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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u...i got hooked to ur story when i first came across it last year..due to work , i couldn't continue reading from chapter 46...all is worth while...i dun like to elaborate on writers writing other then, each journey u shared thru ur story was mind blowing and superb yaar.all said and done...thank u for sharing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly, A big sorry for late reply.
last chapter was just awesome.
The way khushi planned the surprise to tell arnav that he
becoming a dad was just mindblowing.

Loved arnav's concern for khushi.He is worried thinking he might
hurt her and the way you explained each and every situation
in her pregnency was nice.
The 5th month pregnency where they found that they are having
triplets was just unexpected. It was gods gift that they
are having after the lonliness they have spent.
Loved the way they wished to see their baby together.
And that too two girls and one boy.Arnav has gained back everything
he never had.

Totally the whole chapter was just fabalous.
The way you wrote their feelings,expressions was too good.
You are an amazing writer dear.
Gona miss this ff.Sad that the journey of arshi is going to end. 😭😭


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Posted: 11 years ago
Epilogue was just perfect.
Loved the names of the babies. Arsh,Ashi and Aishi.
Arnav who once said that
he doesnt want childrens. Now he has become perfect father.

Love can change anyone.Loved the way how he handled his childrens.
The way kids called him dad and paapa was really adorable.
It was a best moment for the parents.

The way arnav reacted when principal complained about arsh,the nervous
khushi thinking what to explain the kids was well defined.
The way he explained to the kids was just awesome.
The bond between the kids and arnav khushi was too adorable.

The way arsh understood that his mumma might cried and worried for him
was so touching.And the arnav gets the slap after so many years.She cant think of loosing him.
Totally mindblowing update.

Thank you for giving such a wonderful story and also for the pm's you send regularly.
Love you dear.
Miss you The Dawn of the dawn.




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Posted: 11 years ago
Read this story in one go..for almost 2 and half day 😛...and i must say i have never read such an awesome ff till today each and every emotion described soo well..it was not just a ff..but much more really close to my heart...
Epilogue was awesome !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I 'll miss this FF of urs,Deepthiya..
U r an amazing writer..
Arhi love was so pure...so unconditional...
I m so happy to see them happy with their kids..
There can never be a bette ending ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Deepthi loved the ff The Dawn of The Dawn and I read all 10 threads in one go.
Sorry, I lately came to know about this excellent update from the index of Superb and acche wale ff completed ff list.
Loved how Arnav and Khushi destined for each other by birth and because of circumstances they separated in childhood and met at college became friends and again separated and after years married and Realising that they loved each other from childhood.

Arnav is happy go lucky guy and he is full of life. He was studied in NY and his friends Payal (his Fatty) and Aakash. Arnav attracted towards Khushi, Payal's friend who joined in same college for her reasons, at first site and he named her as Khushi even without knowing it is her real name. Arnav lost his parents and sister in an accident and when he went to India his relatives deceived him and he went back to NY with little money and his fathers letter and Arnav was broken loosing his family and he expected Khushi to be with him but he came to know about Khushi and NK and he felt jealous and he asked her to get out of his room when she came to talk about his loss, He felt whom he trusted all ditched him. Loved how Aakash gave money to Arnav to start business and Payal to gave him the little amount what she has with her and Sashi Arnav's dad friend came to help him.

Khushi is kind hearted but very impulsive girl. If she loves, she loves with all of her and if she hates, she hates full. She came to London to NY to spend time with her boy friend NK. She loved all her friends Payal, Aakash and Arnav and she use to argue, tease and friendly with Arnav. When Arnav came back from India after his parents death she went to comfort for his parents and he was happy to see her but suddenly seeing Nk with her, he spoke rudely with her and she couldn't figure out the reason for his rude behaviour with her and Khushi met her father Sashi in NY and he shocked to see her in NY instead of London and he took her back to India.

Sashi and Garima gupta are Khushi's parents and they are very superstitious. On the day Khushi was born, Garima was in labour pain and because of heavy rain there was no one to help them. Aaran, Arnav's father helped them and Aaran's wife is also in labour. Both Arnav and Khushi born on same day and Aaran said to Sashi because of Khushi his son was alive and she is laxmi of their house and she gave them happiness and named her as Khushi and also gave money to Sashi to start a business and also helped him in business. Both families became close and decided to get Khushi and Arnav when they grown up and they engaged kids and because of some dosha in Khushi's Kundali, Sashi gupta don't want Khushi near Arnav's family and Arnav till she is 27 and sent her away to London. When Sashi went to NY to meet Arnav to talk about his future and he met Khushi there and he came to know Khushi met Arnav and he took her back to India. Sashi started helping Arnav in business and made him understand how should be a business man is and how to deal clients. Khushi also worked for Arnav from the day he started business without knowing he is Arnav and she came to know she working for Arnav when she saw his interview as AR designs owner and she asked her father about it and he said about Arnav and his parents

Khushi loved Nk and she was in relation with him for past 8 years. Arnav became an angry and ruthless business tycoon and closed his heart and didn't let out pain of loss of his parents and he also got back his Raizada Mansion. On his 27th birthday he came to know her engagement with Khushi and his father wish to him to marry her and about Land on their joint name which he will get only after their marriage. Khushi also said about her and NK's love to her parents but they didn't accept and asked her to marry Arnav as per their promise to Arnav's dad.

