ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn #10 - REMOVED - Page 91

read d entire thing in one go...fab story... beautifully written... don't hv much words to express my feelings after reading it but...just loved it...

Finally i cmpltd my journey oops my very very very of the sweetest and beautiful journey of the dawn of the dawn...

Its a superb classi amazing fantastic fabulous outstanding beautiful lovely tremendous thrilling romantic passionate .. Any many more complementary words ... Story..

I just feel to stay in this dream land... Which is full of love ...
In diff forms love btwn lovers luv btwn parents love btwn parents and children luv btwn frds...

No end can be this perfect than this wat u wrote.. Its just fantastic..

If deir exist such land dan surely its a heavn created on land...
a man who can go any extend for his lady is no less than a god to secure his lovables lives...

A lady who just simply can stole his man's heart is nt less than a nymph...

A family which can makr u urge for thr same is nt less than a fairyland...

and a life of being arnav singh raizada is just ... Cant be expressd within words...

Wat should i say my words finish wer u start...
Its a ocean full of pearls...
Giving glimpse of joy to all who come across this.
Its a angelic word one always dream to have...
If life means smething dan it should just be like of arnav and khushi's life..

All phases of this story were a diff. Life crossing all bridges to build a new universe..
I was nvr so deeply thought of all this bt ne i conclude no life can be btr dan this not the money that asr hold is the reason bt the love hr xarried in his heart is the reason to hav a grand life like him...

So perfect 3 kids... His long lost parents are blessed back as the tiny ones...

I gt a bit emotional with its en as m nw out of this fairy tale ... An its too hard to be in this world again aftr this beautiful trip...

I really thank frm deep dwn my heart .. For giving us such a grt story..

I widh this should be nominated and must win the award.. For bst story on if...

Its a grt work u hav pennd dwn..
Hats off to u dii..
U rockd...


I again falln more anf more deep under in love with my arshi... As dey are my heartbeat.. And u really givn a soothing air by ur story to my heart to beat in its best way...
Thanku so much diii. Wish u all the best for ur futr work... 😊 😊

Awesome story ... Loved it ...

I am in love with the papa and dad ASR... can't imagine anything better than this for as official ending...

awesome, amazing, fabulous, extra ordinary beautful story 👏

read this ff all in one go...i mean it took me 2 whole nites n 1 full day...but it worth it...

u hv so beautifully mention each n every character that i hv fall in love with every charscter n the story...

thankyou so much for giving us such a wonderful story...

would love to read more of ur work...

God bless u.

oh god i just love this story so much!!!

Dear Deeps, can I just say how wonderful this story was. I havent been able to put it out of my thoughts since I started reading it a five days ago. It touched every point that I fealt the was missing from our own Arshi story. Two people's love, and feeling and needs both as friends and as lovers was described so well, so intimately, talking about everthing personal which as married couples do was played out in your wonderful words. Well done and most of all THANK YOU for giving us what should have been expressed (ok they would have had to be toned down for family viewing, but they should have been discussed)after our own Arshi were finally married (and shyam was handed over to the cops). IN UTMOST AWE.. , 👏 , 👏 , 👏 , 👏 , 👏

Hi, just finished the epilogue. Loved the way Arnav talked to his children. I'm glad he didnt leave it to Khushi, and said enough for them to understand. You were right saying that as parents/adults we need to be frank and honest about the subject, and mentioning love and appropriate age. Being open and honest with your kids opens them to talk to you when they need to...about anything. I know thats what I have done , and although im still embarrassed when certain things are said or shown on telly, I will discuss it with them when they ask..

Well done this was an amazing story, I found the epilogue when I started reading your story again 😊 lost your link to the blog but that didnt worry me as its the story that counts. Thank you for taking the time and the effort to provide us fans with stories of our favorite characters. MUUWH... 👏. 👏. 👏