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TALE


INDEX:
character sketch:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100217210 -page 18
part 1,2,3,4: scroll down





:part 17:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100130284 page 16

- page 25

part 23:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101401825 - page 29

part 26: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102243437 - page 38

PART 1:
The story starts from the night where Arnav accussed khushi for entering into his life and moves out not seeing the pain and hurt look her eyes were helding upto him until he is out of her sight.

payal who witnessed all this rushed to help her sister so that know khushi will be occupied and didn't hurt.so she goes to her as if she had just came there

payal: khushi why are u standing here come inside it's so cold out side & ur starts are not even their.

khushi wipped her tears and faked a smile before going to Arnav's room to meet her jiji thinking no to let her jiji see her pain as she knows her sister is also facing more but what she forgot is that her jiji will easily understood every thing in her just seeing her eyes.

khushi : what jiji did u want anything ?

payal:no khushi ,i just came to see is every thing okay with you as i have an which saying that some big is gonna happen to that's why i came here.

khushi smiled and thought: jiji u r unconditional love towards me never failed u it aways warn you before the bad reaches me but jiji today is the last u r feeling like this because from tonight their won't be khushi in ur lives. i know i am hurting u jiji but this will only good for u and all.The man i loved unconditionally along with u had asked me indirectely to leave him.

payal: pagal why are u laughing is every thing okay with u?

khushi: jiji could u please get me milk and ha all is okay with me its just i am not getting sleep.

payal gone to get milk for khushi hurriedly as she knows it's not good to leave her alone in this condition if not she thought it will help her to have some sleep.

khushi after making sure payal was out she just searched for the bottle she wants after getting it out from drawer she just gulpedwhole bottle tablets in one go with help of water and hide it fat not to let her jiji knew what she had done now but she mumbled a sorry to her jiji who will be devasted after knowing what she had done .her thoughts get halt when payal entered her room with milk.but khushi kept it aside with out drinking it.

payal: if didn't u wanna drink it then why u asked me.


khushi: jiji it's been so long since we have talked with each other like old times if u don't mind can u please spend ur time with me now jiji till i feel exhausted talking with u and sleep ,ha i wanna sleep in ur lap jiji and i think arnavji will not come that early .

payal:pagal come why would i mind ? i will be more happy if u sleep in lap khushi.

khushi now placed her head in her jiji's lap and sharing all their old times as per her it's only the heaven where she can close her eyes happily by spending her last few hours of life where not knowing all this payal lovingly stroking her sister 's hair while listening to her baby sister thinking that she is successful to divert her sister from her early conversation with arnavji.

at the same time arnav was driving his car like manic rembering all the events of days how his sister tried to kill her baby? how it was difficult for him to convince her ? then he rembered how he had accussed khushi which made him hit the brake & reverse the car to reach his khushi and apolosize her of his previous rant.

arnav thinking: how can i accuse u khushi inspite of what u have done to me .i promise u this is the last time i will be hurting u ,from tommorow onwards i will show u how much i loved u & how important of ur presence in my life .

with that spirit he started driving fast to reach her fastly not knowing it's already late.




note : please people who ever read this give comments so that i can proceed and can improve my story if it's not reaching u .my previous story a family's tale is discontinued as i was not getting comments from u showing u r complete dislike. i hope i can reach u with this story though it is familar with earily one.don't misunderstand me as i was expecting comments ,it's just because it's my first time i am posting any thing like this and i don't want to irk u people if my story is not bad,


PART 2:

Here back in arnav's room after talking lot with payal and getting pampers of love from her jiji like old days khushi was sensing the effect of full bottel sleeping pills were started working so she asked the last wish she had to her jiji .

khushi:jiji i want to sleep can u please sing a song for me jiji which u would do if i was so disturbed to sleep.

payal worridely : what is that khushi are u having any headache tell me?{in thought: even though u tell me i cann't do anything at present ,khushi why ur hiding things from me sorry khushi i can't help u but i know all problems of us will be solved tommorow and we were waiting eagerly for it . Tommorrow birthday of urs will change all our lifes khushi.let keep that strength upto tommorrow.}.but she was cutted by khushi.

khushi : offo jiji it nothing we remember all our old days na that's why i had an argue to listen to ur beautiful voice i think still no one knows this art of ours in RM na.

