KR FF:(Obscure Concoctions)A Million Mistakes(Chapter 2-page 16)

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: kriapatel
Nice update n way to intresting reys pov then krias meet with all thing was beautifully written

Thanku ^_^

Glad you liked the write-up :D

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: dancersqueen
awesome update...loved rey's pov...

Thank you :D

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vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

mereko toh log FB pe bhi nhi dikhte... -_-

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
SAALI SIZE DEKH USKA -_-
Awesome update it was...

I really loved how you showed layers to the characters...

an the bon-fire side encounter was so very nice..

mereko aise encounters hamesha pasand hai..

ekdum heavenly feling dete hain... ^_^

i really loved how you showed the exchange of words b/w KR..

awesom...

Lekin again I say..

size dekh... -_-

Haahahaha aree isse zyada likhne ki taakatt nahi thi mere mein ..agli baar I will try and write zyada lol

Glad woh first encounter ajeeb nahi laga lol... I was hoping ke koi vampire story naa lage yeh rofl.Glad u liked it :*

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sun_flower60

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

this is quite good...yeah do update... :D

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
Sorry for short comment... :/

koi nai hahah mere write-up ki length ke hisaab se kaafi badi comment thi 😆

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: alex754
I donno y the like button is not working for me
Count my like also
I love this ff
I like kriya's character she is sooo mysterious and unique
Update sooon

Thank you so much ^_^

Feels good to know you liked the character of Kria...She too is my fav character in this FF ^__^

I will surely try and update by Sunday :D

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: reyaditi
hey...nyc ff...
read both d parts in one go...
likd ur concept...
do write soon...
i vl b waiting...

Thank you dear ^_^

Glad u found it worth reading :D

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Khyati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Awesome update !!
Very intrigued to know how the relationship btw Kriya n Rey develops...
Update soon !! :)

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: anki_22
Finally..!! I really felt you have abandoned this one..!!
Thank you for a much awaited update...
It was beautiful... Loved the way you portrayed both of them simple yet completely..the conflict and difference was so clearly noticeable... the starting describing Rey's inner termoils and pain were amazing...the meet was soo visually beautiful..
Am not going to talk about how awesome your writting skills are, coz that will be unnecessary..😆
But it was sooo short, can't wait for the next update but am scared you might forget about it again..!
craving for the next one..
that's all..😊

Anki your comment left a biggg smile on my face ^___^

I am super glad you liked the first meet ... I wasnt sure if it was good enough :D

I will make sure the next update will be longer :D

I wont forget about this FF pakka se ...next Sunday tak I will update lolz

Thank uuu ^_^