#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: khuwahish
SUPERB...

Thanks a lot dear

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Riddhima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

naa hai ye pana naa khona hi hai
tera, naa hona jane kyu ho na hi hai...

awesome jeenia...i fall in love with your every update...this was also superb update dear...aashka hmmm very nice name coz my bff name also aashka...and now aastha aashka bann k shlok k paas humesha rahegi...i was worried after two mounts jab shlok ko pata chalega about her pragnancy...he must be very angry on her...but i love aastha she is truly love with shlok apne sare dreams ko sacrifice karna kisi k liye, usi ki zindgi jeena usi ki nazaro se ye mohobbat ki inteha hoti hai...varun's plan working...that's great...and i love last part...that was too romantic...

!! tamaam umar intezar rha jiska
Wo aya bhi to mere sone ke bad,

Tum aao kabhi dastak do dar-e-dil par
Pyar pehley se kam ho to shikayat karna...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
naa hai ye pana naa khona hi hai
tera, naa hona jane kyu ho na hi hai...

awesome jeenia...i fall in love with your every update...this was also superb update dear...aashka hmmm very nice name coz my bff name also aashka...and now aastha aashka bann k shlok k paas humesha rahegi...i was worried after two mounts jab shlok ko pata chalega about her pragnancy...he must be very angry on her...but i love aastha she is truly love with shlok apne sare dreams ko sacrifice karna kisi k liye, usi ki zindgi jeena usi ki nazaro se ye mohobbat ki inteha hoti hai...varun's plan working...that's great...and i love last part...that was too romantic...

!! tamaam umar intezar rha jiska
Wo aya bhi to mere sone ke bad,

Tum aao kabhi dastak do dar-e-dil par
Pyar pehley se kam ho to shikayat karna...

I love Aashka name... and moreover it resembled Astha... shlok will feel connection soon with this name ...
Thanks for liking the update...

Jab shlok ko pta chalega tab chalega...abhi to let him enjoy with Aashka at day and with astha at night...😆 nothing yr...he needs a friend who ca listen about astha and he will get... this will just deepen their love...
Yes, Varun's stupid plan worked, even shlok felt so...but could not recognize...

Great, har baat ke liye shayari hai apke pass...
Wo aye bhi to hamre sone ke bad... good.keep it up...

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

i love this hide and seek love

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: roshanii
i love this hide and seek love

Thanks a lot dear...

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mmjjppss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Hi jeenia i m very late today... i started reading but one after the other all wer disturbing... so just now finished reading after thousands oh hurdles...

Now abou the update goood as usual but i felt how long can they hide this... even though its for 3months its quite a long period... he ll. Find out... nd wat if shlok. Conditon becomes bad due to missing astha...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: mmjjppss
Hi jeenia i m very late today... i started reading but one after the other all wer disturbing... so just now finished reading after thousands oh hurdles...
Now abou the update goood as usual but i felt how long can they hide this... even though its for 3months its quite a long period... he ll. Find out... nd wat if shlok. Conditon becomes bad due to missing astha...

Yes, you are right,, they can't for long...but let them try na...and just wait, may be shlok will get some companion that will make him miss astha less...moreover he is feeling na astha is around him...
Let few days pass yet..and may be Astha will visit him if such condition rises about his health...
all i can say...just wait for next updates...

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priyavin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#858

So sweet...

Really loved the way Shlok recognised Astha's touch. He is feeling fresh just sensing Astha. Hope he accepts her decision

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: priyavin
So sweet...

Really loved the way Shlok recognised Astha's touch. He is feeling fresh just sensing Astha. Hope he accepts her decision

Thanks a lot dear.ya he recognizes her touch, he feels like she is around...
Just wait for his decision...

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#860

superb and lovely update...varun's plan was really good enjoyed that part sooo much ...loved the part where shlok feels astha's presence ...loved their beautiful moments...it's really going beautifully dear...this is for u dear...