Arnav don't want to marry but he wanted to marry to fulfil his fathers wish and for land and also name Khushi attracted him and want to meet her. Khushi also heard Arnav is coming to meet her and she knew Arnav know about her and NK so she thought he will help her. Arnav met Khushi and shocked his Khushi is really Khushi and felt happy seeing her but Khushi asked him to reject this proposal as she loves NK. Arnav irked hearing Nk and said he want land which only he gets after marrying her. Khushi went to meet Nk and said him they would go from this country, get married but he told to marry Arnav and ask for her share of the property for their better life.

Arnav and Khushi came to a understanding that they will get marry and he will get land papers and she will get divorce papers. Loved how Arnav was jealous of NK and asked him not talk with his fiancee and throw Khushi's phone. Loved how Payal sent Haldi picture to Arnav and how he was mesmerised by her beauty but deleted it and how Payal also sent Mehendi photo of Khushi legs and how he smitten by her legs and couldn't delete it. Loved how Khushi felt possessive of Arnav and didn't like him going to strip club and how she went to that club to keep an eye on Arnav and how Arnav saw her and took her with him in his car and loved the whole convo of Khushi with veil on her face and Arnav and how Arnav surprised that she don't want marry him but even she is doing everything as per rituals and how Arnav didn't go back to strip club. Loved the song sequence almost kiss scene after engagement and loved how they married with all rituals and how Khushi felt emotional when Arnav tied mangulsutra and filled her partition with sindoor.

Arnav left Khushi after giving her divorce papers and Khushi handing him land papers and she didn't ask share too at place Nk wanted to meet her and because of rain how Khushi was in danger and she called NK by seeing him a little away but how he didn't come for her rescue and how Arnav's car driver called Arnav and how he came there without caring about his life he saved Khushi and after he saving her how NK came and kissed Khushi on cheeks and he felt pain in his heart and left from there and how he realised he loves her. Khushi broke up with NK because he didn't even tried to save her and she felt her life is only for Arnav who saved her. Khushi called her father and went to RM with her mom and dad. After knowing truth from Arnav and Khushi , Sashi accused him being Raizada and Arnav asked them to get out.

Khushi fainted because of her fasting for wedding and she was hospitalised and Payal and Aakash came to hospital and how Arnav got to know about Khushi from Payal and how he felt restlessness and came to see her in hospital. Sashi and Garima felt something is wrong and missing in Arnav and Khushi's truth. Khushi discharged from hospital and said everything to Sashi and Garima and wanted to work with him very close and wanted to live in RM

Loved the way she entered office and accepted by Arnav for a job in place of Sashi. Loved the way Khushi entered in RM as a new bride with all rituals. Loved how Arnav was happy seeing her in RM and he wanted her to stay in his room and how she said when times comes she will make to ask. Loved how she started all rituals and pooja as it was in Arnav's mom was alive and refused but accepted afterwards. Loved how on Janmastami day Khushi prepare laddoo learning from her mother and how Kaka said story about Arnav and Khushi childhood, how Khushi use to stole laddoo's for Arnav to get hug and peck from Arnav. Khushi shared about her break up with NK nd how Arnav started his tradition of pecks for laddoo's again now.

On AR annual day while going to hall how Arnav said to Khushi that he was in relation with girl and she was married but still they have relation and how Khushi felt pain and jealous. Loved how Arnav and Khushi's speech and loved their dance and how Poor Khushi went to rest room and cried her heart out and how she got to know from Payal that Arnav loved her from past 8 years and how Khushi cried feeling his hurt and pain in all these years. Loved how After knowing about Arnav's love for her how she flirt with him openly surprising him from that day. Loved whole part Arnav, Khushi, Payal and Aakash spent time together and how Khuhi has to sleep in Arnav's room and how she was angry as he didn't bring her as per his wish but because of no choice.

