NEW ASHLOK FF NEW MOON part 7 NEW UPDATE!21 PG - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awesome update kyp it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
shlok has to pay for his deeds nd astha shld gave him hard tym
nd lidia is swati dts shocking as well as interesting
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG yooour stooory is just awesomeee
i am in loveee with it
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...i was so excited to see your update and it was a fantastic one at that...glad you explained how the kids took the whole shlock incident and then shlocks regret and how he explained his feelings to his cousin ...i liked how aastha poured out her anger and her feeling to shlock, how he hated her and she assumed he would be bad to the kids...and his anger that she didnt give him a go...and the last part Swati...i never would have seen that coming...i cant even begin to think...so many ideas are coming about the next chapter...the three of them working together...shlock coming to terms with his past love and trying to win his wife and kids back, aasthas coming to terms with her best friend being her husbands ex...although i cant wait till the next part...your exams are more important:)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Now swati has also come in the story.thanks for pm.all the best for your boards.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg I really want to know what happens next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Why do u alwys underestimate urself? It ws nt at al boring...u cnt simply jump to romantic scenes na! Loved the update😳 luck 4 ur exam😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
how lidiya and swathi are same
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
what an update yaar...awesome...pls if you can...do update sooner...
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chaichil

Ohki everyone I know I am very late...but guys please do understand it is my pre boards going on so I never got a chance to open my laptop...and as it is my 12th my moby and ipad is also confesticated by my parents so I cant even sneak out to update and 2moro is my Eng. exam...and though I am no scholar in eng but I usually do not study qki bore hota hein eng 🤢 and yeah still its my fav well well but to make up for my late update I have written a very long update this time...according to Microsoft it is a total 7 pages...!!!! and well a happy new year to all my readers

PART 5

"New York is beautiful lidiya"said aastha who was on a skype call with her best friend lidia she was on full swing work that following week not even a minute of break as she wanted to shove shlok out of her systems the only thing she was positive about was her children's reaction when they came to know that the man they met was their father but what they did not understand was y their mother left him because they were too young to understand things like betrayal and love but the way shlok behaved with their mother was not acceptable by them so they decided whatever aastha might have done would only be for their ultimate good and they promised never to open that topic again and that they all were happy as they were as always awesome threesome though she felt that angel really longed to see shlok once again and sum were even alok wanted a complete family but none voiced out their thoughts

But aastha decided not to tell anything abt this to lidia cause she did not want her to be tensed now and anyway aastha did not want to remember all that now so she completely chucked the topic

When she was busy talking aastha's assistant one MR Nihaal enters

"maam"he called out but aastha was in no mood to respond as she was busy talking with her beastie

maam"he called out once again a bit loudly and this time he was successful in gaining her attention

Wat aastha gestured and did some peculiar action with her hands

But still her eyes was glued to the computer screen and she was least interested at what her assistant wanted to say

"maam one Mr agnihotri is here with a project...shall i give him the appoinment"asked nihaal

Aastha very absent minded nodded her head eyes still glued to the screen and indicated five with her hands

"5 o clock sure shot maam"said nihaal smiling charmingly and aastha gave a small grin to him and he decided to leave the place and went towards the door that's when aastha shouts

"nihaal dnt close the door"

"no maam worry not i remember that it is damaged i will get it repaired soon"saying this nihaal leaves the room

And aastha continued her chit chatting

Meanwhile in Chicago

"sir may i come in"asked a young fairly good looking man

"yeah u may roy"

"sir that..."

"SHLOK...you can call me shlok bro we are cousins afterall"said shlok looking up from the laptop and smiled at roy

"well u r my boss too naa par"said roy smiling

And he continued "anywayss shlok i guess you have to leave for new York...you have to go to NEW MOON actually these people there are very professionals for event management and they have started a new branch at new York they have an excellent reputation in dubai...as u know we really need a high profile inaugural party for our new office so i think they are the best...and damn their boss...sexy she is huh i saw her pics in the business magazine one ms Aastha kirlo..."

But roy suddenly stopped his sentence on mid way and looked totally shocked at shlok...and found shlok staring at him with the same expression

AASTHA"both the men shouted in union

"we found her dammit"said shlok with unknown happiness spreading through all his body

"i mean wow she was ur wife"

"she is my wife dud3" answered shlok stressing at the word is

"yeaahh rryytt thts the reason she was in exile for 5 years...and then boss comes to know after 5 LONG years that he is no more the handsome single dashing SHLOK AGNIHOTRI but a man with 2 kids"said roy in a mocking voice

"ROYYY ur gone"shlok shouted and followed roy who had already made his move and escaped from his cabin

The both men started running all around the office like school kids and their staff's started staring at them with a smile playing on their lips...many girls started aww-ing now and thought how cute shlok and roy sir were...cute and sexy that was indeed a combination

