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Posted: 11 years ago
hi mounika, sorry will read the last two parts tommorrow and comment and am really exhausted with my college work. sorry.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow not only the guys but the girls looked smoking man
are they all trying to give each other heart attacks
that was so cute
all five pairs were lost
awww wasnt that sweet
and only with nani and dadi screaming their names they came outta it
so payal asked khushi not to pull the stunt she did again
knwoing how much not only she suffered not arnie too
kya pyaar hai ji
love it for sure
hmmm what his maa sang for him was beautiful too
and now he has promised his mother he shall destroy those who destroyed his family
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting update
outfits were lovely.
Wonder what they are planning to do
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow loving this story
Read from beginning without stopping
Thanks for sending link u really r a talented writer
Loved how u merged past with present n how u made everything fit smoothly
Wow can't believe how extreme Arnav went to plead for his khushi back .. he really does love her intensely
Interesting twist how khushi had brothers n was a royal never saw that comin n the fact that their parents planned them to unite brilliant
Looking forward to seeing all 5 couples comin closer to each other n of course seeing their revenge n justice served to those slimeballs
Can't wait to see what the boys have planned
Plz keep future updates comin my way looking forward to reading on
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The outfits were beautiful.
Arnav finally understands the meaning of his mother's lullaby.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃
Edited by zafi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chapter...awesome pics...appreciate your effort to research for the pics...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
eagerly waiting for revenge part
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update . i loved it .
i liked the flashback song.
l liked lavanya and anjali teasing.
thanks for the pm.
waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry mounika i said i'll comment next day but i couldn't do it till now. The updates were awesome. Poor arshi stuck with dadi's dress. Lets see what she gave them. Ok coming to serious those villains. One thing i want is they should not die easily. Death is a small punishment when compared to hell they created for thousands of lives. No death make them suffer as much as possible. Thank god our heroes are going back to make their lives the better. Even though there are hardships ahead , i know they will win.
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Posted: 11 years ago

note: sorry friends, for taking this long time to update as my sem exams had started so it made me busy but now my exams r over .from now I can update u regularily. I think u all were wondering why payal,khushi were adressing arjun ,maan with their names then hope my answer satisfies u arjun ,maan knows they had sisters after very long time in their family so they want them to treated special so small arjun,maan asked their sisters to address them with there names not as bhai's to show their love .khushi,payal aggreed and promised to it as they too were small but they said they will call them bhai when they were angry or hurt. hope this explanation is okay with u. thanks for comments and hope u like the palaces.

CHAPTER 22:

Now they reached lucknow but suprisingly they not landed at sheeshmahal or MITHRAVINDHA mahal (khushi's house) but at some mahal which they didn't know.

payal: arjun this not our house or sheeshmahal then why were we landing here.

palace where they landed:


arjun: u know pari

they were now landed and surrounded by 2 bodygaurds for each member protecting them from the goons which surrounded them

arjun to head of their security: mishav, see to these goons we will come in fewminutes.

to which mishav noded

though some goons were attacking them on the way to the boys tackle them and now all were at entrance of the mahal

arjun who was cool upto now but after entering first in to the house was now burning with rage as if he will destroy the whole house with his eyes

now all know to which house they entered

dadi: arjun why?

arjun: u asking me why dadi ?

before he talk all the members of the house came down and seeing them they were shocked

arjun who saw them went to the old man in them and said: hi ,mr.vasudev malhothra nice to meet u and ur family .but I will tell u it's will not at all nice for u.

arnav also came to arjun and said looking at vasudev: I think arjun, we have to make our introduction to this cruel old man. what say mr.vasudev malhothra did u need it ? but let us frist sit and discuss whay say?

arnav looked at his family and said: hey come on, sit uncle won't mind it, he will stand while we sit, as we are now his important guests .

now all seated down with one leg on other & smriking seeing vasudev was controlling his sons and grandsons who were ready to kill them.

arnav: uncle, I will now help u .i know it's difficult for u to manage ur dirty sons and grandsons for long

vasudev was again controlling his sons and grandsons who were ready to kill them said: why u came here ?

nk: hello uncle, I wanted to play a game with u so that's why we came here.

vasudev: who r u joker? mind ur word's

arnav: nk is his name, what he said is true and I think, u know him as ur bas***d grandson shyam lived with us na

vasudev: mind ur words arnav, ur standing in our house and talking about my grandson

arnav: so what , u cannot even lift my hair

vasudev controlling his sons and grandsons :I think u don't know what ur family and agnihothris went through

arnav now with full of anger standed up from his seat with gritting teeth: I know all details, that's why I am here with my family .we came here first to warn u caluculate ur lastdays u bas***ds ,now the hunt game is on .