Arnav wanted to pacify Khushi and asked Aman to decorate porch with bed of flowers and because of his misunderstanding he made decorations in Arnav's room and how Khushi surprised to see decorations and Arnav gifted her first lehenga which was designed by him and how after her wearing Lehenga , how he carried away in desires and took her to bed but Khushi stopped him because both didn't confessed love to each other and Arnav thought Khushi didn't like him and to avoided her he went business trip and when came back how he apologised for carried away and Khushi was angry on him as said sorry to her and gave food with extra spices and how Arnav mouth burnt and Khushi asked him to drink milk and Arnav refused saying he don't like milk and loved the way Khushi pour milk into her mouth and kissed Arnav and transferred milk to his mouth and kissed him again.

Loved the way Arnav and Khushi confessed their love to each other and you wrote confession very beautifully and loved their passionate kisses and how Arnav wanted to take slow to make love to her till she gets comfortable with his touches. Loved whole part of their outing to his favourite restaurant , dargah and his favourite and their romance and how Khushi realised that there is no need to change Arnav and he perfect as he is. Loved Khushi and Arnav hot Ice cream romance.

Aakash and Payal came to RM for Arnav's help as Payal was pregnant and Arnav helped them in pre phoning their marriage. Arnav said to Aakash and Payal to marry in his farmhouse and Aakash refused because he knew what farmhouse meant to Arnav but he said like always Khushi will handle him. Payal bridal lehenga was not ready and how Khushi encouraged Arnav to design lehenga for Payal. Arnav went to studio to design lehenga and how both missed each other and how Khushi drew Arnav eyes with heart even without looking him. ARnav had go back to studio and he left Khushi at her parents place and went to final touch up of lehenga. Khushi's parents said farmhouse is related with Arnav's parents and said to Khushi to search for artificial palm tree she will get surprise.

Arnav called Khushi after his work from RM and how Khushi said about her lonliness in her childhood away from her parents at London and how Arnav went to her parents house and to her room and how she shocked to see him and how he took her to RM. Khushi shared to Arnav how she felt and what she wanted when she was in London and how she stopped singing and painting and how he couldn't allow any one to touch her because she was missing Arnav from all those years as she was taken away from him.

Loved how Arnav designed a beautiful Lehenga for Khushi along with Payal and he wanted to surprise her. Loved how he invited Khushi's parents for Payal and Aakash wedding. Arnav and Khushi went to farmhouse and Khushi felt familiar with farm house and loved how Arnav shared his memories of each room to Khushi and about her parents and Di. Loved Arnav and Khushi convo and the way Khushi comforted and soothed Arnav and how Arnav cried his heart for his parents and Di.

Khushi packed her outfits for wedding secretly to make Arnav senseless. Arnav took Khushi to farm house. Loved how made decorated Payal and Aakash wedding mandap and hall as same as at their wedding time. Loved how Arnav showed her sangeet hall and how Khushi sang a song for him. On every pre marital rituals of Payal and Aakash loved the way Arnav and Khushi celebrated sangeet, mehendi and haldi privately in their own way with lot of romance.

Loved how Aakash and Payal wanted Arnav to perform rituals as Payal's brother. Payal and Aakash married. Loved how Arnav proposed Khushi again for marriage and engaged again and married her Again. Loved how Khushi thanked her papa for giving Arnav to her and how Sashi said he knew Arnav loves her more than him from very young age. I felt like crying when Sashi gave Khushi's hand in Arnav's hand and apologised Khushi.

Loved the way Arnav took Khushi in private jet for honeymoon to Bali and loved the way you described the jet. Loved how Arnav gifted a Yacht with her name K and said he don't want to remove the memories of them from it which they are going to make and the yacht remain to them even if they use it or not second time. Loved the way you described yacht.

Loved how Arnav gifted Lehenga and how Khushi was happy knowing that he designed it for her not for Payal. Loved their first night sizzling, sensual passionate love making.
Loved the way Arnav said he survived without his parents but he don't think he would live without her and loved how Khushi said to him that she is his, always has been his and her promise for life and there is and never will be anything more important than him in her life.

Arnav and Khushi went to private Island to spend their honeymoon and loved their passionate romance. Arnav and Khushi went into swimming pool and Khushi remembered the part of childhood Arnav saving her hut himself. Loved how Arnav and Khushi went to annual feast and made Khushi enjoy it. Loved their whole honey moon and their passionate love makings which you expressed excellent words. Loved he also bought house at Island which they spend their honeymoon too as Arnav don't want anyone remove their memories. Arnav and Khushi came back to India from honey moon.

Loved how Arnav heard Khushi and her mom conversation of karvachauth and how he searched for his mothers belongings in whole RM and farmhouse also but he couldn't find anything. Loved how he went to Garima and asked did she have anything his mother gave her as he wanted to gift in behalf of his mother. Loved how she gave him saree and necklace gifted by his mom on the day of Khushi's naming ceremony. Loved Khushi's reaction for his gifts of his mom on Karvachauth.