payal: ha madam no one knows it but also about u ,pagal ur voice when u sing it is just will like an nigthinggale' voice.i will only sing if u sing with me it's been ages we both sang .

khushi: ha ok jiji{in thought : it's my last song with u jiji i will never know how lucky i was to get a chance to sing with u } jiji the theme of our song is love.{in thought may be devimaya can get me my arnavji's love in next birth if i sang my last song in love for him }.

payal:ok

let's start with u

but other side at RM:

In RM a beautiful girl of 23 years entered silently mami who was through hall has seen and screamed for others to come and hugged that girl tightly.

anjali,nani,nk,akash,mama happy to see this after so many years and hugged her

that's when Arnav came hurridely to go to his khushi but when he saw that girl in hall he instantly hugged calling her geet

geet: bhai

before they continue they hard a beautiful voice so all followed to seewho is it thats when they saw payal,khushi singing

there lines are like this

khushi:aah ahh... hrudayamane kovala thallupulu theriche thalam prema prema

{ love can open the temple doors of heart}

both payal,khushi sang to gether:prema prema prema prema...

payal eying khushi as she meant this word is best suited for her sister:aah aah...thyagamane devatha sanidhi velige dipam prema prema...{the one who always sacrifice will always have love with her}

both payal,khushi sang together:prema prema prema prema...

khushi following payal lines &supporting it with her statement why she sacrifices all :anuvanuvanu chelimi ki ankitha michunu prema{the love [she] will give every part of her to her lover }

both payal,khushi sang together :prema prema prema prema...

payal retorted it by saying :thanu niluvunna karuguthu kanthini panchunadi prema{ she will melts for lighting others thats the love}

both payal,khushi sang together :prema prema prema prema...

khushi thinking about her love to her arnavji by this line :gagananiki nellaki vanthena vesina vanna villu e prema{this love will act as bridge between sky and earth by rain bow}

both payal,khushi sang together:prema prema prema prema...

now both repeated the above lines for making it as song

khushi:evadame nerpagala e prema tanaku avaramu am teregi adagadu e prema{this love only makes to learn to give but not to ask any gift}

payal:navvadame chupagala e prema mantalanu venalaga marchunu kada{if this love makes to show smile it will also change fire into light}

khushi:gali ki gandamu puyadame pulaku telisina prema kada {the only love plants knows is only to give its fragrance to air}

payal:ralina puvulla gnapakame kalam chadivae prema kada{the dried leaves of the plant is the love story that will be teached to generations}

khushi:preyamina tana vari shukashantulae kori meligetisukame prema{she will behave in a way that will give peace to her dear ones that is love}

both payal,khushi sang together :prema prema prema prema...

now again the first stanga will be repeated by them

khushi: ae gata nu endugo vidadisi ventadi vetadu ape prema{ why love will leave seperate some couples}

payal:love makes our heart as music by it it will sing song

khushi:shasvatha charithala e prema muthyuvu arugani chirunama{love will live ages with out any end for it}

payal: shawashala mangala harthi ga veliginchedae e prema{it will forever lit up breaths that is love}

khushi's eyes were getting high telling her her life ending is now but she know she have to wait so her but she said this words :maranani adirinchi maru ganma ha vachi karuninchu varamae prema{love will fight with death and will come as her next birth that much power it has}

khushi: prema prema prema...

Arnav ,Akash and whole family who was listening to their song with out making them aware of it . though firstly mami,anjali were not satisified and irrked with the sisters behaviour as they were singing songs while their is not at all rest in the house but nani one order to not stop make them shut their mouths but soon they too enjoyed the song as they all really felt it's two angels voice .where as nani ,nk,geet were happily listening .but arnav , akash heart bleeded mainly arnav's because they felt that their wifes are silently pleading under stand their love they didn't give any love to their wifes and decided they will surely make their wifes to feel their love and make them happy.

here after khushi finished that line payal was getting scared of seeing khushi eyes which blood red & were closing she instantly screamed khushi as she saw blood was spillting out from khushi mouth and nose.

all rushed inside the room to see why payal screaming khushi as they cannot see what happen to khushi as her back facing them.But the sight that greeted them is hunting theit hearts.

