Vignette 24. Sirf Khushi ki - SS Pt 5/ Pg41 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
2nd chapter
Wohi huwa jiska darr tha...
As expected Arnavji showed her his Famous ASR avatar n also dropped the bomb of dicontinuing her rotation under him...poor girl...Nice update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Comment for part two.
I missed the part two on my mission to read it all in one day and comment but good job I came back to check the English translation as I bit crazy I like to read both although I love the Hindi version as it suits khushi's character very well.

Oh dear god !! I feel sorry for Dia as she is in her own world and seeing what she wants to see and believe what she wants to, she is in for a shock. If Arnav ever gets the wind of what she is thinking or feels for him he will blast her and not give her second chance.

Khushi too is feeling sorry for the girl as no one knows better than her what Arnav is capable of in his ASR avatar and trying to get Arnav to go easy on the young girl but Khushi don't know that the girl is weaving dreams about her own husband...no Khushi don't give this advice to Arnav let him be in his ASR role as that will scare her away from Arnav and she will maintain her distance from him.

No one can compare Khushi to any other female employee in AR as fate played a big role there, they were meant each other and Khushi was Devi Mayia's gift to Arnav so obviously she was granted a special inner power to with stand everything Arnav threw in her way as he was his own worst enemy..he now know all this hence his romantic way to tell her not to compare.

Awesome part and written beautifully, I am loving this story and reviewing it.
Please continue soon.


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Posted: 11 years ago
even i dnt like diya already ...back off woman hes kushijis
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Posted: 11 years ago
ASR unleashed! 😆Bechari Dia did she really think that ASR reached such heights of professional success chitchatting with his assistants.
Clearly the girl has lot to learn.

On the other side you have a bholi bhali khushi who is already feeling sorry for dia. Hoping that khushi makes a visit to her hubby's office pretty soon.

Dia is all set for the baap of all heartbreaks. Looking forward to reading the next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Apzy,
Have been busy these days... I dont know how many of your stories are still there for me to read.. this was as usual incredible...
Love your writing skills girl!
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Posted: 11 years ago
The best part...

Arnav's sweet wala confession/outburst and Dhruv's comment!!!

Dia is gonaa have a heart break..poor thing..who can resist Arnie boy's charms anyway!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally i managed time to reply...😊 i spent whole Saturday thinking wat might happen next when the next part was perfectly lying here for me to read...how much i felt bad wasting whole day to read it...😭...as always it was such a nice update...loved dhruv's words😆😆...my boyfriend has hardly seen 2 r 3 episodes...he doesn't know the story at all...but i being crazy fan of arshi ❤️ bug him a lot about every story of yours i read😛 so much so that as soon i read your next part i would msg him telling next part s up...so where had i stopped😆😆😃...and the best part is he equally enjoys the story as much as me telling it...☺️ waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Appu dear... Hows u???
Apologies once again for not commenting earlier, was busy with exams, u see...

Well, this update just seems to be building up and setting the mood for the actual story to follow...!!!!!!

Can't believe that the great ASR is still hit by pangs of guilt and goes into the blaming-himself mode... It goes on to show how deeply he is affected by his actions of the past, but Khushi just doesn't let him dwell on the past!!!!!! Love the bond n understanding that they share...

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Had typed out almost half a page of comment wen power played devil n off went my lappy!!!!!! Will come back for the entire ftr venting out my anger...🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 3

Closing up the kitchen and bidding a good night to the domestic help, Khushi headed upstairs, switching off the lights as she went. Her having offered to supervise the cleaning up, everyone else had already retired. As was her custom, she peeked into all the rooms, calling out cheerful 'good-nights' and when she reached Dhruv at the end of the circuit, she found him sitting back against the headboard, reading by the light of the bedside lamp.

"Good night, Dhruv", she called as she walked in. Looking up with a grin, he replied, "Good night, Bhabi... aur aapke commander ko bhi keh deejiyega!"

"Badmaash kaheenke! Apne Bhaiyya ke saamne aur unke peeth-peeche, unki taang kheenchthe rehte ho!"

Setting the book aside and stretching, he laughed, "Bhabi, aisi chances aapke aane tak itna kam jo milta tha! But now, roz ki routine ho gayi hai." Scrambling up to come near her and loop an affectionate arm around her shoulders, he continued, "Aapke aane ke baad humein Arnav Bhaiyya jo mila hai, ASR ke jagah. Faayda toh uthaani chaahiye, naah?"

It was a familiar husky voice that replied, "Haan, haan, aur tumse behtar ye kaam toh koi nahi kar sakta."

Looking around to see Arnav leaning against the doorway, his hands folded loosely against his chest, and a warm smile on his face, Khushi grinned back, "Aap donon ke beech humein mat laayiye, is dhaaraavaahik mein humari koi yogdaan nahi hain."

