Vignette 24. Sirf Khushi ki - SS Pt 5/ Pg41

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chocodilla

@chocodilla

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Already heartbroken! 😆
The girl is in for even more heartbreaks!
Loved the military style romantic arnav!

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FangirlFreak14

@FangirlFreak14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Pleasee Update soon ;) eagerly waiting

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Poor Dia ...

Loved the second part. Please continue. I'm so eager to read!

Thanks for the pm.

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Awesome start...i want to see a tigeress Khushi...so jealous...that she proclaims to the girl that Arnav is Khushis

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adithyan

@adithyan

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

so inspite of reading everything abt ASR dia is under a misunderstanding..poor girl...

ASR's wrat...khushi se acha who knows abt it...😆

and dhruv is right...👍🏼."Bhaiyya, romantic dialogues maarna toh koi aapse seekhein! Aisi pyaari baatein aise bol dete ho jaise ki koi army commander goli maarne ki order de rahe ho!"👏

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: aruni50218

Sarada ji look like i missed you turning maroon. Congo!

Yup now I am IF-Sizzler. Yipeee. Thanks for the wishes

Edited by psarada - 11 years ago

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Omg poor dia is in for such a huge heartbreak!:P

Great update! Loved it:)

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Nice update. Waiting for English translations. Thanks for the PM.

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BubblySanaya

@BubblySanaya

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

This was a fab part... Just loved it.
Dhruv's dialogue was hilarious !!!!
Superb.

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Don't know what to say, really! ASR is ASR. It's in his genes to hurt his wife! Why is he taking out his frustrations on his wife? Even after all this time, saying he loves her, he does not give her her due - the respect she deserves! And still barks at her because of non-entities. Kushi really is made of steel!

Please do not misunderstand me here. Your writing is fabulous. You story shaping up is fabulous. It's just that I keep remembering how ASR turned in the show when the ex turned up and all that true and deep love that was supposed to be when out the way of the window! I can't help my self! But that's my problem!! SORRY!

Also, difficult to translate with Googleji as the gist sometimes gets lost! Thanks.

Edited by kbtr - 11 years ago