note: thanks for the people who commented .please people who ever read it comment it though it is postive or negative

PART 3:

Seeing khushi like that Arnav rushed and hugged her .With a lot of difficulty and blood splitting from her nose and mouth khushi cupped arnav's face

khushi smiling to Arnav : arnavji ur wish is coming true .i am going away so that u,di and all will be in peace. sorry for the trouble i caused for u by entering into ur life Arnavji but pls look for my jiji arnavji she is innocent.I love u

with that she gone unconcious with a smile in her face showing like her name she also will be .Though Arnav's breath hitching and his heart was bleeding after listening to her but he knows he can't live with out her ,the time her breath stop his breath will also mingle with her so he wanna save both their lives to show his Khushi his love and tell her what she really brought for him by entering in to his life ,with that only determination he picked her up and scremed Akash to get car keys.

all who were numb upto now followed him as fast as they could.after getting into car Arnav constantly saying her is

Arnav: i love you khushi ,pls hold on ,nothing will happen to you .

when Akash is going to the best hospital to the world that is PKSA hospital.

payal: Akash go to PKSA GUEST hospital it is neear for us.

Akash while driving: payal i know we have to get khushiji hospital fast i know but PKSA GUEST hospital will only allow for its owner's not all .so ,calm down we will reach PKSA hoapital in 10 minutes.

Payal: pls listen to me Akash they will surely give entry to us

Akash: but payal{he was cutted by nani}

Nani:akash do as payal say we have entry to it.

so Akash had no other option,he was driving as fast as he could breaking all the traffic rules and he cannot think further by seeing his bhai who was only murmuring to Khushi by hugging her as close as possible and Nani,payal were crying alot if not they were seated and supported by Nk who was helping them even though he is crying they two would collapse to the floor ,while his di was crying and praying constantly for Khushi and she was supported by Mami and Geet.

after 5 min they reached hospital all were suprised to see they were not only allowed but also all doctors are waiting at the entrance with strecture as if they were instructed which is not .immediately they taken Khushi into structure and moving towards ICU Arnav and payal didn't leave khushi's hands and screaming to her to that nothing will happen to her, but in real sense we can say both became historic and assuring themselves than to unconsious Khushi.If in other case they entered this hospital they were definetely awed for its beauty.

Though it was 10 minutes when Khushi was taken into the ICU but for all it was some hours . Arnav was only seeing the gates of ICU with out any motion even NK,geet was trying to make him break out from that spell because it was very painful to see him him like that as it was telling them if any thing happen to her they will loose both. he was not at all responding to even anjali .Akash was trying to stop payal who was historically crying but he know it will be no use his wife loved khushi more than any one in this world .He know he not only loose the best saali khushi but also his bhai and his wife if some thing happens to her .nani was crying alot she was consolling by mama,mami.After 30 min guptas came but no one is answering their Questions as all were numb after alot of trying they to were broke out for their daughter.

After 2 hours doctors came out from ICU. Arnav who was in not motion was the first one to reach them and surrounded by others to know how is khushi

Doctor with his head down :Payal mam sorry to say we cannot do any thing as poison was surrounded every where in her body she will die if we take oxyzen mask{no Arnav was collapsed to ground saying no and others were numb listening him}

but before the doctor can continue further two tall young handsome young mans came from no where and gripped his collar with rage evident in both eyes

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi read it now. Its superb start. Want to read more. Pls pm me
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HI THANKS FOR THE PM. TELUGU AMMAYI VA NUVVU? WOW SUPER GA UNDI UPDATE. NEW ENTRY GEET. SO, NICE WAITING FOR THE UPDATE. AND YA JUST A SMALL ADVICE. POST EACH SEPERATELY AND A GIVE THE LINK OR THE PAGE NO. OF THE POST IN MAIN POST OR NEXT POST. SO IT WILL BE EASY. AND YA, I FORGOT TO INTRODUCE MYSELF. I AM SHILPA FROM CHENNAI. YOU?
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nice start.. plz pm me the next update
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PART 4:

Two young handsome mans spilting rage and fire said together: how dare u spilt that bloody word from ur mouth for her next time if a word like that came out ur mouth then ur tongue will be off .