"Ouch, Bhabi! You know it throws both of us when you bring out the heavy artillery, Bhabi! Bhaiyya, kya aap samajh paate ho ki Bhabi kya bol rahi hai, when she starts off in her heavy-duty Hindi?"

Chuckling at the light punch his wife threw at his baby brother, Arnav said, "Of course. Ab toh mein Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada ke patented boliyon mein expert hoon. You know, mumble, grumble, facial expressions, mime, shuddh Hindi, Lucknowi Hindi, and the multitude of pokes, pinches and pouts...", trailing of into laughter at his wife's indignant "Haww..." and Dhruv's delighted grin.

Marching up to her husband, she commanded, "Ab chaliye! Bahut ho gayi masti, Bhaiyya aur Dewar ki!" Turning to her chuckling brother-in-law, she narrowed her eyes, "Aur tum! Kal dekhte hain kaun aake tumhein dus baar jagaane ki koshish karta hain!"

"Arre, Bhabi, ek aap hi toh ho mere...", Dhruv called out at their retreating backs. Feeling his wife loosen up at his brother's words, knowing that she was putty in both their hands, Arnav tightened the arm he had across his waist, pulling her closer and grinning down at her scrunched up nose as she glanced up at him in mock-affront.

Walking over to their room, he let her free and went off for his bath, while Khushi started on her daily ritual of straightening up the room and laying out his clothes for the next day, along with making sure that his laptop and mobile were fully charged. By the time her husband emerged wet and dripping, and dragged her close to dry his hair as he sat on the futon leaning his head against her belly, Khushi had all but forgotten about being angry with him.

The usual update of the day's happenings in her life running its course as she finished off drying his hair, he leaned back to look up at her. The unguarded, vulnerable, loving face that he showed her and her alone in the privacy of their room, he asked, "Tum itna busy rehti ho toh mujhe yaad karne ka mauka hi nahi milta hoga naah? Iss liye aaj phone nahi kiya?"

Gathering that beloved face in her hands, she bent down to place a soft kiss on his forehead, "Aisa bhi kabhi ho sakta hai kya? Ki hum aapko har ek pal yaad na karein?"

Combing the damp hair back from his face, she continued, "Humne socha ki aap aaj training mein vyast honge aur aapko disturb na karne ka faisla liya. Aapko andaaza bhi hai ki aaj poora din aapke awaaz sune bagair rehna kitna mushkil tha humare liye?"

Pulling her down onto his lap, he nuzzled her hair, "Haan, hai..."

***************

A long while later, as they lay together on the deck chair, gazing peacefully at the starry sky, on that surprisingly mild winter night, Khushi turned to her husband, "Arnavji, ek mauka aur de do naah..."

Cuddling her close, he looked down, ready to give the reasons for not giving the trainee a second chance, only to back down in the face of the open trust in his wife's face, trust in his goodness, and found himself saying, "Hmm..."

And miles away, the girl in question sobbed her way into an exhausted slumber.

***************

The next day, having been asked to wait outside by ASR's secretary, Dia sat in absolute terror, only to face a much calmer version of her boss once she was called in. Not even looking up at her, he said, "Ms. Doshi, you have one more chance to prove your worth to your Chairman. I'm willing to give you the benefit of doubt that what happened yesterday was a once-only mistake on your part. Now, mind you, this is the first time I'm giving an MT a second chance, so do not waste this special leniency you have got form me..." and continued on to describe the tasks he had lined up for her.

While he missed the series of emotions that flickered across her face, his ever loyal Aman did not. Seeing the look of abject fear turn into shock, joy and adoration as the words ASR uttered took a completely different meaning in the girl's mind, he sat back grimly. He needed to have a talk with her. Looking over at his boss, he decided against warning him that he had a besotted girl on his hands. Aman knew better than anyone that Arnav wouldn't stand the thought of another person invading in on his wife's territory. He would pack her off with nary a thought. No... he had to talk to the girl...


Author's Note:

So? 😃

Btw, I love the fact that you guys love my Dhruv so much! I do too 😳... and there's no way that he's going to fall for someone like this... you just wait n see the story I have got for him... but is way down the line... 😛

And the English translation will follow tomorrow ...


Edited by Appurs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
English Version


Part 3

Closing up the kitchen and bidding a good night to the domestic help, Khushi headed upstairs, switching off the lights as she went. Her having offered to supervise the cleaning up, everyone else had already retired. As was her custom, she peeked into all the rooms, calling out cheerful 'good-nights' and when she reached Dhruv at the end of the circuit, she found him sitting back against the headboard, reading by the light of the bedside lamp.

