Vignette 24. Sirf Khushi ki - SS Pt 5/ Pg41 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loving this story Aparna... Ofcourse Arnav ho ya ASR...he only belongs to Khushi. But this is such an interesting yet realistic plot... cant wait to see how you treat this.
I almost feel bad for Dia... uske infatuation jo chir chur honeh wala hail... 😛😆... But kya karein... Arnav hai Sirf Khushi ki... Hamesha.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Absolutely loveed the update 😃
My fav lines from the update hv to be
husky voice drop a few degrees below freezing point, 😆I am a big fan of angry singh raizada when the anger is not towards khushi😉
And don't ever compare yourself to another female, Khushi! The way you stood up to me, understood me and loved me, through all of it, cannot be compared to anyone, ever. Am I making myself clear?hayeee mai mari jawa jelebi khake
"Bhaiyya, romantic dialogues maarna toh koi aapse seekhein! Aisi pyaari baatein aise bol dete ho jaise ki koi army commander goli maarne ki order de rahe ho!"🤣Dhruv is Dhruv after all..😃
Loved it how khushi was being her cuteself and trying to help the new intern also.. Humari sanka devi kitni pyari hai...🤗 and also she can be possessive abt her hubby too which even makes arnav exhausted😳 Such awesome👍🏼
PS. If my long comment bothered u or u get bored let me know haan? 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
read first two chps together..
loved both of them..
awesome..waiting fr the next update 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

I was going to wait until you put up the English versions to read this but I just couldn't wait any longer. I'm so happy to know that this is going to be a Arshi story! Also I have to say thank you because reading your stories had dramatically improved my Hindi. I did not know how to speak Hindi but understood it due to watching Bollywood movies and IPKKND and subtitles. After reading your stories I feel like I'm getting a better at forming sentences and speaking it.

Part 1:

I have to admit that I don't dislike Dia. I remember when Sheetal was introduced I really had a hard time even attempting to like her. There was just something about her that got under my skin. I don't know if it was because I saw her as the "other woman" or just because of the way the actress played the character. But I don't mind Dia. She seems to be the typical girl with dreams of making it big.

The "hazel eyes" threw me a bit off. For some reason I thought it was someone other than Arnav at first. I liked how Arnav was polite in telling her to watch where she was going. I don't know if it was intentional on your part or not but I felt like his comment was proof of this cooler demeanor. I think the pre-Khushi Arnav would have blown a fuse.

Dia definitely has been affected by the ASR charm but then again who wouldn't be! She completely misinterpreted Arnav's glance. I don't think it meant anything at all. Interesting that she has been assigned to Arnav. I feel like both of them are in for a wild ride! Definitely looking forward to a possessive Khushi!

Part 2:

Arnav seems to have found someone to match him in all aspects of life. I'm sure he doesn't mind her way of claiming her right on her.

Dia seems to living in a world that she's formulated using her desires and the lack of knowledge on ASR's personal life. She's in for a rude awakening. I don't know why but Dia assuming that Arnav is trapped in a loveless marriage and she was going to be his saving grace made me laugh. Maybe it's because we know what kind of marriage he has.

I still don't dislike Dia yet but weaving dreams about her future with Arnav is a bit odd. I mean she knows he's a married man and still wants to believe that he'll fall in love with her is unethical in my eyes. No matter what the state of his marriage, being married is off limits. I really can't wait for her to meet Khushi.

And ASR is back! Dia definitely needed to see that side of him. Have I ever told you how much I adore Dhruv? He definitely knows how to tease his older brother! His dialogue made me laugh so hard! And I have a feeling that that is exactly how Arnav is romantic in front of the family. Arnav is incredibly sweet for telling Khushi she doesn't need to compare herself with anyone else. He seems to be very good at making his wife feel loved and at the same time maintaining her self-esteem.

I have this feeling that Khushi is going to convince Arnav to give Dia another chance since she knows how difficult it is to work for him. Arnav is probably going to agree and Dia is going to take it the wrong way. She may think that Arnav has a soft spot for her or something. This is my little prediction.

Also when do you update this? I feel like I'm going to be stalking IF just to see if you updated. It would helpful if I knew what days you tend to update. Thank you for another amazing story! Looking forward to reading more!

Edited by IPKWA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome one!
i like the arnav's protective and possessive side, reserved only for khushi. :)
dia is in for some dhamaka!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it. Read both the parts together pls update soon. I just hope that dia does not get a chance to create misunderstanding between khushi and arnav.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I LOVED ARNAV'S COFESSION AND DHRUV'S REMARK
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome start with a bang.
Wow loved this possessive Khushi who has all the rights on her Arnav and ASR and every one will agree with me when I say that she has earned this right and has taken a lot of pain and heartbreak to get where she is now not that Arnav is ever going to stray as he is as faithful as they come and its only Khushi for him 'hamesha' and he doest need to prove it but this girl Dia who has fallen in infatuation with him, will she cause problems and will there be misunderstanding between our lovely couple? I hope not, the story is just starting and that's why my mind is running in all directions trying to guess the storyline, don't mind me and let me speculate as I love to do this and proven wrong every time.

I am so looking forward for the next chapter of this wonderful story. I have left comments on OS no 19 to 23 please do check them.
Thank you for the update.

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Posted: 11 years ago
What will happen to Diya when she will see Khushi in person? If Diya can survive ASR till then.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The story seems much intresting...
There is this *Punch factor* in ur story that clicks me everytime and I just want to leep reading it...U write amazing..Simple yet worth reading...The feeling of domesticity n normalcy is very clear in ur writing style and this makes reader crave more of ur stories...
Thankkks for pm Aparna...
1st chapter is amazing...A girl *much like me* having crush on her boss on very first day...When Dia was scanning the crowd,,I was reminded of my own behavior in Uni when I scan the crowd to spot any handsome face *wink*...
Going to read chpter 2 to see her 1st day with ASR...:)

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