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Sandhya,

Only you can make a normal conversation between two lovers so special and dreamy. There is no kiss; yet it made me blush, smile and in the end sigh in content. Since their first encounter, Arnav and Khushi always had emotions of any kind running either high or low. There was so much of passion or anger or hurt. So, this is the first balanced and heart to heart conversation they had. It was a breath of fresh air. Khushi is right, things are moving too fast and they need to slow down and discover each other and establish emotional connection.

Their drive through the scenic mountains and curvy roads, stealing glances, reading each other, little banter and holding hands it was so romantic. This was written so brilliantly that as I was reading words they translated into visuals in front of me.

The little trinkets from daily life such as filter coffee, cars, Barbie dolls that you add to each chapter accentuate the reading pleasure.

This is one of the most well written chapters, I would say.

Read till ch. 25 and it's going great..

I didn't want to pause reading, but I saw the footnote, and I wanted to mention at some point of time that I also came to know about this FF because of Meera's recommendation..

Thanks to Meera and to you too 😊