Finally getting tired of their tom and jerry game they sat down on the chairs of Roy's cubicle

"bro wat abt aastha?"asked roy

"what i dont understand is how come after hearing my name she gave us an appointment"said shlok slightly confused

"mayb destiny...well leave that now as you have got an opportunity make the best out of it and win her back dud3"said roy encouragingly

"not easy bro not at all easy...when she went away i realised my feelings for her with time passing by my love increased for her and damn i crave for her now. But for her its exactly opposite she went away from me due to hatred and with time passing it has increased to such a leavel that gaining her trust back is not at all easy" said shlok almost heartbroken

"no worries bro...just look at her anyone would be ready to marry her she is that successful and beauty that we all can witness and no doubt she is beautiful so if she would have actually moved on she would have married...at least for the sake of her kids but that she did not...that means she has some feelings right...and bro its not that easy to kill LOVE"

"but Roy it oh almost killed her na dud3 with my word my action"a lone tear escaped shlok's eyes while he said that

"he bro"said roy and hugged him and soothed him

NEW YORK

ohhh my gaaawwwddd ib caant believe it...you are coming here lidiya"shouted an excited aastha over her phone and suddenly gave a glance to her sided and burst out laughing seeing her children covering their ears with their hand and giving their mom a disapproving look on her silly antics and this are the moments when aastha looked more like a kid

Aastha gave them a cute smile and lowered her volume and started talking to lidia

"ohh lidiya i'll so wait for 2moro"said aastha

CHICAGO

"hmm tomorrow 5 pm u have to reach their bro "said roy lazily changing the channels on his tv and placed himself very messily in his recliner

"i am so waiting for tomorrow" said shlok happily staring at the ceiling and the images of their 1st kiss crossed his mind he smiled and closed his eyes

NEW YORK

"what angel this is the 26th dress u are changing what's ur problem man" said alok sitting in his pyjama and looking totally bored and waiting for her sister to come out the loo so he can get ready...but madam was not ready to come out as today after a long time they were getting a holiday so their mamma promised them that she will take them to her new office and how can angel not look very sophisticated after all she is ANGEL and is expected to look like an angel

"i am no man i am woman...actually a beautiful woman" said angel with full on attitude coming out of the washroom looking very pretty

Meanwhile aastha who was witnessing these scene had her mouth open ANGEL she thought and nodded her head with a smile playing on her lips

Finally with the lots of huffs and puffs the children got ready and alok was feeding angel with her breakfast while aastha was packing some lunch and snacks for the kids after that they left for their office

As they entered their office everyone started greeting aastha and kids and they really welcomed the tiny tots making angel very happy though alok gave a damn to all the commotion and plucked his ear phones in his ears and moved to the kids room where he opened his laptop and started watching the latest episode of power rangers while angel gave a toothy grin to everyone and started right away mingling and making friends with every one

Aastha went inside her office and started ordering in some material which she needed for an upcoming event...and when she was about to check the file which nihaal gave to him this was some grand high profile inaugural party and this project would really boost up their reputation level but before she could open the file

"May i come in. maAm"

The voice was a unusual one but yet similar...but this voice aastha can recognise even in her sleep she almost dropped the file she was intending to work on and gaped looking towards the door

There shlok was peeking inside her cabin was that nervousness on shlok's agnihotris face thought aastha

"Can i ask you y the hell are you here"asked aastha coldly

"Pure business"answered shlok and entered the office even without her permission...!

"What is this shlok i dnt want to meet or talk with you even if the reason is not personal" stated aastha and pointed her hand towards the door indicating him to leave

"See aashta i do have an appointment"said shlok and made himself comfortable

What the hell this devil thinks of himself he comes to my office and acts as if its his property shlok agnihotri you really don't know me ...no worries i let u know all about me very soon thought aastha glaring at shlok

"NIHAAALLL"she shouted

Nihaaal was surprised to hear his aastha shouting like this she never did tht

What nw thought nihaal and walked into aastha's cabin where he finds his boss shooting death glare to a man standing before her...and if his knowledge is correct the man was mr shlok agnihotri the very famous business tycoon

"don't you think u should ask me before giving appointments"shouted aasthA

"maan but i did inform you"said nihaal cause sumwere he knew this was coming because the pretty lady was busy gossiping when he asked for the permission

"what?when?"Asked aastha almost with a irritated face

"When you were talking or i mean skyping someone"said nihhal

"U saw i was busy is tht the time when you ask all such things don't u have brains god damn it"said aastha raising her voice

"maam i am sory"said nihaal slightly irritated because never before his madam had acted so ill logically

"LEAVE NOW"shouted aastha

And this was the max nihaal could take, he stormed out of the room and in a huff closed the door

