#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 88

ok so she has worn burkha and changed her voice bt yet he felt dat it was her great plan
let see wat happens next
do update soon

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Its ok dear...i understand... Take care and have proper rest...

thanks a lot jeenia for understanding😊

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear...
will wit for tomorrow.
good night and TC...

thanks for waiting dear😊

as I promised I'm going to comment in detail

awesome update as always😊
loved it
first as you said ... Its not going to hurt anyone's sentiments dear... If it does they should understand its a story and they should not take it serious..
now coming to the update...!!!!!
the start is nice...
astha 's joy and her jumping.
loved gauri there

Control Astha...Gauri held her hands...now this jumping is no more safe for you..you are going to be mother now...


liked this
loved varun and gauri there... Convincing astha to take care of her health and not doing job...loved it
then shlok and varun part was super good
poor shlok sad that astha didn't tell him before going
then varun's anger on shlok ... Wrote beautifully
then gauri slip of tongue ...

Varun gave her angry look to control her tongue...

and she covered it
and the land lady part was good
the diamond ring part is superb and then varun killing looks to her🤣
then astha and shlok part is awesome

She entered the room.it was still same as it was when Shlok had shown her on Valentine's Day... A tear rolled over her face on seeing their happy pictures there...then she saw Shlok sleeping peacefully on bed ... He had placed something on his chest. Astha slowly went near Shlok without making any noise and picked the paper...it was their picture hugging each other... A smile appeared on Astha's face with tears...
As she tried to take pic away, her hand accidentally brushed with shlok's hand...Astha...he whispered in his sleep...
Astha stopped for a moment and caressed his face...
I...I love you Astha... I Love you very much... Shlok whispered...
Astha understood, he is in deep sleep...he is thinking it is a dream...it gave a bit confidence to her...
I love you too Shlok... Astha too spoke placing a kiss on his forehead...
When Shlok held her hand... Itni gussa ho jaan mujhse, ek baar mili bhi nahi mujhse jane se pehle?
That why I am here now jaan.. She whispered... I can't stay away from you...
I too Astha...please never leave me...Shlok had pulled her a bit closer...
How can you think, I will ever leave you... Astha spoke placing her head on his chest...unknown to Astha, when sleep took over her and she was sleeping in Shlok's arms peacefully...
Varun and Gauri came to check Astha and a smile appeared on their face seeing them sleeping into each other's arms...
What if Shlok get up? Gauri was worried...
Don't worry, he will get up in the morning only and i will wake up Astha before that ...saying they closed the door...
Varun woke Astha early In the morning before Shlok and Astha left from there giving a good morning peck on Shlok's cheek...
After sometime Shlok too got up with a smile on his face...
Ahaan...very happy today? Varun smiled when their servant brought tea for them...
Ya, really I am very happy today...Shlok smiled...last night Astha was with me...
What? Varun was a bit shocked...
I mean, in my dream... But it was so real... just like she is here with me only just next to me...you know Varun, I am really feeling too much fresh, too happy today...
A smile appeared on Varun's face on listening...finally our mission is on success route...he thought to himself...just two months Shlok, then she will be really here for you...


loved the whole above part

superb
continue soon

as I said I commented dear..
and once again thanks for waiting

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

😉 sorry quoted the comment two time, did it by mistake... so thought of saying something.. need teaser this week.. you cant skip it... plzzz i know its too early to say but still...😳

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Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

NICE UPDATE

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

ok so she has worn burkha and changed her voice bt yet he felt dat it was her great plan
let see wat happens next
do update soon

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update as always😊
loved it
first as you said ... Its not going to hurt anyone's sentiments dear... If it does they should understand its a story and they should not take it serious..
now coming to the update...!!!!!
the start is nice...
astha 's joy and her jumping.
loved gauri there

Control Astha...Gauri held her hands...now this jumping is no more safe for you..you are going to be mother now...


liked this
loved varun and gauri there... Convincing astha to take care of her health and not doing job...loved it
then shlok and varun part was super good
poor shlok sad that astha didn't tell him before going
then varun's anger on shlok ... Wrote beautifully
then gauri slip of tongue ...

Varun gave her angry look to control her tongue...

and she covered it
and the land lady part was good
the diamond ring part is superb and then varun killing looks to her🤣
then astha and shlok part is awesome

She entered the room.it was still same as it was when Shlok had shown her on Valentine's Day... A tear rolled over her face on seeing their happy pictures there...then she saw Shlok sleeping peacefully on bed ... He had placed something on his chest. Astha slowly went near Shlok without making any noise and picked the paper...it was their picture hugging each other... A smile appeared on Astha's face with tears...
As she tried to take pic away, her hand accidentally brushed with shlok's hand...Astha...he whispered in his sleep...
Astha stopped for a moment and caressed his face...
I...I love you Astha... I Love you very much... Shlok whispered...
Astha understood, he is in deep sleep...he is thinking it is a dream...it gave a bit confidence to her...
I love you too Shlok... Astha too spoke placing a kiss on his forehead...
When Shlok held her hand... Itni gussa ho jaan mujhse, ek baar mili bhi nahi mujhse jane se pehle?
That why I am here now jaan.. She whispered... I can't stay away from you...
I too Astha...please never leave me...Shlok had pulled her a bit closer...
How can you think, I will ever leave you... Astha spoke placing her head on his chest...unknown to Astha, when sleep took over her and she was sleeping in Shlok's arms peacefully...
Varun and Gauri came to check Astha and a smile appeared on their face seeing them sleeping into each other's arms...
What if Shlok get up? Gauri was worried...
Don't worry, he will get up in the morning only and i will wake up Astha before that ...saying they closed the door...
Varun woke Astha early In the morning before Shlok and Astha left from there giving a good morning peck on Shlok's cheek...
After sometime Shlok too got up with a smile on his face...
Ahaan...very happy today? Varun smiled when their servant brought tea for them...
Ya, really I am very happy today...Shlok smiled...last night Astha was with me...
What? Varun was a bit shocked...
I mean, in my dream... But it was so real... just like she is here with me only just next to me...you know Varun, I am really feeling too much fresh, too happy today...
A smile appeared on Varun's face on listening...finally our mission is on success route...he thought to himself...just two months Shlok, then she will be really here for you...


loved the whole above part

superb
continue soon