Arnav when searching files he found his dad's letter and read again and called Sashi to meet him at his penthouse and he felt because of him Khushi's life snatched away from her. Arnav confronted Sashi and loved how he supported Khushi and Khushi came there and tried to stop both of them argument but Arnav wanted to hear truth from Sashi and cursed himself for whatever Khushi missed in her whole life. Arnav came to the same beach and same place he came 8 years back and Khushi followed him and came there and loved he spoke with concern for Khushi of not having parents with her from childhood and Khushi said she hated her parents thinking they hated her but when she came back from New York she got to know how much they loved her. Arnav said the reasons why he don't like children and Khushi felt sad but she decided that Arnav is more important than non-existing children.

Loved how Arnav went to Sashi's house and learn from Sashi full truth of sending Khushi awy from them and he invited them to RM and asked them to stay with them as Khushi can stay with them and get love for the missing time. Loved how Arnav surprised Khushi to making her open the doors for her parents and loved the way he allotted his parents room for them. Loved how Arnav and Khushi went to farm house and found artificial Palm tree and trunk which contained memories of their childhood engagement and pictures of Arnav with his mom dad and Di and Loved all video clips of their childhood.

Arnav and Khushi are going to complete two years of their marriage next day and Arnav was thinking how Khushi became silent and smiling but which is not reaching her eyes and she distanced herself from him emotionally and Physically and he wanted to gift her something which makes her happy. Arnav remembered how Khushi was happy when she sensed Payal's baby first kick and she was happy when they went to shopping for Payal's unborn baby clothes and she was happy when she held Payal's baby in her arms first time and how he was jealous of Aakash when Palak called him as baba. Arnav now realised Khushi's need for baby and he also wanted their symbol of their love and how he decided what to gift Khushi for their anniversary and how he bought same frock which Khushi choose for Payal's baby.

Poor Khushi distanced herself from Arnav and she avoided making love from past 5 months and she was frustrated and in distress for not able to suppress her desire of having baby and avoiding Arnav's intimacy. Khushi took appointment with doctor for permanent birth control and glad the doctor knows Arnav and she informed him and he was angry and felt like he was cheated and went to hospital and took her from there to farm house and Khushi realised what blunder she would have been done if Arnav didn't come on time and she cried her heart out.
Loved how Arnav comforted her and talked to her about their problem and accepted for baby and love how he gifted her frock and how Khushi was happy.

Khushi is pregnant and loved the way she told about her pregnancy to Arnav and how much he was happy. Loved the way Arnav took care of Khushi and how they got to know they are going to have triplets. Loved how Khushi said to Arnav that his mom,dad and di is going to come back as their kids. As Khushi said she delivered 2 girls and 1 boy.

Loved the two epilogues very much. Loved the names of Arnav and Khushi babies. Arsh, Ashi and Aishi. Arnav once who said he don' want children now he is a perfect father. Loved how he handled children and helps Khushi. Loved the way children called him papa and dad for fist time, its so adorable and it is big and best moment for parents.

Loved how Arnav reacted when principal complained about Arsh using bad word and how Arsh was nervous and Khushi Arnav comforted him. Loved how Ashi and Aishi said they fought with their classmates on commenting Arsh. Loved the children bonding. Khushi was nervous as Arnav asked to explain about "sex" word and thinking how to explain it to kids but he way Arnav explained them is excellent. Loved the way Arsh understood her mumma might have cried for him was very touching and Arnav got a slap from Khushi after long time because of talking about leaving her.
Loved how Ashi and Aishi started to serve food for their parents and also started learning to cook special dishes for them on weekends and Wow Arsh is hooked to Payal and Aakash second daughter MIsthi, Another love story on the way.

Loved Arnav and khushi bonding with their children.

Wonderful and amazing story with perfect epilogue👏


Edited by sudhareddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
U knw i read a lot of storys till date but dis story taught me how life can be beautiful if u try 2 make it beautiful... each and evry part of it had reality hidden underneath it superb...
from chapter 1 2 epilogue loved it dear its sad i cud not comment on each and evrythg i lykd abt dis story as i found out abt dis story a week ago
but dis story is going 2 be a mentor for me trust me when i say dis anway loved it write a new story plss and do pm me

and u did justice 2 arshi superb plsss write a new ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely story
It is truly amazing
The emotion of every character was potrayed beautifully
It was written beautifully
Loved it very much
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finaly its finshed and it was the best jorney thru
The dawn of the dawn...i must say you are the
Best writer among those who are now stars in
Everyones eyes cozzz each n every word u wrote is
Breathtaking awsummm very emotional very
Loving very sensable plzzz gv me ur other work
It will be honour!!!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
A very beautiful story. Loved it

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