CLOSED THE DOOR

It took a little time for nihaal and aastha to realise what just happened

"NIHAAALLL"

"SORRRYYY"

Both of them shouted from the two ends of the door

"maam please relax please nothing will happen why do you unnecessarily stress yourself i'll get the person to repair the door ASAP'he said quickly and left from there before aastha could further shout at him

"NIHAAL...NI..."aastha said banging the door with her fist

"hum tum ek kamre mein band hoo aur chavi kho jaye"(well this is a hindi song for those who dnt knw hindi)

Hummed shlok turning his chair...and facing aastha and gave a victory smirk

Aastha simply glared at him and walked past him she took out her phone and dialled several number and got busy with her calls paying no attention to shlok and after taking a good sweet time she comes in front of shlok and says

"we...tht is new moon enterprises is not intreseted to work for agnihotris...huh"said aastha smiling and aaded a a very formal we are sorry to disappoint you with her sentence and was about to turn when shlok's pull her and she falls back on his lap

"you have signed a contract missy"said shlok very slowly looking at her absorbing her closeness he could not help but to observe how she perfectly fitted in his arm as if it was only made for her...her lips were very pink and welcoming he stared at them for a while but her eyes distracted him...sadly he noticed that her eyes had just one emotion...HATRED for him

"leave me shlok"she said slowly tears filling up her beautiful doe eyes

AASTHA listen to me i was ju..."

"please shlok"

But instead of leaving her shlok encircled his arms around her waist and pulled her more closer

This proximity was killing aastha...all their good and bad moments were going on in her head and aastha could not bear it

Lidiya every time had asked her why does she hates her husband so much like maybe he is this way because of his past or something...being a strong woman aastha should have changed him

But what lidiya did not know was she was even ready to love...what she really loved him the way he is even with his arrogant attitude

But what changed her so much?

The way she has been sperated from her parents?

Or being a single mother all these years?

Or the feeling that nobody takes her life seriously or or is it just because she was craving for love and a secured life...all these 5 years she did not have anyone for herself

She was all alone

What happened next surprised her , shlok slowly wiped her tears away but aastha jerked his hand away and got up quickly

"aastha please just listen to me once"

But aastha ignored him and continued to do something

"well lidiya will lead ur project...shes my partner and is equally or i must say much more efficient than me"aastha spoke up finally

"AASTHA ENOUGH IS ENOUGH" shouted shlok and pinned her to the the working desk

Aastha's eyes widened in fear and she looked straight into shlok's eyes

"why can't you listen"

"did you ever try to listen what i had to say anytime before"asked aastha

"thn why the hell should I" she shouted on his face and started to struggle to free herself but she was helplessly sandwiched between shlok and her table

"why can't you let me live my life in peace shlok"

"you have got enough peace in these 5 years aastha...now its enough" said shlok

"who the hell are you to decide and peace? Peace right to live with 2 kids and raise them all alone and you call that living in peace?" shouted aastha

"you choose it aastha" said shlok coldly

"did I have an option Mr shlok...I was afraid that if I will have a daughter which I have...what will be her condition in your house and I never wanted my son to be a male chauvinist like you" shouted aastha

Shlok pulled aastha closer as she crashed into in his hard chest

"how did you decide that I will not be a good father all by yourself aastha" asked shlok almost whispering

Aastha looked up at him with red eyes

"because you hated their mother so much in the 1st place" replied aastha crying uncontrollably

Shlok loosened his grip on aastha because that answer hit him on the right spot and did hurt him badly

Aastha moved backwards and fell on the ground and started weeping while shlok blankly stared at her...he now knew the pain she went through and he did not know how he should rectify his mistake but the fact that hurted him more was that what he had done to aastha can never ever be rectified

Suddenly they hear the door click...aastha somehow regained her normal posture and wiped away the tears quickly and then the door opened a lady in beautiful red salwar kameez greeted her with a smile

"Lidiya "aastha called out in excitement and rushed towards her and engulfed lidiya in a tight hug

Meanwhile shlok could not believe his eyes...the person the lady who aastha was hugging...the long forgotten yet very familiar face of that girl...shlok was speechless

Aastha broke out of the hug while lidiya looked behind aastha to find a tall guy in black standing behind her she was spell bound and was as shocked as shlok

"shlok"she muttered

"SWATI"said shlok as if he had seen a ghost

END so how was it?...I know a bit boring like I myself was getting bored while typing it😆😆...I am not that good at writing out emotional scenes but what to do cant write love scenes ryt away na...I have got to develop the story so I guesss u ppl will bare with me and support me for pm its simple just like and comment and this also encouraged me and lifts up the writer in me...so pretty please support me if u genuinely like my story BE FAB with lots of love TANYA


oh my... what painstaking lines... neautiful tanya dear...👏

thanks for the PM!!!😉

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