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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 10 B...

zoya gave good fight with asad...

what zoya said is true... and he just want his son...

playing with zoya's emotional...

now trying to get closer to her... just to get zyaad...

but its not love...for zoya..

just happiness

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

wil wait for your update ...

i'l pm u, as i'l update thnks fr cments dea
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

update soon.

plzzz
plzzz
plzzz

i'l update it by 6 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie



i can understand as a writer... is very hard...

me has a reader... to very hard..

but i only can think him as aak... no one else can replace it...

i'm going to read all the update sent to me...

just karan... no one else...

and surbhi...

(they did the same to Barun now karan)

ya barun case was also sme, bt i cnt tolerate ksg's exit.. 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 11- section A . . Zoya was upset at asad's decision of chosing her. . . Zoya in khan villa. Zoya tensely sat on dinner table. . . Ayan: "bhabhi, u r looking upset" which distracted zoya. Zoya: "nthng," she dint looked intrestd in teling anything. . . . Humaira cme taking zyaad, she gave hm to zoya. . . Humaira: "alah, bhabhi he is becoming so naughty these days, he dint let me even eat properly" she gigled taking her seat. Zoya: "oh, zyaad, u dnt let chachi eat, naughty" she talkd to hm sweetly. Making every1 laugh. . . . Next day blue wells constructions. . . Qureshi's cabin. Qureshi: "hw could mr. Asad join hands with my junior" he said to one of employee. Employee:" i think smthng is wrng with hm" . Qureshi: "i'l make hm wrng, he'l regret hs decision" he took hs fne and caled sm1. Qureshi: "i'l send u hs pic, just attack hm, which should look like an acident." he cut the call. Employee: "sir, r u atacking mr. Asad, bt hw cm it wil help u". Qureshi: "u dnt wry abt it, i cnt let this opurtunity go.. It will ruin my carrer". He threw hs phone. . . . Asad's cabin. . . Asad: "wat should i do? Allah please show me way hw cn i get my son bck" he prayd. . . . Suddenly hs fne rang, it was biswas hs pa. . . Asad: "yeah biswas" he took hs cal. Biswas: "sir, the gupta's cnstruction needs an inspection" asad cherished in hs mind, thinking of hs upcmng plan. Asad: "dnt wry, we'l do it today, i'l to hv sm architect with me" he smirked. . . He cut the call. . . Zoya's desk. . . Mihika( her rival ) : "zoya, he cngo i cme to knw u got join up with mr. Asad, lucky u r, u knw we die for hs look and u'l wrk 24/7 with hm. . . Zoya: "r u kiding me? I hv my hme to i m nt suposd to serve hm all day" she rudely said. . . Neha: "chill zoe, and mihika plz stop it" they were distractd as a man cme and informed them that asad is calling them. . . . Asad's cabin. . . Three of them stood in line. . . Asad: "as u knw mr. Zoya khan hd joined with me so i chose two of u as her interns, and u r suposd to cme alng with me and zoya to gupta cnstruction site" this news cherished mihika and neha. . . Neha: "wow sir, thanks" so mihika reapeted. . . Zoya: "mr. Khan, i m a family girl i need to look after my son so i cnt cme" she repilied denying hs offer. . . Asad: "dnt forget i m stil ur senior, obey me no u hv to obey me" he said placing hs hands on table. . . Nt wiling bt too zoya was forced to agree to hs words.. . . . After an hour, it was 2 in noon. . . Asad offered them to sit in hs car. . . Mihika took frnt seat, with asad, zoya and neha took bck seat. . . Asad wantd zoya to sit with hm bt couldnt say anythng. . . NT YET CMPLETED, CHECK BELOW