Doctor scaringly :sir but here condition is

again the two men hold his collar:nothing will happen to her as long as Arjun & Maan were alive .

payal though her condition is not good but she know very well that if she didn't control them then doctor will surely die so she gone to them knowing only she can control them in this condition.

payal:Arjun ,Maan princess{ with she hugged both of them and crying her heart out for her sister}

both immediately get sofften and hugged her and wipped her tears:Shh pari now don't cry u trust us right we r taking eerything in our control .I promise u nothing will happen to her.

Maan to doctor : with in 2 minutes 15 doctors will come to operate her so help them.

doctor now scared fully: ji sir

now exactly after 2 minutes a 15 group of people with a old lady of 60 years with some security gaurds came & doctors group went in ICU .Seeing the lady Maan,Arjun,payal who was still in their embrance went to her.and made her seated.

payal: dadi

both dadi& payal hugged and cried out,seeing that lady nani ,suprised mami,mama went to her

nani cryingly: jaya i am sorry i can't protected princess,pls forgive me.

jaya dadi made nani to seat next to her wipping her tears :Subhadra don't, u done nothing so please say don't say sorry,u indeed protected her.Now Arjun ,Maan is there nothing will happen .We trust them right.

nani: yes

Mami and mama bent their head to take blessings from Jaya Dadi to which she happily blessed them then mami said :Masi ,U ,Arjun beta,Maan beta here and she[ pointing to payal] hugging them and they calling her pari and Khushi as Princess this means they are they and were alive.

jaya dadi: ha manorama they are ur pari and princess.

Mami: but

Nani: manorama we will discuss this later. to which she was silenced

now garima with shashi came their and took the blessing of dad.though remaining were suprised by all this but they were not in a condition to ask as now their minds are filled with khushi .Arnav now broke down he is again numb to register all this but just he know some doctors came and operating her so he again gone to his previous state just seeing ICU.

now it is 3 hours when doctors had gone ,in these time nani,jaya dadi,amma,buaji,shashi ,mami,mama were silently praying while Anjali,akash,Nk ,Geet though worried about khushi but was trying to get motion in Arnav but he is not all listenly to see.Seeing him like that all were geting worried.Payal,Maan,Arjun who were together and supporting silently one another as they know no ne know how much they were suffering inside,but worried seeing Arnav like this but they know they were help less and they know only khushi will get him out from this.

while all were shaking him and pleading him Arnav who was only looking at the ICU door was remembering all the moments he spent with Khushi .but when he remembered one incident he literally pushed all that were holding screaming No and runned away from them with out giving them a chance . Now all were scared running runned to the path which Arnav gone but when they saw what Arnav doing they were shocked


note: please comment and thanks who commented to it .

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi thnx for d pm
I m liking this story bt this updt ws abt Arshi.
I dnt mean 2 criticize or bash bt the intensity the 1st 3 parts created ws really heart wrenching.
However this updt due the larger thn life n all characters were more into exchangin pleasantries it took away frm whts goin on wid Khushi n even how Arnav is affected (its more abt touchin to see Arnav's regret n thoughts abt wht he's done).
Pls dnt let the influence of these new characters put Arshi in the background.

Sorry if i hurt your feelings bt i hve read so many ffs where they try to show Khushi as some rich girl n her family overtakin everythng tht it loses the essence of bein an Arshi story n then its all abt the other characters n Ioses it appeal.


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Mounika thanks for the pm and also the link. I hope you now know because you updated it. If possible for the upcoming updates give the link instead of page number in index. And about the update. Its awesome. Eventhough anjali arnav and akash are suprised about new characters they didn't think about it. Adhi nachindi. Yentha surprise ga vunna arnav is in his world with khushi. Nennu update ending lo maan arnav collar pattukunadani anukunna. Maybe i didn't read properly. And ya maan and new characters are not blaming arnav for khushi's condition. Why? And ya as reene.bee said dnt make others more important. If u have to make khushi rich, i knw there is some reason. I think arshi are related in past. Mami saying payal and khushi our pari and princess is something which make me curious. And finally, i think arnav went and stood before dm idol. Once again thanks.
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Chap 3 - Sad update
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Amazing
thanks for the pm 👍🏼
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Chap 4 - Nice update...What did Arnav do ?

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