ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn #10 - REMOVED - Page 89

awesome, superb story just loved it :)

What an epilogue. This was one of my fav story ever will miss it terribly and you r an incredible writer !!

that was the best epilogue i have ever read...

hi deepthi daling!
u r rocking yaar!
i wonder how do u manage to write perfectly and also very fast updates...
i love it...
i love the quotes at the end...
so ...cute how the kids are listening to arnav when he is teaching about seeds and soil😉
this is a most cherishable FF for me...
i like to read this again if time permits..

His care towards khushi during pregnancy...and ur description is so nice that i felt as if i m watching them...garima's fears abt her daughter...u did nt leave a single point yaar...kids, parents, wife, husband, friendship, love, siblings...tooo nice...looking forward for this type of FF again after the valiant knight ff😊

This was awesome .. I can't believe that it has finally ended .. The whole family description was so touching .. Well done Just a thought .. I think u shud start the story of Arsh and Mishti now ;)

Very fitting epilogue. A lot of wise, mature words about what love in afamily is all about. Somewhere we tend to pass it off in our struggle for a more secure future & miss out on securing a present foundation of love & respect that will be a support whatever the future.

unres here 100096992
sorry Di...

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

Arsh, Aashi, Aishi...beautiful names...
Arnav was talking to his son of 14 months about THEIR ALONE TIME...LOL...and Arsh's smirk...Gosh, this is awesome...
loved how Shashi-Garima finally became Arnav's Papa-Amma...beautifully said Di...
the picture of Arnav sitting with all kids on his lap, the babies are munching baby puff...Awe...so adorable...and the kids call Dad-Papa-Mumma, all on same day...Awe...such a happy moment in their parents life...so cute...
and Shashi-Arnav duo trying to tease the ladies was superb...

The school authority created such a scene just because Arsh asked that question...its ridiculous...why this word has to b such taboo...
loved how Arnav-Khushi defended Arsh...supported him because it was not his fault...
not only that how beautifully Arnav explained it to the kids...told them how they shouldnt say the word to other...WOW...
and when Aashi told her grandpartents what are they gonna be taught...ROLF...it was hilarious...
Also ArShi moments as always were too good to describe with words...

loved the bond between siblings...children with their parents...and how each of them has grown up to an admirable person...and your words Di...so true...seedhe dil ko chhu liya...B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.

Sorry Di, I am so late...if I've known this would happen I never res-ed, but comment directly...I really felt so bad for doing this...but I know, meri Di naraz nahi honge, she understands...love you...

And thank you so much for this amazing story...it was a fabulous journey...both on&off-IF...this story has given me you, Pooji, Lala, Chetna, Astha Di, Meenu... so many friends, who have become more than just frinds to me now...THANK YOU Di...dil se...

Beautiful end to a beautiful story
Thank u for giving us a yet another awesome arhi story
Thank sooo much
Take care