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will anyone notice this tension btw arshi ??

This chapter is wonderfully put together and brought the story at THE very interesting and exciting point with determined Arnav who has stopped pretending and believing that things did't matter and he has decided to come out in open and play and as we all know that in this state of mind where he has clarity in vision and thoughts, he has taken a decision and it is impossible to shake his resolve now and Khushi do not stand a chance.

Every time I write my comments I mean to tell you but keep it to the end and forget it. So I am going to tell you now itself! Your poster is fabulous! The Arnav and Khushi in it are exact replica of how your characters have been developed. Khushi with the innocence and the crystal clear eyes that shows her emotions and her love for life and curiosity to see things is absolutely adorable. Arnav, iske bare me kya kahoon??? He is simply superb! Just the right amount of arrogance and divinely rugged handsome resplendent with his quirky smirk! The background is also apt as the rising sun with its diamond brilliance showering upon them. It looks like as though it is pushing them ahead just like it. Only when you observe it closely will you see a different sort of light playing around Khushi but we'll put it as she has applied henna on her hair that is making the golden red glow to be emitted!😉 Kudos for coming out with picture perfect banner!

Another amazing update

Loved the conversation between two
Arnav's thoughts have cleared many things

Way to go khushi

loved the update!
Khushi--- she wanted to meet Arnav in the first place but ran away for self preservation and then she got up early to see him again... this is so natural a reaction that you have presented here. liked it.
then Arnav--- he is same arrogant man who will not admit to his feelings until and unless he have to. And credit goes to Khushi who is the one person who makes him do things desperately which he would never do otherwise.
i am loving their chemistry!
the Greenhouse scene --- finally the confrontation. loved it the clash of these two stubborn individuals gets the titans to shame.
But i agree to Khushi-- she took the right stand. Arnav need to grovel a little bit more before being completely forgiven and accepted by Khushi. and he needs to really be more forthcoming with his feelings.

waiting for the next update.

great update thank you

I'm in love with ur writing...beautiful..words r falling short to describe...simply marvelous.

What the?

These two are talking and fighting as if they are going to patch up after all this drama! They are anyways heading to a dead end before it actually turns into a happy ending!!!


Cat got her tongue? Seriously Arnav? Cat really?? Or you?? I mean who was the one completely fused into her and experiencing bliss? Given a chance I would just wack their head seriously!


But its fun! Wonderfully written down! The ambience one can simply imagine it from here as a reader due to your writing skills! Kudos ka!!


Cheers