KR FF:(Obscure Concoctions)A Million Mistakes(Chapter 2-page 16)

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: anjali22
Nice update
like it

Thank u😊

Glad you liked it :)

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Mahnaz Gul

@NoMoreUsing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Nice, both of them have their share of problems.

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akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Res krne ka bilkul man nai h mera...mahi ji...ho kaha ap...itna busy to koi celebrity nai hota ki dosto ko bhul jaye...chal chod tuje kya bolu...
Anyways...m glad tuje ye ff yad aa gaya...
I really liked the starting part...those lines r beautiful..very enticing...
Rhen description of real reyaansh...rightly said..books shud never be judged by cover...this rey is cmpletely diffrnt from the one i thot...
Moving onwards..kriya ghai...i loved her attitude...
His efforts of being gentle nd her denial to be polite...so perfect...
Jaldi update kiya kr...

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Nice update n way to intresting reys pov then krias meet with all thing was beautifully written

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

SAALI SIZE DEKH USKA -_-

Awesome update it was...

I really loved how you showed layers to the characters...

an the bon-fire side encounter was so very nice..

mereko aise encounters hamesha pasand hai..

ekdum heavenly feling dete hain... ^_^

i really loved how you showed the exchange of words b/w KR..

awesom...

Lekin again I say..

size dekh... -_-

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Sorry for short comment... :/

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alex754

@alex754

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

I donno y the like button is not working for me
Count my like also
I love this ff
I like kriya's character she is sooo mysterious and unique
Update sooon

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

hey...nyc ff...
read both d parts in one go...
likd ur concept...
do write soon...
i vl b waiting...

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Ankita

@anki_22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Finally..!! I really felt you have abandoned this one..!!
Thank you for a much awaited update...
It was beautiful... Loved the way you portrayed both of them simple yet completely..the conflict and difference was so clearly noticeable... the starting describing Rey's inner termoils and pain were amazing...the meet was soo visually beautiful..
Am not going to talk about how awesome your writting skills are, coz that will be unnecessary..😆
But it was sooo short, can't wait for the next update but am scared you might forget about it again..!
craving for the next one..
that's all..😊

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Himani

@Infinities

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
Res krne ka bilkul man nai h mera...mahi ji...ho kaha ap...itna busy to koi celebrity nai hota ki dosto ko bhul jaye...chal chod tuje kya bolu...
Anyways...m glad tuje ye ff yad aa gaya...
I really liked the starting part...those lines r beautiful..very enticing...
Rhen description of real reyaansh...rightly said..books shud never be judged by cover...this rey is cmpletely diffrnt from the one i thot...
Moving onwards..kriya ghai...i loved her attitude...
His efforts of being gentle nd her denial to be polite...so perfect...
Jaldi update kiya kr...

pagal hai kya tujhe kaise bhulu Mein :*

I am more regular on FB and WA re...IF pe aana kam hogaya bass..

Glad you liked the start and Rey ka character ^_^

Thank you so much ^_^