was also throwing momentarily fits which tensed up aastha so she decided to keep the meeting at her house...and once when everyone arrived she immediately regretted her decision cause no one was really working...Lidiya was hell bent on ignoring their clients that is shlok and roy for god knows what reason and shlok... shlok just seemed lost ya even roy was lost...lost in lidiya...and aastha could not do her work properly due to the interruption caused by angel

"you should have just taken her to the carnival aastha" said lidiya

"but lidiya yesterday's meeting was important" mumbled aastha

"what kind of mother u r...u shud keep ur kid 1^st" said shlok arrogantly

"YES mister shlok agnihotri u r ryt as a mother i should keep my kids 1^st...but as a father i should also support them by working so i can provide them with almost everything they want...i am her mother as well as her father sometimes...SOMETIMES...the situation get out of control i could not manage two of the roles because at the end of the day i am a single person 4 god's sake" SHOUTED aastha tears flowing uncontrollably and she frantically wiped them of and turned around so no 1 could see how much helpless she was

Everyone in the room was shell shocked with this break out ...aastha was always very skilful in hiding her emotions but when it comes to her kids she every time loses control

But as soon as she turned she sees angel standing their holding honey in her hand her eyes swollen red and she looked up to her mamma with guilt in her eyes she slowly let go of her dog and quickly places her hands on her ears she sit on both of her knees

"sowiieee mummaa...angels ish shoo sowwiee"she cried looking down

Aastha quickly went and scooped up her lovely daughter in her arms...she herself was crying seeing her daughter like this

"SHH SHHH BABY its oki...mumma is sorry...i know mumma is very bad...she did not keep her word ryt...don't worry bapa{god} will punish mumma"

"nooo"cried angel "bapa knows angel's mumma ish the best in this world" angel said sobbing

Aastha smiled and kissed her daughter on her forehead and placed her on the table

"Want to still got to the carnival princess" asked roy suddenly earning angry glances from every1

"What don't stare daggers at me...there is one carnival outside the city and i just agreed to pay them a hefty price so they keep open for more 4 hrs so please go get ready all of you "ADDED roy quickly

And aastha gave him a suspicious look "why r u doing this" asked aastha

"you are treating me like piece of shit just because i am his brother" asked roy pointing to shlok with a genuine hurt expression

Aastha almost felt guilty Roy has always treated her well and she..."i am soryy i have this phobia sort of thingy for the AGNIHOTRI clan u see" aastha stated

Roy just chuckled

"so we umm...FRIENDS?"Asked aastha extending her hand towards roy

"obvio pretty head" said roy giving her a friendly punch

"great she can even befriend that monkey but still she wnt talk to me" said shlok under his breath

"did u say sumthng BRO"asked roy

""naa nuthng"said shlok grumpily

"Who is he momma"asked angel pointing to roy

"i am your cha..."but roy stopped abruptly

"CHACHU...he is your chachu"said aastha again shocking every one

"CHACHU?"asked angel puzzeled

"yeaahh DADDY'S BROTHER"said aastha

"daady" squeaked angel and turned to look at shlok

Though this was a small gesture but shlok was filled with happiness...he never knew a mere acknowledgement from his daughter could give him so much happiness...the urge to hug her just increased by a thousand times more because seeing her aasta in tears a few minutes before was killing him

"I'll go wake ALOK up" said Lydia and slipped out of the room without sparing shlok a glance

Aastha picked angel up and headed towards their room to change

"Did u speak to Lydia?" Roy asked Shlok

Shlok simply shook his head in negative when aastha came out casually dresses in peach lacy top and faded blue skinny denim...she always had this aura of carrying herself with confidence even if she wears something as simple as a churidar like she use to wear before their marriage or a subtly stylish denims...she was perfect...but shlok always played the fool by ignoring her hurting her...and maybe he will never be able to rectify his mistakes now

And there comes angel with a white chiffon dress and holding a red lipstick in her hand and tugging her mommy's top so she could apply it

Shlok just widened his eyes at this hw old is she...?GOD he thought

And soon all of them were at shlok's car and peacefully driving to the carnival...!!!