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 11- section B. . . Zoya was iritated and wanted to get out of car, bt presence of neha and mihika forced her to sit.. . . Neha: "sir, so where s site!" she askd frm behind breaking the silence in the car. Asad: "we r about to reach." he answered looking zoya on back seat. Mihika: "by the way, arent u maried sir" she askd paining zoya and asad's pained nerve. It looks clear she was intrestd to asad. Asad: " mihika, i m maried and i hv a son too " it shockd mihika and also zoya, who dint expectd these words frm hm. Mihika: "r u serious sir, where is ur wife?" Asad: "she dint live with me." he said seeing zoya in mirror. Mihika: "is she idiot, hw cn she leave handsme .. I mean caring man like u" to which zoya couldnt hold. . . Zoya: "oh realy hw much u knw hm, that u r so cnfidently taking hs side" it pained asad bt he was hapy it was 1st time she spoke in car. . . Mihika: "u knw hs wife" she askd seeing zoya's mean to her words. Asad: "we r there" he cutted their talks and made them see the site. . . . They came out of the car. . . . Asad was joined by Biswas, his PA. . Asad: "oh u r here, lets check the roof area" he said to biswas and turned to girls who was busy in their chats "mrs. Khan, u guys r suposd to look the ground floor" to which three of them simply nodded. . . Asad left with biswas. . . Mihika: "zoya, ur full name is mrs. Zoya khan?" she askd noting asad's words. Zoya: "yeah" she silently said. Mihika: "he neha told me u hv a son and ur husband left u, ur story is sme as mr. Asad" she said making zoya angry. Zoya: "cnt any1 be khan expect mr. Asad and ya, my husbnd left me thats none of ur bussiness." she rudely said and left frm there with neha. Mihika folowd them. . . Qureshi was all set with hs plan.. . Outside site, he directed goons hw to attack asad so that it could look like accident. . . Asad was busy instructing biswas. When 1 goon tried to push hm smhw he was saved by biswas bt bdly fall on roof. . . Zoya in ground floor: "i think smthng is wrng upstairs" she said to neha.. Neha: "what? Asad sir is there just chil he'l handle" bt zoya dint listened to her and made her steps to roof. She dint knew what made her realise abt hm, bt she did. . . Asad ordered biswas to take all three girls out of site, which zoya heard.. Biswas was left with no other option bt to obey hm. . . Zoya hid herself so that biswas cnt take her, she dint knew why she wanted to knw what hpnd.. . . Biswas dint noticed in panic that zoya was mising, hearing goons name mihika and neha to were dumpstruck. . . Asad fought with goons, zoya was crying seeing hm in pain bt she cnt risk hs or her life.. Asad made all of them fail, and restd at corner facing the down of wall, when sm1 amng them was abt to push hm, . . Zoya jerked that man away frm hm that to made her fall: "mr. Khan" she shoutd in pain. . . Asad was shockd to see zoya here: he first fought with that man, " what the hell r u dng here?" he burst out of hs concern. Zoya: "who r they" she answered a question for her questin. . .he made hr stand, and saw he could hardly walk. . . He smhw managed to take her out of roof, bt it was being dificult for hm to cary her so he took her in hs arms. . . Zoya: "i helpd u, it doesnt mean that i'l gve u my son, leave me" to which asad simply smiled at her inosense and took her out of site. . . He freed her. . Asad: "so cn i knw why u helpd me mrs. Khan" he balanced zoya gvng her hand. Zoya: "u leave me, first u tel me who were they n why they were upto u" asad left her hand. Asad: "accept it u care fr me mrs. Asad ahmad khan" he smirkd. Zoya: "i do bt u dnt" she was trying to walk when fal, asad held her.. . Asad: "i do zoya" he said with brimed eyes holding her in hs arms. . . . They stared each other, in cnfusion of their feelings. . . .@@@@.@@ . . Thats all, do pm me and send budy requests.. . . Thanks for ur lovely likes and comments. . . Do like and cment. . . Next part tomorow.
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Posted: 11 years ago
updated n sory fr being late
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Posted: 11 years ago
its lovely
plz.. update ur other update

teenager love😉😉
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update❤️
asad cares for zoya immensely and is trying to get her attention..
i knw its difficult for u as a writer to continue after karan's left..
but will continue reading ur story😊
missing karan😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a beautiful update👏
asad mentioning his wife and son
zoya's concern for asad
zoya falls into asad's arms❤️
update soon

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