#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 77

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -LECHU-

just read all parts now...

so our guesses were right na?😉
and dont get me wrong,i very well understood that
you were trying to keep up the surprise
by telling us that "our guesses are not right,keep
waiting...guess more...etc...😉"
i know you are the biggest teaser i had known yet😆

and coming to the updates...
awsome as usual...
the way shlok refused to get intimate with her even in his
subconscious mind...
the way astha said he is making me fall for him more
just touched
now they regain their friendship
its just a mask for both...
for their individual self,
their feelings for each other had reached beyond love
to a stage of pure divinity...
you know when our teachers ake us to the oncology dept
my mind always become numb
when all patients of other wards lie there with a new hope

these people lay there tear drained..their hopes gradually
fading to nothingness...
however doctors assure them of hope
the nearness of the word "death" makes rest part of their
life like "living like a dead body"-there is life
but no emotions,hope,happiness..
all become blurred...

iam extremely sorry dear..got overboard
iam a sensitive person
this story is close to my heart
i still requesting you for a happy ending
i want a strong shlok fighting his fate for astha
instead og giving up...
may be he doesnt show it to the world
but mental i want him to fight for his love...
and their hug was so ethereal
the way you showed their povs
just heart touching...

But for one moment
time gave pause
to a lover's lost bouquet

Fragrance of the past
whimsical whiff of essence
takes me back to you

Like opiate memories
escape the distant mist
a tear drops in silence...


Lying alone and shedding tears..
Have you heard the song of my heart,
which is melting in a useless dream

Gazing at the half closed door
of my life,my hopes...
still dreaming of you...my love

Still dreaming of you
o my beloved ...
entwined in your memories...

From where i wish
i want no seperation
until my last breath...

WITH LOT OF LOVE

LECHU

i dont know when i would be able to comment next.

so i took extra long time to give you this comment😊

but whole hearty wishes for your coming updates🤗🤗




Thanks a lot for getting time to read updates dear...i really appreciate your efforts...ya, i know all had guessed but i just hid to make some craze... today's was also almost guessed, she will go for artificial insemination, i didn't make her go for that at first instance, as i just wanted to write how much shlok feel for her...

I can feel how it feels in such departments, i had seen one of my aunt struggling with cancer , life is like hopeless...moreover when her look changed, her hair completely lost, body was like skeleton...
but this is a story , not real life, everything is fine in the end...
yet lets see, if shlok keeps his hopes high or not and moreover will astha be able to support him and make him get his hopes again and when?
ya i know you are busy, don;t worry , read the updates whenever you get time...don't forget, you are always loved and missed after each update... because i miss these small sized red words in my feedback forms...


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Posted: 11 years ago
100 pages jeenia...congrats yaar...I m sooo happy you are rocks...and sorry for late reply...
I must say that was superb update...I like aastha and Shlok part they are friends again hiding there tears...awww...and party time that was a very nice song...actually it's my caller tune too...after so much rona dhona we get ashlok's cute moment...thanks to you. ...and Aastha's pregnancy...good news for everyone and Shlok don't know anything, he is confused...sabar ka fal meetha hota hai Mr.shlok...hmmm varun and gauri they both are sweetheart...lovely...and now varun has plan also...😆 Shlok ki company ka bura asar hua hai bechare pe...well what plan it is...??? Waiting for your next update...

Arz kia hai...

!!! Usne Pucha Mere Bina Jee Loge...????
Saans Ruk Chuki Thi...Wo Samjhe Hum Shoch Rahe Hai...!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

100 pages jeenia...congrats yaar...I m sooo happy you are rocks...and sorry for late reply...

I must say that was superb update...I like aastha and Shlok part they are friends again hiding there tears...awww...and party time that was a very nice song...actually it's my caller tune too...after so much rona dhona we get ashlok's cute moment...thanks to you. ...and Aastha's pregnancy...good news for everyone and Shlok don't know anything, he is confused...sabar ka fal meetha hota hai Mr.shlok...hmmm varun and gauri they both are sweetheart...lovely...and now varun has plan also...😆 Shlok ki company ka bura asar hua hai bechare pe...well what plan it is...??? Waiting for your next update...

Arz kia hai...

!!! Usne Pucha Mere Bina Jee Loge...????
Saans Ruk Chuki Thi...Wo Samjhe Hum Shoch Rahe Hai...!!!!




Tu chahta hai, hum chale jaayein...
Hum tere samne bhi honge, aur tere karib bhi...
Tujhe chaheinge bhi aur tujhe payenge bhi...
tu jane ya na jane...tujhe hum apni sans mein bhi basayenge...


thanks for liking the update...
ji haan sabar ka fal meetha hi hota hai, lets wait what is here now...
varun's plan? tomorrow... ok i promise, a happy update tomorrow...

thnaks a lot dear


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Posted: 11 years ago


Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
u have to update daily now.. kahani mai aaya romanchak mod.. pathko ki bhaari maang pay karna hi pdega aapko roz update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
another beautiful update...loved the pregnancy test lines...where shlok wishes her...loved their moments... if only one can feel . .their relation is sooo beautiful...waiting eagerly for next update...love u dear. .. and forgive me for short comment ...not feeling well today ...so m so lazy to type today ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazygul

u have to update daily now.. kahani mai aaya romanchak mod.. pathko ki bhaari maang pay karna hi pdega aapko roz update..



Ji hum roz hi update karte hain...bus padne wale chahiye...jin ke liye hum aur likh payein...
Jab tak pathak milenge hum likhenge...except weekend s...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meerab147

another beautiful update...loved the pregnancy test lines...where shlok wishes her...loved their moments... if only one can feel . .their relation is sooo beautiful...waiting eagerly for next update...love u dear. .. and forgive me for short comment ...not feeling well today ...so m so lazy to type today ...


Thanks a lot dear...yes their relationship is no doubt...beautiful...and now they have to hide astha from shlok keeping her near to him...
Get well soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Thanks a lot dear...yes their relationship is no doubt...beautiful...and now they have to hide astha from shlok keeping her near to him...
Get well soon dear...

thank u sooo much dear...for ur wishes...and thanks again for using the banner...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meerab147

thank u sooo much dear...for ur wishes...and thanks again for using the banner...



No...I m thankful to you meerab...this is the first time...I added pics or banner in my story...

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