As soon as they reached the carnival everyone made to the Ferris wheel expect aastha as she was not really a fan of that ride sho she chose towander around the food stall for some while...taking a big fluffy cotton candy she went and settled herself on a bench and waited for others while enjoyinf the soft pink lush melting in her mouth...she let the the sweet taste settle in her mouth and then took another big bite from it...and her mind wandered of to shlok

The presence of mighty shlok agnihotri was doing no good to her already messed up life...but then she saw her kids their feelings...she could never make their life perfect...she couldnever ever take their fathers place

"THEN GIVE UP"said a voice near her ear and she jumped from the sudden sound

"U WOULD HAVE GIVEN ME A HEARTATTACK"she shouted looking back and saw a smirking shlok

"and you will soon make me deaf"said shlok covering his ears...and walking all around the bench and went near and and simply fell back resting his head on both his hands behind

"well as i was saying give up"said shlok looking at her"

"give up what"asked aastha

"juggling everuthing life aastha"said shlok

"do i have an option MR agnihotri?

"ohh you to aastha come to INDIA ...come back to me" said shlok hope and sincerity burning in his eyes

"you think i am fool to repeat my mistakes?" asked aastha in a vry matter of fact tone

"hmmm...i know i was a fool back then but id deserve a second chance aastha" said shlok pleadingly

"and i also deserved a happily ever after after my marriage...i also deserved someone to take care of me during my pregnancy...i also needed sum1s support when i gave birth to twins...one use to be awake all through the morning while the other used to be awake at nights...if one stopped crying the other will start at the very next moment ...i wanted someone to share my happiness when both of them took their first baby steps even i..."

But before aastha could say more shlok covered her mouth with his hands and pulled her towards him

"Aastha even i can say that because of you i missed the five years of my kids lives...ok...but i know i have made mistakes...i cheated you into a fake marriage but thant gives u no right to take my kids away from me...or depriving our kids of the happiness which a father cAn only give them"

Oki now seriously aastha was quite though it was shlok's mistake how did she make her kids suffer for this

Aastha was quite for sometime but then suddenly she spoke each words piercing through shloks heart and breaking it all over again

"What about a deal then Mr agnihotri...for my kids...i really want to think about coming back to india getting backto you"

Shlok looked at her

"only gor our kids u wana get back?"asked shlok

"I HATE YOU SHLOK...i hate you with all my heart...so while staying with you lemme make some things very clear...i don't want u to interfere in my life...and stay out of my way this way my kids will be happy you can play ur house house with them...but just stay out of my way...and if i see a lil bit of partiality or my daughter being treated any differently then i leave your place then and there" stated aastha and got up and was about to leave

"this means your coming with me"asked shlok

"yes Mr agnihotri its a DEAL"she said stressing at the word deal and walked away from him
shlok looked back at her retreating g figure

"Yes aastha...a DEAL which i am very soon gona seal with our love...i will win u back Mrs Aastha Shlok Agnihotri"

END

Lol. How were your boards?
Take your time to write . No pressure!
This was a nice update, I loved the way Astha stood up to Shlok and set conditions. Shlok on the other hand wants her back. Update soon!

Originally posted by: infernofyre

Lol. How were your boards?
Take your time to write . No pressure!
This was a nice update, I loved the way Astha stood up to Shlok and set conditions. Shlok on the other hand wants her back. Update soon!

I feel like a warrior going for world war 4...12th is really getting on my nerves...and till the results em sure gona blast up 😆 well thnxx...its like 4 more updates and I am ending this...cause I think this concept was to mature for me to write like I cant handle it anymore...u knw I jst dnt knw how to patch up shlok and aastha again...like the hate wich aastha ans shlok is not jst a passion that comes with love u knw its intense and shes hurt...pheww too much for me to write in so I am ending this up in a light note...well I am sry dunno y I am rambling this all to u bt still HEY THANKS AGAIN😃