vasudev: ho, I am scared here

arnav: then let me scare u ,listen my hunt start with ur son's ,then ur grandson's ,atlast u.all the death's will be horror vasudev horror that they didn't even want to born again.

arjun: u didn't let us to see my dad's body to us na.vasudev then let me say to u ,I will let u see all the bodies but u can't fire them as they in pieces and u can't recognise it.

vasudev seeing dadi: see jaya

maan with anger stood up : rajamata

vasudev laughed a evil laugh: ok rajamatha, atlast u put some sense into ur grand son's to face me.i will appreciate ur effects as now I am seeing aryan in them even in arnav.

arnav: ha u will see more but my mama is a good hearted man not like we ,thanks to ur efforts un knowingly u ur self started to dig ur pit.

anjali who was seeing all these stood up and went to shyam

anjali looking directly in to shyam and slapped him hard and took her manglasutra from her neck and thrown it on shyam's face : hello ,mr.shyam malhothra I am waiting for this moment from yesterday so that I can present it u .

shyam raised his hand but his hand to slap anjali but before it reach her payal,khushi,anjali,geet stopped his hand in air at the same time .

payal dropping his hand down: ur creep don't dare to raise ,u r days are over

arjun moved to shyam and hold his collar while arnav,maan,nk,akash controlled other malhotras: count ur days and do enjoy what u want to in these last days after ur uncles and father u were only our aim shyam and ur death is more painful than others mind it.

arnav: today I and khushi was taking our responsibility so plan what u had we r here only and u r always welcome

akash: u think we came from city and we r soft like cityboys but never mind my bhai can go so much cruel while he deal with scumdogs like u.

arjun: bye and beware

with that all went smirking leaving fuming malhothras

shyam: did u see dada, that handicap bitch slapped me and that payal had warned me but u signal me to keep calm.

vasudev with a cruel tone : don't worry shyam, we will surely kill us like what we done to their parents and may be with more cruel and more over we now have the whole agnihothri and arjun,maan's property for us unlike last time .and we will be world's richest family and no one will reach us .if they want they have to triple their property to reach us.

all were now satisfied with that

vasudev: let these young lads to enjoy some days then we will strike them.

all noded and went to their respective rooms with evil smile.

at oust side after getting again into chopper arnav went to anjali

arnav: di r u okay?

anjali: ha chotte I am more fine than ever now.

nk: u know di ,I was bit un happy seeing u put ur manglasutra even after knowing about shyam but I can't tell u now how much happy I am seeing what u done.

all nodded to it happily ,lavanya said: first time u said true mr.nk

nk blushed listening to her making arjun, arnav, akash, maan to roll their eyes while others were supressing to not to laugh at him.

now again they landed arjun,maan,dadi,payal,khushi had tears after seeing their house after so many years, while younger raizadas opened their mouths seeing such a beautiful palace.

mirthravinda palace(khushi's house):


side view:


khushi hugged payal: jiji ,our house na

payal: ha ,princess it looks the same

entrance to the house:


with that both runned in to the house in excitement and happiness

others too went behind them smiling seeing the both girls exictement but arjun was trying hard to not to show others his vulnerable state by constantly gripping his hand into fists saying himself for pari and princess is there so don't remember that

arnav however seen him and understood him by seeing in his eyes .yes, why not they had same eyes so it won't be tough for him to undestand so he placed his hand in arjun's shoulder to which arjun surprised but didn't say any thing but continued walking in to the palace with arnav's support.while all other enjoying it's beauty.

but when they entered the hall, they saw khushi who was happy till now crying in payal's arm who was too crying but giving the support that her little sis needed.

arjun who was controlling till now went to his sisters but he was surprised yes he was ,after suffering day and night with the night ware which happened in this very spot 10 years back should be more by seeing it but it didn't infact he was now getting stronger and hugged his two sisters who was crying remembering the nightmare saying them it's okay he is there now .

others now know what this place held but they were helpless.

maan who saw this now got a relief .why don't he? he thaught it will be taugh to control his bhai after seeing this spot which will remain them their mother's pleas.but now he know it won't at all effect him like before .he always felt if his bhai has pari and princess with them he cann't suffer at all like knowing it will hurt them now same happen here he was observing his bhai silently from the moment they landed here at first he was going to suffer from the nightmare but the moment he saw his sisters crying he was cooled down a bit and went to that very spot cooly and caming them .this shows maan what he thaugt was right his bhai loves this two more than any one and that love helped him to over come his weakness.

Edited by kb.mounika - 11 years ago

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