"Good night, Dhruv", she called as she walked in. Looking up with a grin, he replied, "Good night, Bhabi... and my wishes to your commander too!"

"You young rascal! It is your life's mission, huh, to pull his leg? To your Bhaiyya's face and behind his back!"

Setting the book aside and stretching, he laughed, "Bhabi, we never had a chance of doing all this until you came into his life, our lives! But now, its just routine." Scrambling up to come near her and loop an affectionate arm around her shoulders, he continued, "Its after you came that we got Arnav Bhaiyya in place of ASR. Now, shouldn't I exploit that to the maximum?"

It was a familiar husky voice that replied, "Yeah, yeah, and who better than you!"

Looking around to see Arnav leaning against the doorway, his hands folded loosely against his chest, and a warm smile on his face, Khushi grinned back, "Now, don't drag me into this, is dhaaraavaahik mein humari koi yogdaan nahi hain."

"Ouch, Bhabi! You know it throws both of us when you bring out the heavy artillery, Bhabi! Bhaiyya, do you even understand what she's saying when she starts off in her heavy-duty Hindi?"

Chuckling at the light punch his wife threw at his baby brother, Arnav said, "Of course. Now I'm an expert in Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada's patented languages. You know, mumble, grumble, facial expressions, mime, shuddh Hindi, Lucknowi Hindi, and the multitude of pokes, pinches and pouts...", trailing of into laughter at his wife's indignant "Haww..." and Dhruv's delighted grin.

Marching up to her usband, she commanded, "Enough! You've had your fun, Bhaiyya and Dewar!" Turning to her chuckling brother-in-law, she narrowed her eyes, "And you! We'll see who comes running up time after time to get you out of bed!"

"Arre, Bhabi, what'll I do without you...", Dhruv called out at their retreating backs. Feeling his wife loosen up at his brother's words, knowing that she was putty in both their hands, Arnav tightened the arm he had across his waist, pulling her closer and grinning down at her scrunched up nose as she glanced up at him in mock-affront.

Walking over to their room, he let her free and went off for his bath, while Khushi started on her daily ritual of straightening up the room and laying out his clothes for the next day, along with making sure that his laptop and mobile were fully charged. By the time her husband emerged wet and dripping, and dragged her close to dry his hair as he sat on the futon leaning his head against her belly, Khushi had all but forgotten about being angry with him.

The usual update of the day's happenings in her life running its course as she finished off drying his hair, he leaned back to look up at her. The unguarded, vulnerable, loving face that he showed her and her alone in the privacy of their room, he asked, "Seeing how busy you are the whole day, do you even get a chance to think of me? Is that why I didn't get a single phone call from you today?"

Gathering that beloved face in her hands, she bent down to place a soft kiss on his forehead, "Do you think that's ever going to happen? That a single second passes by without me thinking of you?" Combing the damp hair back from his face, she continued, "I just didn't want to disturb you in the middle of all the training activity. Do you even know how difficult it is for me to stay away from you, stay home without even hearing your voice, the whole day?"

Pulling her down onto his lap, he nuzzled her hair, "Yes I do..."

***************

A long while later, as they lay together on the deck chair, gazing peacefully at the starry sky, on that surprisingly mild winter night, Khushi turned to her husband, "Arnavji, please give her one more chance..."

Cuddling her close, he looked down, ready to give the reasons for not giving the trainee a second chance, only to back down in the face of the open trust in his wife's face, trust in his goodness, and found himself saying, "Hmm..."

And miles away, the girl in question sobbed her way into an exhausted slumber.

***************

The next day, having been asked to wait outside by ASR's secretary, Dia sat in absolute terror, only to face a much calmer version of her boss once she was called in. Not even looking up at her, he said, "Ms. Doshi, you have one more chance to prove your worth to your Chairman. I'm willing to give you the benefit of doubt that what happened yesterday was a once-only mistake on your part. Now, mind you, this is the first time I'm giving an MT a second chance, so do not waste this special leniency you have got form me..." and continued on to describe the tasks he had lined up for her.

While he missed the series of emotions that flickered across her face, his ever loyal Aman did not. Seeing the look of abject fear turn into shock, joy and adoration as the words ASR uttered took a completely different meaning in the girl's mind, he sat back grimly. He needed to have a talk with her. Looking over at his boss, he decided against warning him that he had a besotted girl on his hands. Aman knew better than anyone that Arnav wouldn't stand the thought of another person invading in on his wife's territory. He would pack her off with nary a thought. No... he had to talk to the girl...

Author's Note:

So? :-)

Btw, I love the fact that you guys love my Dhruv so much! I do too... and there's no way that he's going to fall for someone like this... you just wait n see the story I have got for him... but is way down the line... :-P

Edited by Appurs - 11 years ago

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