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Posted: 11 years ago
I am kind of glad that things happen this way Nids!!
One more of your brilliant ideas... New character sketches and an interesting storyline...
How do you manage to write so much?? Sigh!! I wish I could write even half of this much...
Just finished catching up with THT and YATO...
And now read this... loved the concept and waiting to read more...
Tired of typing for today otherwise would have written a more elaborate comment...
Will write one for the next choppy... Pakka promise!!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
welcome back nidhi🥳.. miss u and yr lovely story🤗
a wonderful start ... and very unique story.. and as always i cant wait to read more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
My 3rd comment till now :)
Am so much into the story, always thinking about it..seems there is unwritten rule in India that guys don't date their friends sisters.. Have observed it in real life too..
But here I feel Arnav feels Kushi deserves someone better and not him who is bruised bcos of his bad childhood
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Posted: 11 years ago
a broken heart is the most difficult to heal;
ure more than welcome to start a new tale - ure so good, u shd never not write
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Posted: 11 years ago
Here it comes. Another roller coaster of emotions. Just tell me how you do it. Just how? Amazing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
A very beautiful love story. Don't keep me waiting now. Update soon. Ak
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...
looking frwd to it..
pls add me
nice concept...mast story
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav ran of in another direction as soon as he over heard Khushi saying that she is in love with him .. He might be thinking that it would complicate things in the only family and real relations he knows who gave him home and support and love ... Didn't Arnav ever think that she is staying away from everything and her family and even change her university at the last moment just to keep away from him ? And she don't even know that he had over heard her that day ... And now he walks in with Lavnya and he knows she is there ...
But that's a family full of Doctors even Arnav is one too so read tht she is not one so than what is her profession??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Nids,

I am here😃

I am falling in love with your stories. You are creating a storm with first chapter itself. I am hooked. You have a unique way of creating characters with depth and layer them with so many emotions and personalities.👍🏼

So, Guptas are family of Ks - Karan, Kush, Krish and Khushi. It's such a well Knitted family, Kind and Knowledgeable. Arnav is so lucky to have found such a large hearted family that absorbed him into their family as well as lives. It seems like he was always meant to be part of them.

Khushi is probably the Klutz of the family, her emotions are Knotted and she is Keen on staying away from Arnav. All of 17 and she already had her first love break her heart. I can't imagine how hurt she much have, to leave the warmth of her parents and protectiveness of her brothers and move far away from family. This also shows the depth of her love. I Khushi physically ran away from Arnav and looks like Arnav is emotionally running away from his own feelings for Khushi.

Can't wait to read next update now.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Many congratulation, Nidhi on starting a new story!!

Khushi was the one who brought Arnav into the family and give him the family that he never had.. I think he doesn't want to lose that, if he gets into a relationship with Khushi.. If something goes wrong with their relationship he doesn't want any misunderstanding with the family that he has given him love kindness and shelter. Also a role model, Best friend and motherly love.For him to get Khushi misdirected was to show that he was involved with someone else and she can move on and find someone else better.

For Khushi that was the worst first heart break anyone can have, so she just packed and left! I know it truly can hurt and now to see that he still involved with someone else can really hurt someone deeply, I hope she is able,to get through the dinner...

Brilliant Nidhi, how you being forth the feeling of the different character in many aspects!!
Can't wait to read more...

Thanks for the email..

Will be waiting ...

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